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I'm really enjoying this fanfic, just some grammatical errors that are bothersome but nothing too big. loving the plot, seen some stories try to do the whole muggle and wizard union thing. but it usually is way too forced or ends up with the magical side just brainwashing to accomplish peaceful cooperations. hopeful to see what kind of plot you develop in that regard
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It was wonderful story but MC start licking Harry Potter's boot and spoon feeding him then I dropped it. For first few chapters I can give story 4.5 star.
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I just found this story, and I'm caught up in it. Even if you don't get much background on the MC at the beginning, this story doesn't need it at all. Supplemental little to no grammar errors and logic errors. This story is definitely worth a try.
Original idea, well made by the author ! The protagonist is clever, charismatic and a little antagonist. Keep updating ! [img=strong][img=recommend]
I'm really enjoying this fanfic, just some grammatical errors that are bothersome but nothing too big. loving the plot, seen some stories try to do the whole muggle and wizard union thing. but it usually is way too forced or ends up with the magical side just brainwashing to accomplish peaceful cooperations. hopeful to see what kind of plot you develop in that regard
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It was wonderful story but MC start licking Harry Potter's boot and spoon feeding him then I dropped it. For first few chapters I can give story 4.5 star.
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I just found this story, and I'm caught up in it. Even if you don't get much background on the MC at the beginning, this story doesn't need it at all. Supplemental little to no grammar errors and logic errors. This story is definitely worth a try.
Original idea, well made by the author ! The protagonist is clever, charismatic and a little antagonist. Keep updating ! [img=strong][img=recommend]