I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God

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Jackleell

The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

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tt_g

Nice concept but it reads like a crack fic. Also the mc is generic af, basically ur average human in a 12th dimensional cat but I don’t think the author really knows what he’s talking about with his whole 12th dimensional thing so for now he’s just a cat with shadow powers. Average Dxd wishfulment fic so far.

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_DEKIM_

For those who like this type of novel, this must be wonderful. But I don't particularly like it very much.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

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Fool_King

Good story and decent grammar ,but mc is a pedo 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

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Destroyer404

Waiting for more Honkai ✔ Harem ✔ OP Mc ✔ Anti Hero MC ✔ Cute Waifus ✔

LV 4

JaxWolf4

The story feels off. It's not bad or anything, but the interactions and world-building feels strange. It doesn't seem like it is written in DXD and yet it is.

LV 1

Ponyworld_Z

i find it hillarious that the mc is a cat. how embarassing must it be for someone to die to a smal black cat? the gramma is not bat in my eyes, pretty easy to read. and the building of the story is also good.

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Kell_Kewyo

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trueidiocy_577

you know it's kinda ironic that I see this fic as soon as I've just watched Kris allegations.

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renito101_yt

Yo digo que es muy buena historia, me molesta que esté rompiendo la cuarta pared a cada rato, pero es una opinión personal y no lo hace tanto como por molestar, sino que de vez en cuando con intervalos entre cada vez, la historia está muy buena es comedia porque otra cosa no puede ser,el harem parece más adoptando niñas que un harem para mí no es un problema a mí no me gusta el harem pero hay gente que se molesta y mejor les pongo una advertencia en caso de que no les guste que no sea harem,dice que es secreta su identidad como dios de la doceava dimensión pero más o menos como en la mitad de la historia todo el mundo lo sabe, yo en lo personal considero esta una muy buena historia no va a ser de mi top 10 pero sí de mi top 50

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Ragnall_Dark

the author is very interactive with his story which i like this a story which we must not take seriously and just enjoy it the one's who don't like it are either fools or they like rats. (i hope you well author)

LV 14

wisdomseeker

The grammar was not the best but readable, anyway thank you for the Fanfic

LV 12

Zetsway

I keep seeing this author, and unknowingly, I've read 3 or 4 of his fics(or, I've started to read). One thing all of them have in common is that they are quite interesting in the first 20 or so chapters. The Mc does show signs of being a sick degenerate, but he's controlled and it doesn't fell bad to read. After chapter 20 or so, it's like all brakes are off. Also, another thing that quite annoys me in fanfiction is that the authors don't fact-check their knowledge. If it was some obscure fandom like an old game or something it could be understood, but for DxD, every single fact is barely a google search away.

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Episode_18

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InternetSaint

Cool story but the dialogue could be better. Character interactions feel too scripted sometimes. Like a theater play.

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HereForGoodRead

I just don’t really like it, it’s overly emotional for a 12th dimensional entity especially since his body is that of a CAT. I just have the feelings it’s one of those wish fulfillment story’s.

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BoTMaster

I just don't like you 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Azrael999

This is fire just don't drop this author san

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chicken_head_2537

Hey author good work keep it up, and I won't even complain about stuff I don't like because you are writing for stress relief but this is good....and make sure I have an easy life in dxd 😉..... From Mr cat...

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Martateniop

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