4Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
Compartilhe seus pensamentos com outras pessoas
Escreva uma avaliação
can someone explain the system tag I've read 14ch i still can't see anything like that !
História tá parecendo interessante,só achei um pouco desanimador o MC não ter nenhum dedo de ouro fora a capacidade mágica que vai demorar muito para começar a ajudar ele em algo já que ele é humano e facilmente morto
Ok, the story is decent and the interactions and relationship-development between the characters is refreshing compared to other DxD ffs. The novel is definitely worth a read. HOWEVER, the writing quality needs editing. And I’m not talking about some small mistakes. You can see the author putting some work into the novel, and that’s commendable. But the sentence structure, some missing words (not often,but it’s there), general grammar and wording of some parts leaves some room for improvement. It’s a bit dicey to read (not so bad compared to certain ffs), definitely better as an audio-book (the writing is definitely more pleasant to the ear rather than visually). Overall, a decent read.
can someone explain the system tag I've read 14ch i still can't see anything like that !
História tá parecendo interessante,só achei um pouco desanimador o MC não ter nenhum dedo de ouro fora a capacidade mágica que vai demorar muito para começar a ajudar ele em algo já que ele é humano e facilmente morto
Ok, the story is decent and the interactions and relationship-development between the characters is refreshing compared to other DxD ffs. The novel is definitely worth a read. HOWEVER, the writing quality needs editing. And I’m not talking about some small mistakes. You can see the author putting some work into the novel, and that’s commendable. But the sentence structure, some missing words (not often,but it’s there), general grammar and wording of some parts leaves some room for improvement. It’s a bit dicey to read (not so bad compared to certain ffs), definitely better as an audio-book (the writing is definitely more pleasant to the ear rather than visually). Overall, a decent read.