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BEST NOVEL IN YEARS GOOD STORY IM IN LOVE WITH IT.............................................................................................................................................................................
Come on, I'm going to try to do a serious review of this piece of shit here. The world in which the MC was sent has everything to be good because it brings together several interesting worlds and everything is well written, that's a fact. Now let's get to the important thing: The author generates a lot of forced/illogical content and this literally kills the novel. Everyone seems to have negative intelligence in this novel. It's not exciting to read the next chapter, it just generates hatred for the world, the MC and everything else. Conclusion: Like all works by this author, this can be summed up in one word: BULLSHIT
mediocre is too small a word to describe this, not only does it use the worst protagonist archetype, the passive one; but he also used every cliché he could think of to move the story forward. Don't waste your time with this thing
Buena historia ¿Me pueden recomendar alguna parecida? /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
writing quality is kinda poor, author should probably try making a timeline and a storyboard. story development and world background it's horrible, like the author took all of his favorite storys, tossed them into a blender and hit puree. author-San, if you read this try instead of mixing everything just mix two or three universes. also even if you are using a super popular main verse, you should still introduce everything like the audience has never interacted with the source material.
The premise is good but MC act more cowardy than original Leon and there are a lot forced plot even Zola punishments not satisfying at all.
Forced myself to read all the way to chapter 44......and it's a waste of time! Strong MC and he is the world intelligent MC but he can't do anything to a freakin mortals and a spineless mc. Not worth it.
sigh... honestly, it's my fault. I couldn't be bothered remembering your name when I dropped your other pieces. If I had known... The drama's too much. The characters are garbage. The jokes... I don't even now if it was supposed to be funny... I only chuckled cause I thought the joke was dry and trash, the mc and love interests being trash for finding it funny.
A fan of the story so far. combined multiple worlds in a fun way. the beginning was a little confusing without enough background to really grasp the universe as a whole. The bad reviews are mostly made by folk who are angry and sad that their life is miserable. I like the character and the direction the story is headed in. keep it up.
it's an absolute blast reading this just the amount of things mixed in is staggering you have to read it it is worth it
the heck did i just read? The MC is the strongest person in the world!!!BUT WAIT!!! He's the underdog .Because god forbid he actually uses his powers. The MC is the only person in the world who can fix old Technology(A very Big Deal) but noone thinks that he's worth anything BECAUSE the author is incapable of writing a stronger with a strong MC . how this story has so many people following it is beyond me. do yourself a favour and ignore it. Trust me you will thank me!
Can't move on since chapter 14, my head hurts and the nerves in my brain is about to blow of Drama a bit forced so are the characters... Character leon becomes a push over when he can literally has the power make his step mother and step siblings 'disappear' or have them encounter an unknown 'accident'... And don't know when is his equal rights is equal fights would show but hit damn his a balless shet, the so-called 'nobles' treats him with the disrespect that's understandable, but bro letting them go with only a slap on the wrist yeah sure fine, but at least have them pay about 10x no a 100x for your service and products, sure the female characters are fine... Mediocre at best no essence aside to be there and found for him no character what so ever conclusion there's a saying First impression are important as it creates the basis and structure of what the story you want to entail be delivered to the audience lastly this story has no road, no light at the end of the tunnel it just stretches in the darkness
I honestly don't review often. However, this book is well worth the time. For an Isekai it doesn't do the same boring motions. For a harem novel, it isn't focused on the harem. For a scifi novel it isn't about making money. This book is about adventure, a small amount of politics, and as of chapter 48, we're beginning to get a better picture of the universe as a whole. I'm loving it.
Me gusta el fanfic, ya que creo que la original fue un poco desaprovechada y no hay muchos fanfics de esta. Realmente el único problema que veo es que se requiere de haber visto las obras de Fate y Mibuseka para entender a algunos personajes.
Mob isekai mix with othe shows like starwars and few elements from Marvel pretty good so far keep it up.....................................
Nothing about the World background or any details about the world is explained clearly Story is illogical and Main character and his family members are spineless fools who despite having the power to overwehlm the kingdom,but does nothing. Mc father forces mcs lover into slavehood cause his wife said so. MC having the power and influence free her without any problem, did nothing but instead says that he will earn money to get her.
This wasn't a gold 🪙 or a diamond 💎 do you want to know ?. IT WAS ONE Of THE BILLIONS STAR ✨ ABOVE In the Starry Sky of many nights . Good Luck I_no WE HOPE YOU WILL COMPLETE THESE BEAUTIFUL STORY PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD Amen 🙏
I will say this story so far is promising. It’s a lot like his other stories. Action, romance, world building and finally a shit ton of humor. I recommend read till about chapter 24 or 25 and making your opinion on whether or not to continue the story. Also if you see low star reviews most of them are troll bots. Read the story and make You’re opinion then.
E visto hasta el capítulo 15 y es muy interesante. Aunque esperaba que la serie fuera sobre la serie de batallas espaciales (el título y primer capítulo son engañosos) el mundo de esta novela/anime es muy interesante, y este fanfic es mejor porque añade waifus de otras series (la historia original carece de una variedad de personajes femeninos agradables o que tengan mucho tiempo en pantalla).
love this novel more chapters please.............................................................................................................
BEST NOVEL IN YEARS GOOD STORY IM IN LOVE WITH IT.............................................................................................................................................................................
Come on, I'm going to try to do a serious review of this piece of shit here. The world in which the MC was sent has everything to be good because it brings together several interesting worlds and everything is well written, that's a fact. Now let's get to the important thing: The author generates a lot of forced/illogical content and this literally kills the novel. Everyone seems to have negative intelligence in this novel. It's not exciting to read the next chapter, it just generates hatred for the world, the MC and everything else. Conclusion: Like all works by this author, this can be summed up in one word: BULLSHIT
mediocre is too small a word to describe this, not only does it use the worst protagonist archetype, the passive one; but he also used every cliché he could think of to move the story forward. Don't waste your time with this thing
Buena historia ¿Me pueden recomendar alguna parecida? /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
writing quality is kinda poor, author should probably try making a timeline and a storyboard. story development and world background it's horrible, like the author took all of his favorite storys, tossed them into a blender and hit puree. author-San, if you read this try instead of mixing everything just mix two or three universes. also even if you are using a super popular main verse, you should still introduce everything like the audience has never interacted with the source material.
The premise is good but MC act more cowardy than original Leon and there are a lot forced plot even Zola punishments not satisfying at all.
Forced myself to read all the way to chapter 44......and it's a waste of time! Strong MC and he is the world intelligent MC but he can't do anything to a freakin mortals and a spineless mc. Not worth it.
sigh... honestly, it's my fault. I couldn't be bothered remembering your name when I dropped your other pieces. If I had known... The drama's too much. The characters are garbage. The jokes... I don't even now if it was supposed to be funny... I only chuckled cause I thought the joke was dry and trash, the mc and love interests being trash for finding it funny.
A fan of the story so far. combined multiple worlds in a fun way. the beginning was a little confusing without enough background to really grasp the universe as a whole. The bad reviews are mostly made by folk who are angry and sad that their life is miserable. I like the character and the direction the story is headed in. keep it up.
it's an absolute blast reading this just the amount of things mixed in is staggering you have to read it it is worth it
the heck did i just read? The MC is the strongest person in the world!!!BUT WAIT!!! He's the underdog .Because god forbid he actually uses his powers. The MC is the only person in the world who can fix old Technology(A very Big Deal) but noone thinks that he's worth anything BECAUSE the author is incapable of writing a stronger with a strong MC . how this story has so many people following it is beyond me. do yourself a favour and ignore it. Trust me you will thank me!
Can't move on since chapter 14, my head hurts and the nerves in my brain is about to blow of Drama a bit forced so are the characters... Character leon becomes a push over when he can literally has the power make his step mother and step siblings 'disappear' or have them encounter an unknown 'accident'... And don't know when is his equal rights is equal fights would show but hit damn his a balless shet, the so-called 'nobles' treats him with the disrespect that's understandable, but bro letting them go with only a slap on the wrist yeah sure fine, but at least have them pay about 10x no a 100x for your service and products, sure the female characters are fine... Mediocre at best no essence aside to be there and found for him no character what so ever conclusion there's a saying First impression are important as it creates the basis and structure of what the story you want to entail be delivered to the audience lastly this story has no road, no light at the end of the tunnel it just stretches in the darkness
I honestly don't review often. However, this book is well worth the time. For an Isekai it doesn't do the same boring motions. For a harem novel, it isn't focused on the harem. For a scifi novel it isn't about making money. This book is about adventure, a small amount of politics, and as of chapter 48, we're beginning to get a better picture of the universe as a whole. I'm loving it.
Me gusta el fanfic, ya que creo que la original fue un poco desaprovechada y no hay muchos fanfics de esta. Realmente el único problema que veo es que se requiere de haber visto las obras de Fate y Mibuseka para entender a algunos personajes.
Mob isekai mix with othe shows like starwars and few elements from Marvel pretty good so far keep it up.....................................
Nothing about the World background or any details about the world is explained clearly Story is illogical and Main character and his family members are spineless fools who despite having the power to overwehlm the kingdom,but does nothing. Mc father forces mcs lover into slavehood cause his wife said so. MC having the power and influence free her without any problem, did nothing but instead says that he will earn money to get her.
This wasn't a gold 🪙 or a diamond 💎 do you want to know ?. IT WAS ONE Of THE BILLIONS STAR ✨ ABOVE In the Starry Sky of many nights . Good Luck I_no WE HOPE YOU WILL COMPLETE THESE BEAUTIFUL STORY PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD Amen 🙏
I will say this story so far is promising. It’s a lot like his other stories. Action, romance, world building and finally a shit ton of humor. I recommend read till about chapter 24 or 25 and making your opinion on whether or not to continue the story. Also if you see low star reviews most of them are troll bots. Read the story and make You’re opinion then.
E visto hasta el capítulo 15 y es muy interesante. Aunque esperaba que la serie fuera sobre la serie de batallas espaciales (el título y primer capítulo son engañosos) el mundo de esta novela/anime es muy interesante, y este fanfic es mejor porque añade waifus de otras series (la historia original carece de una variedad de personajes femeninos agradables o que tengan mucho tiempo en pantalla).
love this novel more chapters please.............................................................................................................