Danmachi - Depthless Hunger

LV 3

Keyaruga_Tsuki

Ahem. 1:Writing quality was definitely upgraded after chapter 10.Everything flowed smoother and it was less confusing over all the writing quality took an extreme jump after chapter 10 and it was for the better.Im very much interested in the story and have caught up since my last review. 2:Story development is still around the same mark but it is starting to move and push onwards.Very interesting things have happened and the main cast is starting to appear this is going to get good.So these recent chapters have been great. 3:Character Design back in my last review it was awful BUT...now that I've caught up, I must say this is a very unique character Design and for that it deserves 5 stars.His evolution is awesome and his character Design incorporates that and I love it. 4:Updating stability this time around its a 3 star.You took a long break I don't know what happened but maybe that was just me.Im very sure you stopped uploading for awhile though but so far you're doing good so I'll see what happens in the future. 5:World background is pretty good.Many characters are being introduced and they all have their own way of thinking and their own speculation towards the Mc from their interactions.I like it. Overall: After chapter 10 the story has gone up and further upwards. 📊.I give it a proper 4.2 stars.It needs improvement on the writing quality but it's okay you aren't a veteran writer so it's fine any further improvement would be shocking but most definitely welcomed.As for Story development it's a 5 many things have happened and you will never guess what until u read so I suggest u read.Character Design is a 5 you can't go further than that. Updating stability again it's a 3, You took a long break.World background is a 4 the main cast is starting to show up so the ball is just now starting to roll.You should read the story its a very good fanfic.

LV 3

FangYuan1234

Have u ever seen a Danmachi fic without romance without romance? Well, you are about to. Let's explore the dungeon like it was never explored in the original, shall we? Who knows, maybe we will reach the end someday.

LV 14

Regret1ess

Only 3 chapters available currently but great so far and you get exactly what you read in the description, plus the authors username is literally Fang Yuan so you know you’re getting a good protag Gonna to stockpile some chapters then sit back, relax, and enjoy 👍

LV 4

True_Vanity

Mc doesn’t shower!

LV 4

Dummydumdum1

Danmachi but delicoious in duengueon haha love it already and no harem is a plus!

LV 3

Keyaruga_Tsuki

The writing quality is honestly what made me stpp reading it.Yeah it's not bad but damn it isn't good either.Maybe I've read to many high quality Fanfics or maybe I'm just not in the mood.I don't know but the writing quality is turning me off at least for now. story development: It's as much as you'll expect from any fanfic.So far it's okay??Nothing outstanding but nothing Bad either 3 stars. Character Design:It's at a 2 star I don't know what he looks like.All we know is he's got a shirt and short pants when he got in the world but now it's all gone..or uh "tattered prices of clothing". So that's a 2 star should be a 1 since the only thing we did know was what he was wearing but not anymore. Updating stability: Honestly I don't know much about it so I just put a default 4 stars. World Background: It's danmachi but since he's in the dungeon we don't get much of the world background and we don't get any descriptions of the Dugeon and what it looks like. So this is a 3 star...again I should've put it as a 1 but I'm not mean. overall: I've been really trying to find a danmachi fanfic that has the writing quality of "In danmachi with plasmids" My only issue with that fanfic is that it's Harem and i just can't bring myself to like Harem.Thats just weird to me. Overall though for this particular fanfic 2.8 is the rating.Writing quality not good and not bad..Grammar definitely needs some checking maybe add some commas here and there.Misspelling isn't bad but it's hard to understand without commas I have to reread everything just to make sure u didn't say "The goblin bit my neck with it's teeth and i stopped bleeding" I was hell of confused so writing quality is a 2 star.It will be a 3 star when grammar gets added and 4 star when the writing improves overall. In the end I say Read at your own discretion.

LV 13

cocobum

Coconut certified hood classic.

LV 1

Hunab_ku

I wonder when you will see a normal fanfic where the protagonist has no system and is not a protagonist with some trick and is normal... that takes 3 years to 1 year to level up

LV 1

TeuPai

Meu irmão, eu ainda nao li seu fanfic mas só pela sinopse eu já gostei, então eu espero grandes coisas... Espero q tenha mais pessoas com esse tipo de pensamentos

LV 1

Elemise

[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

........................................

LV 3

Friendly_Immortal

Badly written with having good grammar but too much information dump as author even started explaining small details of what monsters would be thinking and what is thinking all the time, etc. He's like a madman thrown into this world just to devour everything without care of anything else.

LV 4

ZhairJc

The thing about eating monsters reminds me of an Anime XD ~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^^~^~^~^^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^ ~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^^~^~^~^~^~^

LV 3

AKASHIIIi

I love these main characters💘 /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\ /\/\

LV 1

Master_Of_gu

An exciting novel with a cruel, dark, evil and rational MC character. A more realistic world where people act intelligently and cautiously is something special.

LV 1

DaoistYtGehL

I want more stories like I want more stories like this, it has a good plot (I personally liked it), an interesting character, and it was generally interesting to read, given that I have not been interested in much lately, and I read this in a couple of days

LV 1

Ciro_Llanivelli

I love it. This si the first fanfic of danmachi i read without romance, the way to explain the motivations of the mc its very enjoyable, i a scale of 1 to 10 of world building around the dungeon i put a 9.5. Very good worl athor keep going.