My Descendants Are My Power

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Tristan_Zi

We really need your help with our story. Could you send over pictures of what you think the main character and their friends look like, their character designs? I'm going to take a little shortcut here—if I see any cool ones, I'll just use them and make sure to credit the source. Thanks a bunch!

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Tristan_Zi

Creating is not easy, and I hope for everyone's support. If there's anything incorrect, please feel free to criticize and correct me. Thank you.

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burntcracker

it's a pretty neat idea behind the story but the language the author uses ruins the immersion consistently and it's honestly extremely annoying at times... I don't think extremely formal writing is a necessity but this story is entirely informal and filled with random slang(mostly outdated slang too) that doesn't fit into the scenarios and almost feels like it's a forced attempt at an ongoing joke that isn't working very well

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FallenAngeI

Romance? Har*m? Yuri? NTR?

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Axi3

Fantastic 🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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PearCub

nice story author keep up the good work.

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No_Mans_english

novel is so good I got lost in reading it I honestly lost track of the time while reading this I would recommend reading

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Ethan132

A really solid story with lots of potential, looking forward to seeing how it develops :) thank you author!

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Terry_Ross

I'm scared. Are future generation books all going to be like this? If so, the brainrot will spread if people are forced to read new books written like this. Good premise, I can kinda support it by saying, hey, they're basically hyped up farmers who've never had proper schooling for their speech.The system doing it is something else...

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Knightolegend

Onverall, a pretty good novel, the only thing that kinda sucks is that the powering level system is confusing as all get out. You might need an AUX chapter with the power levels and the life expectancy of each realm. Also there needs to be a better distinction on the different factions and races.

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Robert_Siems

The story is really nice, but the realms are just confusing and the cultivation system never really gets explained. Emerging ability, transcendent seed, developing skill realm... You also don't really know the difference in each realm besides that the higher the stronger you are. But that is just commen sense. Emerging ability also got called "false core realm" once. How the aptitudes work is also unclear you'd think more aptitudes are good but apparently having fewer is better. Why, is not explained. The differences between the aptitudes isn't explained as well. That's honestly my only complaint, the family and world building is just superb 👌 Its a real shame, the power system is just really messy.

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Tristan_Zi

There are quite a few names of descendants, so let me take a shortcut here by asking for everyone's input. If you're participating, please provide the name and family. Thank you all for your active participation.

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Dream_Lord14

Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass

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Sean_Morabito

This novel is a hidden gem. I absolutely love the concept. Good work so far author.

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Owen_Earl_Gonzales

although i read it around chapter 4 it is pretty interesting type of novel i admit it this was my first read of type of novel in which i managed to hook me up keep up author and please be a good story that's all.