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author I have ask you this question before but you didn't answer so I'm to ask you again is there Yuri in it just answer with yes and no If you didn't answer I will take that as yes
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Es liest sich sehr gut und flüssig.....das Buch ist sehr interessant.....lohnt sich es zu lesen ...
Overall, this is a good mindless smut story where I found myself not really caring about the actual story. The characters are well-built so far and even the harem fodder doesn't feel 2D at this point. I can't say much about later chapters because they aren't free, but as long as the author puts the same amount of effort into the characters each time, it should be a good read even in the later chapters. The Good: The writing quality is above average. The author is very invested in this story, which shows that he enjoys writing it. The smut scenes are of good quality as well, with a wide variety of "action." The Bad: Personally, he became humanoid a little too quickly and exploring the monster aspect of the story could've been a little more interesting. I get it though, we want to project ourselves through the MC so it is much easier to do that as a humanoid. I had a hard time investing myself in the world itself, but this is also what happens in most smut stories since smut is a crutch. The Neutral: Are you using any writing aids like Grammarly? Writing tools have advanced a long way in the past few years, but if you rely on them then your style becomes very mechanical if you always follow their suggestions. Grammarly is meant for articles and essays, but it's free, and I love free things too. Personally, if I go back to chapter 1 of one of my novels after finishing off a much later chapter and feel like my writing has improved, then it's doing good. I think you have improved from Chapter 1 until where I stopped at Chapter 28, but that is all just my opinion.
novel is excellent one of the few novels I wait for its update. Story progresses at good pace and doesn’t draw out things. MC knows what he wants and goes for it, hopefully tho it doesn’t end short or abruptly stop, many good novels have perished like this. Give this book and try and read it so it lives a long healthy life 🙏🥺
I really enjoy this story from the fight scenes to the ero-scenes. Author has a pretty steady flow when it comes to pacing and great descriptive sense for the writing. The power system seems to be pretty potent but there isn't any end game goal yet to drive the need for more scaling, instead the Worka ship has become a sort of cozy base filled with a fun cast of characters. Looking forward to the future goals of the crew+Lith and (Rei?/Cero)
Es de lo mejor que eh encontrado hasta ahora, solo que los candados son mi impedimento.................................................. para seguir leyendo pero hasta hay todo perfecto
Writing quality is really, really good. Take it from someone who really struggles getting immersed in works that have grammar and story shortcuts. That makes the story development, which is medium pace, that much more enjoyable. Character design so far is awesome. Each char has very detailed personality and specifics, the writing quality really makes it shine. Updating stability, no complaint so far. World background, author is creating entire ecosystems and species, with their own mating ritual and hierarchies, that are brand new. That takes a lot of creativity
probably put $30 into this because I couldn't stop reading, (I also bought privilege thinking it unlocked all the previous chapters I should have read that better 😔) , anyway , I'm a sucker for ever evolving aliens so finding another book with that as the main character was great ,,, it helps that it's pretty intense on the over 18 scenes and the fights are decent too. the system is in the background usually as it should be and the character designs seem fun. my only wish is for the author to include boy love, i can never find a bi protagonist in these books and the other men are feminine for once 🙏🏻 :wrote about 75 chapters in:
Great read. nothing to complain about and updates at least daily if not twice a day. Its got that, what is he gonna eat next chapter, vibe. Now author, GIMME THAT MASS RELEASE
My first review, for the mass release of chapters. The story is good. The grammar is good and so is the pace of the story. Good introduction and description of the characters and a likable MC.
over all it's a great story with an interesting start and progression and I like that it release updates regularly.
J’ai bien aimé ce livre. L’histoire est prenante on a hâte de la suite à chaque fois
author I have ask you this question before but you didn't answer so I'm to ask you again is there Yuri in it just answer with yes and no If you didn't answer I will take that as yes
muito bom, recomendo esse livro [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
At last, a reliable and effective service I can rely on! I can only imagine how many people are struggling with crypto-related issues and are likely also unsure of their ability to find practical solutions. This is where Space Spy Recovery rightfully enters the picture as the best provider of the service, and their success is clearly demonstrated by the fact that they were able to help me recover 550,000 EUROS that I had lost to online cryptocurrency theft. Get in touch for free: Email addresses: info@spacespyrecovery.pro and soacespy@hackermail.com. Telegram: @spacespy65; Skype: live: cid.2b75b0cf1ce9bf69; WhatsApp: +1 (657) 543-6038; YouTube: https://youtu.be/m8DDfVwc_lE, Website: https://spacespyrecovery.pro/
Es liest sich sehr gut und flüssig.....das Buch ist sehr interessant.....lohnt sich es zu lesen ...
Overall, this is a good mindless smut story where I found myself not really caring about the actual story. The characters are well-built so far and even the harem fodder doesn't feel 2D at this point. I can't say much about later chapters because they aren't free, but as long as the author puts the same amount of effort into the characters each time, it should be a good read even in the later chapters. The Good: The writing quality is above average. The author is very invested in this story, which shows that he enjoys writing it. The smut scenes are of good quality as well, with a wide variety of "action." The Bad: Personally, he became humanoid a little too quickly and exploring the monster aspect of the story could've been a little more interesting. I get it though, we want to project ourselves through the MC so it is much easier to do that as a humanoid. I had a hard time investing myself in the world itself, but this is also what happens in most smut stories since smut is a crutch. The Neutral: Are you using any writing aids like Grammarly? Writing tools have advanced a long way in the past few years, but if you rely on them then your style becomes very mechanical if you always follow their suggestions. Grammarly is meant for articles and essays, but it's free, and I love free things too. Personally, if I go back to chapter 1 of one of my novels after finishing off a much later chapter and feel like my writing has improved, then it's doing good. I think you have improved from Chapter 1 until where I stopped at Chapter 28, but that is all just my opinion.
novel is excellent one of the few novels I wait for its update. Story progresses at good pace and doesn’t draw out things. MC knows what he wants and goes for it, hopefully tho it doesn’t end short or abruptly stop, many good novels have perished like this. Give this book and try and read it so it lives a long healthy life 🙏🥺
I really enjoy this story from the fight scenes to the ero-scenes. Author has a pretty steady flow when it comes to pacing and great descriptive sense for the writing. The power system seems to be pretty potent but there isn't any end game goal yet to drive the need for more scaling, instead the Worka ship has become a sort of cozy base filled with a fun cast of characters. Looking forward to the future goals of the crew+Lith and (Rei?/Cero)
Es de lo mejor que eh encontrado hasta ahora, solo que los candados son mi impedimento.................................................. para seguir leyendo pero hasta hay todo perfecto
Writing quality is really, really good. Take it from someone who really struggles getting immersed in works that have grammar and story shortcuts. That makes the story development, which is medium pace, that much more enjoyable. Character design so far is awesome. Each char has very detailed personality and specifics, the writing quality really makes it shine. Updating stability, no complaint so far. World background, author is creating entire ecosystems and species, with their own mating ritual and hierarchies, that are brand new. That takes a lot of creativity
probably put $30 into this because I couldn't stop reading, (I also bought privilege thinking it unlocked all the previous chapters I should have read that better 😔) , anyway , I'm a sucker for ever evolving aliens so finding another book with that as the main character was great ,,, it helps that it's pretty intense on the over 18 scenes and the fights are decent too. the system is in the background usually as it should be and the character designs seem fun. my only wish is for the author to include boy love, i can never find a bi protagonist in these books and the other men are feminine for once 🙏🏻 :wrote about 75 chapters in:
Great read. nothing to complain about and updates at least daily if not twice a day. Its got that, what is he gonna eat next chapter, vibe. Now author, GIMME THAT MASS RELEASE
My first review, for the mass release of chapters. The story is good. The grammar is good and so is the pace of the story. Good introduction and description of the characters and a likable MC.
over all it's a great story with an interesting start and progression and I like that it release updates regularly.
J’ai bien aimé ce livre. L’histoire est prenante on a hâte de la suite à chaque fois