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great story so far, and also i wanted to say thanks for not dropping this book so far and i hope you won't dropped it either and keep writing this book till the end with more fantastic storyline development🔥🔥
The work is well-written, and the settings are well-crafted. However, unfortunately, the MC hasn’t had good mental progression since the first chapter. He’s very dense, takes actions for certain situations but doesn’t follow through, which makes things quite complicated. It’s a love-hate battle with this work—I recommend reading it, but be prepared.
I'm on chapter 40 and I see the tag r18 can anyone whose further ahead in the story let me know if there is r18 romance or is the tag just because of the violence?
Hi. I think the story is kind of exiting. I like stories where MC has some character development and not too OP from the start. Unfortunately the relationship between him and the heroins are bit simp. This is a harem novel , we have the best girls so I don't understand why some readers are complaining about the harem route. That's why most of us are here. So dear Author, 3 is not enough and maybe this is my only complain. I know that Lucas is the Mc but Riley shouldn't entrust his fate to others. Keep up the good work
Honestly the story’s writing and even premise is quite good, but two glaring issues lowers this novels rating quite a bit in my eyes. 1) The MC is essentially a lovestruck fool at the start with no real backbone to speak of. He throws himself into a deadly situation and is only saved by system bullshit, not to mention the “love” he feels is from when he saw those characters in the game. As in this guy legit fell in love with game characters to feel this way, and now, after being in their world, is almost fascilltating them being whisked away by the OG MC. The guys just kinda sad. 2) System punishes bim for not acting in certain ways, forces him to maintain the storyline. I hate those systems. Maybe the MC grows over time, but I really can’t bear to read someone like that for so long. It’s a shame cause the writings so good too.
honestly speaking I live how the transmigrated mc is so cooked cause he keeps attracting FLs while being married to a end game villainess. it's a spectacular story with very stable background and plot. can't wait for Riley to become stronger than the mc Lucas.
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one of the horrible starts to a novel i read... but picks up later on... doesn't draw u in completely as certain descriptions still make it feel like a game instead of reality.. but characters are improving.. and looking forward to the actual story and reasons behind his weird status
It a pretty good read. Though currently, I am super confused on the future of the story. Riley finished his first year, yet he isn't that powerful. Most of the main heroines can one shot him right now. Plus unlike Lucas his future potential is nonexistent. He already is level 100/150, yet he has no A ranked stat. By the time he reaches level 150, I doubt he would even have enough state points to make a single stat reach a S rank. So how in the world is he suppose to deal with Liyana in a year?The Mc really needs a major powerup, cuz he is weak with no future potential.
This novel is all I could ever ask for and some more. One of the rare A ones here. Btw author have you gotten a discord server? If yes then can I get an invite link?
The MC is highly submissive even if you don't like very aggressive characters, it's almost as if he has a secret c**kold fetish. It's almost a headache to seem through when a heroine is even ready to kiss the MC but he won't a take step cause fears a change in narrative of the story (which clearly already happened dude) and wishes that the heroine gets stolen by some other guy. Just take some responsibility of your actions and atleast respect their feelings as the original storyline is already screwed.
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Chapter 73: I don't know how to describe it... But the dialogue are super sticky and incongruent? They are unnatural, I don't know how to describe it, for examples "Ah, such fire in your words, my dear Snow. You've grown stronger since our last encounter, haven't you?" or "I've said this to you back at the airship, but you have grown beautiful, my child. You look more and more like your mother as time goes on..." I forgot some... They sounded super awkward when you read them loud. The writing style is also similarly unnatural, author used accessible prose, but he wrote it in a way that is extremely incongruent and disjointed because of the structure itself. Overall, the narrator don't sound human, neither does the character. Writing quality is 3/5 story developemnt 4/5 The story is 3/5 Character are 4/5 Dialogue 2/5 and overall 3/5
this novel was awfully similar and mixed of some villain kr novel. to the point when mc also become women for short time. i forgot the name. was it fated to be love by villain or other novel but damn i got the de javu reading this shit. (i belive the author will deleted this coment)
The MC is still too weak and I’m completely caught up. The author must change this. On the other hand I hear the WN admins are cracking down heavy on AI, especially if its used for more than editing. If only I had photo evidence…
One of the best books I've read in awhile. everything about it is amazing it has a nice variety in the heroines and the story just sucks you in and before you know it you've caught up to the most recent chapter
I’ll post another update on this review, but so far I’m 10 chapters in and it’s a struggle to continue. MC is boring, weak, and stupid. An honestly really unlikeable character, I’m really hoping there is a lot of character development because I won’t be able to continue if nothing changes. The world building and heroines seem interesting and that’s the only thing that’s kept my attention. If you look through any of the earlier chapter comments it’s only people talking shit about the MC, I was honestly suprised I saw so many 5 star reviews. Saying all that though I’m still gonna keep reading and give this book an honest chance. I’m really hoping this book turns out to be worth the effort it is to read it currently 😭
Very interesting. I just hope that author won't drop this halfway like the other novel...
Clearly, a very Korean inspired novel, especially with the whole academy and extra thing going on Author isn't even being very subtle about that fact lol, MC is a bit annoying but certainly understandable a pretty good and enjoyable read if you like Korean academy novels.
This novel, in my opinion, is just copied from the Korean novel the weakest demon hunter in the academy, live with it.......Oh, it's disappointing
It's a great read; I'm liking it pro now, even though it didn't take many chapters. I have a question, though, author: did your other novel abandon it? It's a novel I liked, "My Family In The Novel?"
Yes. The novel deserves 5 star. I like how author helps the reader to immerse themselves in the plot or any situation, and also I know how challenging it is write a harem genre with yanderes. Unlike other novel, this one actually portrays the girls yandere tendencies in detail - which is another plus. Anyways, I hope the author will not drop this in middle like other novel. Keep up the good work and good luck.
I started reading this with somewhat of a “I know it will be another cliche plot” but as i progressed further into the story, the depth and beauty of each character just captivated me to no end. And here I found myself immersed and determined to reach the end. A little bit of disappointing factor would be the bits of side character syndrome but he is slowly but surely somewhat outgrowing it. I love this in a way that it always catches you off guard and has that flavour of hanging you by the thread on looking forward to what is to come in the next chapter. Every factor is just so perfectly Balanced. Character development 10 Character background 10 No stupid input which in most stories do Fiction focused 10 Characters enigmatic charm 10 Character not a simp also 10 Thank you for such a beauty Mr Author. I appreciate your time for bringing such a beautiful story into existence.
Consider this review as the Q&A section. Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases. Do tell me your guys' thoughts.
great story so far, and also i wanted to say thanks for not dropping this book so far and i hope you won't dropped it either and keep writing this book till the end with more fantastic storyline development🔥🔥
The work is well-written, and the settings are well-crafted. However, unfortunately, the MC hasn’t had good mental progression since the first chapter. He’s very dense, takes actions for certain situations but doesn’t follow through, which makes things quite complicated. It’s a love-hate battle with this work—I recommend reading it, but be prepared.
I'm on chapter 40 and I see the tag r18 can anyone whose further ahead in the story let me know if there is r18 romance or is the tag just because of the violence?
Hi. I think the story is kind of exiting. I like stories where MC has some character development and not too OP from the start. Unfortunately the relationship between him and the heroins are bit simp. This is a harem novel , we have the best girls so I don't understand why some readers are complaining about the harem route. That's why most of us are here. So dear Author, 3 is not enough and maybe this is my only complain. I know that Lucas is the Mc but Riley shouldn't entrust his fate to others. Keep up the good work
Honestly the story’s writing and even premise is quite good, but two glaring issues lowers this novels rating quite a bit in my eyes. 1) The MC is essentially a lovestruck fool at the start with no real backbone to speak of. He throws himself into a deadly situation and is only saved by system bullshit, not to mention the “love” he feels is from when he saw those characters in the game. As in this guy legit fell in love with game characters to feel this way, and now, after being in their world, is almost fascilltating them being whisked away by the OG MC. The guys just kinda sad. 2) System punishes bim for not acting in certain ways, forces him to maintain the storyline. I hate those systems. Maybe the MC grows over time, but I really can’t bear to read someone like that for so long. It’s a shame cause the writings so good too.
honestly speaking I live how the transmigrated mc is so cooked cause he keeps attracting FLs while being married to a end game villainess. it's a spectacular story with very stable background and plot. can't wait for Riley to become stronger than the mc Lucas.
Revelar Spoiler one of the horrible starts to a novel i read... but picks up later on... doesn't draw u in completely as certain descriptions still make it feel like a game instead of reality.. but characters are improving.. and looking forward to the actual story and reasons behind his weird status
It a pretty good read. Though currently, I am super confused on the future of the story. Riley finished his first year, yet he isn't that powerful. Most of the main heroines can one shot him right now. Plus unlike Lucas his future potential is nonexistent. He already is level 100/150, yet he has no A ranked stat. By the time he reaches level 150, I doubt he would even have enough state points to make a single stat reach a S rank. So how in the world is he suppose to deal with Liyana in a year?The Mc really needs a major powerup, cuz he is weak with no future potential.
This novel is all I could ever ask for and some more. One of the rare A ones here. Btw author have you gotten a discord server? If yes then can I get an invite link?
The MC is highly submissive even if you don't like very aggressive characters, it's almost as if he has a secret c**kold fetish. It's almost a headache to seem through when a heroine is even ready to kiss the MC but he won't a take step cause fears a change in narrative of the story (which clearly already happened dude) and wishes that the heroine gets stolen by some other guy. Just take some responsibility of your actions and atleast respect their feelings as the original storyline is already screwed.
Revelar Spoiler Chapter 73: I don't know how to describe it... But the dialogue are super sticky and incongruent? They are unnatural, I don't know how to describe it, for examples "Ah, such fire in your words, my dear Snow. You've grown stronger since our last encounter, haven't you?" or "I've said this to you back at the airship, but you have grown beautiful, my child. You look more and more like your mother as time goes on..." I forgot some... They sounded super awkward when you read them loud. The writing style is also similarly unnatural, author used accessible prose, but he wrote it in a way that is extremely incongruent and disjointed because of the structure itself. Overall, the narrator don't sound human, neither does the character. Writing quality is 3/5 story developemnt 4/5 The story is 3/5 Character are 4/5 Dialogue 2/5 and overall 3/5
this novel was awfully similar and mixed of some villain kr novel. to the point when mc also become women for short time. i forgot the name. was it fated to be love by villain or other novel but damn i got the de javu reading this shit. (i belive the author will deleted this coment)
The MC is still too weak and I’m completely caught up. The author must change this. On the other hand I hear the WN admins are cracking down heavy on AI, especially if its used for more than editing. If only I had photo evidence…
One of the best books I've read in awhile. everything about it is amazing it has a nice variety in the heroines and the story just sucks you in and before you know it you've caught up to the most recent chapter
I’ll post another update on this review, but so far I’m 10 chapters in and it’s a struggle to continue. MC is boring, weak, and stupid. An honestly really unlikeable character, I’m really hoping there is a lot of character development because I won’t be able to continue if nothing changes. The world building and heroines seem interesting and that’s the only thing that’s kept my attention. If you look through any of the earlier chapter comments it’s only people talking shit about the MC, I was honestly suprised I saw so many 5 star reviews. Saying all that though I’m still gonna keep reading and give this book an honest chance. I’m really hoping this book turns out to be worth the effort it is to read it currently 😭
Very interesting. I just hope that author won't drop this halfway like the other novel...
Clearly, a very Korean inspired novel, especially with the whole academy and extra thing going on Author isn't even being very subtle about that fact lol, MC is a bit annoying but certainly understandable a pretty good and enjoyable read if you like Korean academy novels.
This novel, in my opinion, is just copied from the Korean novel the weakest demon hunter in the academy, live with it.......Oh, it's disappointing
It's a great read; I'm liking it pro now, even though it didn't take many chapters. I have a question, though, author: did your other novel abandon it? It's a novel I liked, "My Family In The Novel?"
Yes. The novel deserves 5 star. I like how author helps the reader to immerse themselves in the plot or any situation, and also I know how challenging it is write a harem genre with yanderes. Unlike other novel, this one actually portrays the girls yandere tendencies in detail - which is another plus. Anyways, I hope the author will not drop this in middle like other novel. Keep up the good work and good luck.
I started reading this with somewhat of a “I know it will be another cliche plot” but as i progressed further into the story, the depth and beauty of each character just captivated me to no end. And here I found myself immersed and determined to reach the end. A little bit of disappointing factor would be the bits of side character syndrome but he is slowly but surely somewhat outgrowing it. I love this in a way that it always catches you off guard and has that flavour of hanging you by the thread on looking forward to what is to come in the next chapter. Every factor is just so perfectly Balanced. Character development 10 Character background 10 No stupid input which in most stories do Fiction focused 10 Characters enigmatic charm 10 Character not a simp also 10 Thank you for such a beauty Mr Author. I appreciate your time for bringing such a beautiful story into existence.
Consider this review as the Q&A section. Chapters will come out daily from now on, there's no specific time frame for the releases. Do tell me your guys' thoughts.