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I just want to ask that ' beyond the journey ' is a part of your fic [img=strong][img=strong] if yes then ♥ ✨ 💖 💗 💕 ❤ ♥
Nice story so far, definitely not the cliche Harry Potter fanfic. Author introduced nice OC’s and the MC is written well. Unlike most HP fic’s, the MC is generally a mentally stable guy who’s a little shameless when it comes to money but that only adds to his charm. Grammar is good too, hopefully there will be stable updates. If anything my only criticism would be that the pacing is a little slow (25 chapters in and it’s only beginning the first year). All in all though, great FF, looking forward to future updates
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It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good story/plot and great translate/english.. I like that MC/Kain is 1 year ahead of Harry.. So he can have his own story, not just follow Harry or Golden Trio.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍
I just want to ask that ' beyond the journey ' is a part of your fic [img=strong][img=strong] if yes then ♥ ✨ 💖 💗 💕 ❤ ♥
Nice story so far, definitely not the cliche Harry Potter fanfic. Author introduced nice OC’s and the MC is written well. Unlike most HP fic’s, the MC is generally a mentally stable guy who’s a little shameless when it comes to money but that only adds to his charm. Grammar is good too, hopefully there will be stable updates. If anything my only criticism would be that the pacing is a little slow (25 chapters in and it’s only beginning the first year). All in all though, great FF, looking forward to future updates
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It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a good story/plot and great translate/english.. I like that MC/Kain is 1 year ahead of Harry.. So he can have his own story, not just follow Harry or Golden Trio.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍😍😍😍