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It's starting so there isn't much to say. So far—C16—so good. The background of the MC at the moment is a mystery but I can safely assume that later it will be explained. It will be interesting to see the clash of NazarickVSTensura. The MC's initial power set is cool, I'm not a fan of the plot device known as Gacha Rolls, but I'm not a hater either, so we're cool there. I hope it doesn't turn into one of those Pokemon harems (Not looking at your other story Author -.- Definitely not -.-), I don't read tags so if this is not harem then that's better. Not that I don't like harems, but usually stories tend to overlook or ignore the fact that jealousy is a thing, so even if the story is fantasy it turns unrealistic. Thanks for the story! Keep up the good work!
Good story, amazing character writing. I love this novel very much it has great potential. Tho, I don't like how overpowered the main character is. but still it's a great novel. 10/10 would recommend.
This book starts slow so I almost didn't read more of it but then the author started cooking and it became really awesome and interesting to read. Please author if you read this please write more chapters and never stop.
the story started good, but at some point added some thing that shouldn't really happen in the way introduced, its happen just for happening and that's not really a good way if you are fan of tensura, try at your risk, or go away, if you want a story that is not so bad, you can go ^^
A WARNING FOR THOSE WITH GLASS-HEARTS (like myself). Author likes to develop and mention the love life of side characters (Rimuru, Shizu, Shion, etc). It gives me weird vibes, knowing that 'heirone-like' characters have someone other than the mc going b*alls deep at them, and the mc just smiles, blessing their relation. If Rimuru loved one was just someone minor, that's ok, But Shion? Shizu? Nah man, they are best girl material in any harem fan-fic and my spider-sense dreads the future of this story. How many waifus will be harmed with this passive behavior, handing their bodies and souls to others bcs the 'canon is like this and shall stand that way' or whatever other excuse there is. Anyway, if can withstand this, this novel is no doubt a good story, well written and with a lot of potential to explore, but author-san, sorry, i couldn't tank this damage and there's no Aqua to ressurect. Wish you well and please, try to keep the future angels outta harm!
All the power ups, new characters and constructs are a good addition to the world of tensura but I think you have lost the sensibilities of fantasy that the canon Tensura has evoked and I fear it is getting farther away, before I elaborate on that it's necessary we discuss the crux of the story, the Lead character. (SPOILERS DOWN THERE !!!!!!!!!) For all the power that Silviana has amassed she has little mastery over it other than 'Morgan' being a mysterious benefactor and plot devices working to power her up through the initial arcs this doesn't necessarily have to be a bad or negative thing because for all I know you might be writing this in your free time. Yet the way Silviana thinks had little else to offer other than worrying about the future like a mundane being does, i.e to say not like a primordial force of time and paradox. (The elaboration*) Cultivation? Elevates perception and base human necessities Technology? It is the progeny of necessity, be it to enhance life or take it. Magic? It is the essence, the mystery that shows the potential to bend the world and also breaks the limitations of self. I do not ask for great feats of reasoning and presentation but somewhere in the story I find myself making the compromise of using discontinuous reasons and self serving emotional intelligence to settle for the Jumble of tricks that the story has become since the Falmuth war preparations. Do not misunderstand me for being anything other than dissatisfied and a bit observant of patterns in the details because if you do misunderstand, then you might not have anything to take away from 'this' which would not serve either of us. What I suggest is for a trait of consistency in behaviour and a holistic world which can serve the sensibilities of the power systems you might put in place inside of a story, anything else and I fear you might settle for less and personally I do not want to be stuck reading mighty writing put to sleep by lack of ambition or foresight. Also, Ainz was not represented well. I know that tempest had to win the battle against Orcs but with the reality bending shenanigans that I see in new chapters and other worldly fiction inspired magics, OVERLORD is no overlord at all if all the purpose he can serve is to pull the 'glorious notoriety of mass murder and evil scheming' - through mud.
hey this fanfic the most rated when i search every anime fanfic the rates is worst
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Um... Honestly, I like Silvi's character and of course her harem (Shuna and Milim) :3 Ugh... I don't know what else to say because it's been a long time since I've continued the two anime/LNs of Tensura or Overlord. Can only say that this is the most extraordinary fanfic I could find in combining two anime. I hope this incredible story can be resolved. Oh... If you add one more harem, maybe you can think about Hinata :v (ah... Just a small suggestion.) Btw, I used Google Translate to provide this review. If there is something you don't understand, please just ignore it. Just wanted to say this is a great story! [img=strong][img=update][img=recommend][img=proud]
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I don't know what to write. I am horrible at reviews, hence I don't tend to do them, but I liked it the story was nice, was that good? Praise me.
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i like your stile ! the Story is good too the Idee of overlord Crossover as evil Fraktion is nice i hohe the net chapter will be nice too [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read up to chapter 28 and everything is good so far I guess we just need some more information on what's going on around her though I like that you haven't put heavy emphasis on the overlord stuff just yet and I'm going to continue reading until there isn't anything left to read and chapters
Loving the story so far and hope that this quality keeps up. I would like more of an appearance from rimaru, loving the update schedule and the stability. Over all keep going cause I’m loving it
Uh sorry author I forgot to do the review. I like the story XD. The character of the characters are respected. The main character is balanced *cough* but limul yes *cough* *cough*. The villain is chosen logically. Conclusion I like this story.
the story's ongoing phase is really good , I hope that in the future the MC can be given templates for characters form the anime universe after the next system update
Alex_Simmonds Keep up the great work Can you please do this Irregular at Magic Highschool fanfic idea immediately after A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord Irregular at Magic Highschool: The Beast Shadow Monarch Jace was always a fan of the Shadow Monarch system and The Beast Monarch from Solo leveling. He also watched Irregular at Magic High School anime and read the light novels. So when he dies, he is reborn into the world of Irregular at Magic High School with the powers of the Shadow and Beast Monarchs. Harem Claudia Enfield Ezra Scarlett Minerva Orland Stella Vermillion Ikaruga (Fairy Tail) Flare Corona Norma Selner Lady Dimestrescu Saegusa Mayumi Watanabi Mari Shibata Mizuki Ono Haruka Saeki Hiromi Fujibayashi Kyouko Ichijou Midori Shiba Sayuri Helen Schneider
TRUTH NO BS THIS NOVEL EPIC FUN TO READ..THE FEMALE MC IS NOT A MERRYSUE..I HOPE THE AUTHOR MAKES A MASS-EFFECT NOVEL CENTERED AROUND LIARA TSONI AWESOME ALIEN BABE BECAUSE WE NEED MORE MASS-EFFECT NOVEL AROUND HERE..MASS EFFECT NOVLE CENTER AROUND LIARA WITH A SOUL OF MASS EFFECT FAN I LOVE TO READ MORE MASS EFFECT NOVELS..THE AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL THANK YOU.
What can i say its TENSURA ,..............................................................................................................................................
I just found this story and so far think it’s great. I am crossing my fingers 🤞that the love interest is Hinata since there is like zero fanfics out there with her being with a woman and not in a harem with it. I do like your other story too but with season three of this show coming out I have been really high on this train 🚂 lately. Can’t wait for the next chapter and love what you are doing with this. 😊
23 chapters in, and the pacing, writing quality, and story have been consistently very good. Keep up the good work!
I already liked your "Reality Bender System" fanfic a lot, but now that you've joined two of my favorite anime/novels together, it's really promising. It started a bit slow but with the system update and the regular plot progression I think this story has a lot of potential, hence the 5 stars. Keep it up!
It's starting so there isn't much to say. So far—C16—so good. The background of the MC at the moment is a mystery but I can safely assume that later it will be explained. It will be interesting to see the clash of NazarickVSTensura. The MC's initial power set is cool, I'm not a fan of the plot device known as Gacha Rolls, but I'm not a hater either, so we're cool there. I hope it doesn't turn into one of those Pokemon harems (Not looking at your other story Author -.- Definitely not -.-), I don't read tags so if this is not harem then that's better. Not that I don't like harems, but usually stories tend to overlook or ignore the fact that jealousy is a thing, so even if the story is fantasy it turns unrealistic. Thanks for the story! Keep up the good work!
Good story, amazing character writing. I love this novel very much it has great potential. Tho, I don't like how overpowered the main character is. but still it's a great novel. 10/10 would recommend.
This book starts slow so I almost didn't read more of it but then the author started cooking and it became really awesome and interesting to read. Please author if you read this please write more chapters and never stop.
the story started good, but at some point added some thing that shouldn't really happen in the way introduced, its happen just for happening and that's not really a good way if you are fan of tensura, try at your risk, or go away, if you want a story that is not so bad, you can go ^^
A WARNING FOR THOSE WITH GLASS-HEARTS (like myself). Author likes to develop and mention the love life of side characters (Rimuru, Shizu, Shion, etc). It gives me weird vibes, knowing that 'heirone-like' characters have someone other than the mc going b*alls deep at them, and the mc just smiles, blessing their relation. If Rimuru loved one was just someone minor, that's ok, But Shion? Shizu? Nah man, they are best girl material in any harem fan-fic and my spider-sense dreads the future of this story. How many waifus will be harmed with this passive behavior, handing their bodies and souls to others bcs the 'canon is like this and shall stand that way' or whatever other excuse there is. Anyway, if can withstand this, this novel is no doubt a good story, well written and with a lot of potential to explore, but author-san, sorry, i couldn't tank this damage and there's no Aqua to ressurect. Wish you well and please, try to keep the future angels outta harm!
All the power ups, new characters and constructs are a good addition to the world of tensura but I think you have lost the sensibilities of fantasy that the canon Tensura has evoked and I fear it is getting farther away, before I elaborate on that it's necessary we discuss the crux of the story, the Lead character. (SPOILERS DOWN THERE !!!!!!!!!) For all the power that Silviana has amassed she has little mastery over it other than 'Morgan' being a mysterious benefactor and plot devices working to power her up through the initial arcs this doesn't necessarily have to be a bad or negative thing because for all I know you might be writing this in your free time. Yet the way Silviana thinks had little else to offer other than worrying about the future like a mundane being does, i.e to say not like a primordial force of time and paradox. (The elaboration*) Cultivation? Elevates perception and base human necessities Technology? It is the progeny of necessity, be it to enhance life or take it. Magic? It is the essence, the mystery that shows the potential to bend the world and also breaks the limitations of self. I do not ask for great feats of reasoning and presentation but somewhere in the story I find myself making the compromise of using discontinuous reasons and self serving emotional intelligence to settle for the Jumble of tricks that the story has become since the Falmuth war preparations. Do not misunderstand me for being anything other than dissatisfied and a bit observant of patterns in the details because if you do misunderstand, then you might not have anything to take away from 'this' which would not serve either of us. What I suggest is for a trait of consistency in behaviour and a holistic world which can serve the sensibilities of the power systems you might put in place inside of a story, anything else and I fear you might settle for less and personally I do not want to be stuck reading mighty writing put to sleep by lack of ambition or foresight. Also, Ainz was not represented well. I know that tempest had to win the battle against Orcs but with the reality bending shenanigans that I see in new chapters and other worldly fiction inspired magics, OVERLORD is no overlord at all if all the purpose he can serve is to pull the 'glorious notoriety of mass murder and evil scheming' - through mud.
hey this fanfic the most rated when i search every anime fanfic the rates is worst
Revelar Spoiler Um... Honestly, I like Silvi's character and of course her harem (Shuna and Milim) :3 Ugh... I don't know what else to say because it's been a long time since I've continued the two anime/LNs of Tensura or Overlord. Can only say that this is the most extraordinary fanfic I could find in combining two anime. I hope this incredible story can be resolved. Oh... If you add one more harem, maybe you can think about Hinata :v (ah... Just a small suggestion.) Btw, I used Google Translate to provide this review. If there is something you don't understand, please just ignore it. Just wanted to say this is a great story! [img=strong][img=update][img=recommend][img=proud]
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I don't know what to write. I am horrible at reviews, hence I don't tend to do them, but I liked it the story was nice, was that good? Praise me.
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i like your stile ! the Story is good too the Idee of overlord Crossover as evil Fraktion is nice i hohe the net chapter will be nice too [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I read up to chapter 28 and everything is good so far I guess we just need some more information on what's going on around her though I like that you haven't put heavy emphasis on the overlord stuff just yet and I'm going to continue reading until there isn't anything left to read and chapters
Loving the story so far and hope that this quality keeps up. I would like more of an appearance from rimaru, loving the update schedule and the stability. Over all keep going cause I’m loving it
Uh sorry author I forgot to do the review. I like the story XD. The character of the characters are respected. The main character is balanced *cough* but limul yes *cough* *cough*. The villain is chosen logically. Conclusion I like this story.
the story's ongoing phase is really good , I hope that in the future the MC can be given templates for characters form the anime universe after the next system update
Alex_Simmonds Keep up the great work Can you please do this Irregular at Magic Highschool fanfic idea immediately after A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord Irregular at Magic Highschool: The Beast Shadow Monarch Jace was always a fan of the Shadow Monarch system and The Beast Monarch from Solo leveling. He also watched Irregular at Magic High School anime and read the light novels. So when he dies, he is reborn into the world of Irregular at Magic High School with the powers of the Shadow and Beast Monarchs. Harem Claudia Enfield Ezra Scarlett Minerva Orland Stella Vermillion Ikaruga (Fairy Tail) Flare Corona Norma Selner Lady Dimestrescu Saegusa Mayumi Watanabi Mari Shibata Mizuki Ono Haruka Saeki Hiromi Fujibayashi Kyouko Ichijou Midori Shiba Sayuri Helen Schneider
TRUTH NO BS THIS NOVEL EPIC FUN TO READ..THE FEMALE MC IS NOT A MERRYSUE..I HOPE THE AUTHOR MAKES A MASS-EFFECT NOVEL CENTERED AROUND LIARA TSONI AWESOME ALIEN BABE BECAUSE WE NEED MORE MASS-EFFECT NOVEL AROUND HERE..MASS EFFECT NOVLE CENTER AROUND LIARA WITH A SOUL OF MASS EFFECT FAN I LOVE TO READ MORE MASS EFFECT NOVELS..THE AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL THANK YOU.
What can i say its TENSURA ,..............................................................................................................................................
I just found this story and so far think it’s great. I am crossing my fingers 🤞that the love interest is Hinata since there is like zero fanfics out there with her being with a woman and not in a harem with it. I do like your other story too but with season three of this show coming out I have been really high on this train 🚂 lately. Can’t wait for the next chapter and love what you are doing with this. 😊
23 chapters in, and the pacing, writing quality, and story have been consistently very good. Keep up the good work!
I already liked your "Reality Bender System" fanfic a lot, but now that you've joined two of my favorite anime/novels together, it's really promising. It started a bit slow but with the system update and the regular plot progression I think this story has a lot of potential, hence the 5 stars. Keep it up!