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It's a good idea and mostly well-executed but to be honest it doesn't match my tastes. For example, I like the idea of schemes within schemes in the literature I read but the characters seem more upfront and don't seem to be working towards certain goals but otherwise pretty good.
well out of all the HP Fanfics this by far one of the best. I like how you made Sirius more grounded and more responsible. I like Harrys character, He's not the weak boy from cannon or the nxt dark lord, he also isnt a pervert or Arrogant.
It's a good idea and mostly well-executed but to be honest it doesn't match my tastes. For example, I like the idea of schemes within schemes in the literature I read but the characters seem more upfront and don't seem to be working towards certain goals but otherwise pretty good.
well out of all the HP Fanfics this by far one of the best. I like how you made Sirius more grounded and more responsible. I like Harrys character, He's not the weak boy from cannon or the nxt dark lord, he also isnt a pervert or Arrogant.