Star Jumper

LV 15

Stephen_Ruchert

whiplash is the word of the day with all the jumping around and this story goes it's like he doesn't even finish or no conclusion for each world be fore suddenly jumping to another. his perks sometimes seem to transfere over other times not. good writing quality but hard to get attached to anything if mc doesn't spend time with other characters and just basicly goes from one to story to another taking what he wants then leaving

LV 15

Gawd

with Q involved it seems like this mc is more of a system slave than any fic I have ever read before. and why is it that all the options that offer decent benefits are leading him down the path of evil?

LV 15

sean_goins

awesome book so far I hope keep the updates going

LV 13

Nimav

Been a fan since the original Tyson took to the stars in the FF multiverse. I like this new direction, seems like it will have a more balanced progression as well as challenges at the rate it's going. I also remember the impressive list of "System options" you made available in the past that I always felt had a lot of potential, maybe this time they will be revealed in a more gradual manner in order to maintain the impact that new Q-level ridiculous but surprisingly OP options have and focus the story on creative solutions using them.

LV 6

Beefnator

Really good integradtion .... we need more stars here .....................................................................................................