Avatar : Tanya

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Rimanovi

There was a problem with the fanfic. I had to delete it before Re-publishing it.

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Tim_QQQ

(CH8) its written well, mistakes with spelling/grammar are almost non-existent. I feel like the author has accurately captured Tanya as a character and is faithful in his portrayal of her. Story development is where I might find issue later on but its hard to see where everything is going given there being only 8 chapters. Author might go the way of the original anime and make Tanya a front line military commander or perhaps will try something else. hard to say, but its promising so far.

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Joebiden_Biden

The only real problem is that there isn’t enough, one of the only pieces that seem to nail Tanya’s personality. The multiple POVs work well to show how Tanya reads situations differently then “the normal” characters.

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moolchoco

Woow I really love that premise of the story. Keep going also author-san ❤️❤️

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Doom_Night

I love the story so far. I only wish for more chapters.

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Kwetzal_Lag

Tanya, in the Imperialistic Fire Nation Military. I can definitely wait for chapters!

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VitaVesuvius

rare to see fanfics that portray Tanya as who she actually is, rather than a made up version that fit the whole "cute girl doing cute things" deal

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

This work gets Tanya's personality (youjo senki/mc) right, the only change in her personality that I've noticed so far (chap 14) is that she really values ​​friendships (only about 4, which are important figures) apart from that the plot is similar like the original work, but in the avatar world (and so far it is well done)

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Honoured_Writer

Peakest peak to ever peak on this wn. I doubted at first but the writing quality in this fic is incredible, it stays true to the character Tanya at hand and doesn’t deviate at all from what the original would do in this situation. Development of the story is perfect and really hammers the themes of the show perfectly when put against the themes and ideals of Tanya. Absolute peak

LV 4

crepskul

Long live the Fatherland!!!..................

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kingofknights

I like it ad's Tanya's character so much

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Uni_Desires

Not a bad ATLA fanfiction tbh. Most atla FF tend to gravitate towards joining the avatar on his quest, few actually take place from the perspective of a member of the fire nation. MC definitely has some crazy issues but there isn’t really anything to critique about the work. I recommend it.

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Numera

First time seeing this kind of premise in a story, this is really underrated. I really like the story so far, Keep up the good work Author-san

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Just4N0body

I got high hopes for this series and was glad it was still being updated. I never thought of this concept but again, i got high hopes :)

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Dinori_Ah

It is perfect. Just perfect. The characters, the objetives of the people, the dead Perfect

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YESTIP_666

El autor es completamente fiel a los personajes ademas de darnos una escritura rica en descripción de momentos con dialogos entre personajes coherentes y naturales ademas de seguir un guion logico a lo largo de la historia

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Kyojin_Senshoku

I NEED MOAR!!! This is making my chaotic neutral rage out of control tanya is a little devil and I can't get enough SO MOAR!

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greatcheesemaster

Good quality fanfic one of the best I think good grammar stable updates so overall highly recommend it to anyone

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yoshi_koba

this is exactly the type of story that the terrorist in the friends group would like (AKA ME)and author really catch the character of Tanya really well so keep making the masterpiece[img=gift]