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This is a very fun read. I would recommend it. Some things get mixed up a little bit in the writing, and the progress is a little jumpy, but I like the way the story is going. keeper going
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
i love this fanfic, been a while since I've seen a hidden gem. keep it up and more chapters please
Writing skill is admirable, grammar is near perfect, story is interactive and interesting. Good job author ✍️
I love it. I think the idea is great and all the baby pokemon are adorable. I don't usually read pokemon books because I have horrible memory and don't understand them very well but I feel like you've done very well. it's kept my attention, I started reading it today and will probably catch up by tonight. It's great!!!
Good story, love the character interactions between the pokemon and all the characters
Awesome concept that is unique. Honestly super intriguing and engaging. Would definitely recommend to those familiar with OP and Pokemon to have a read.
i enjoyed reading this fic, I hope u continue translating it and thanks for the peak fics
This is a great translations with no flaws except for the pokemon names. Certain pokemon are named by a different pokemon's name but there are no pokemon translated as chinese names like "Rai Zhu" and etc. The character is very enjoyable and has a philosophy towards pokemon that I respect. He is relatively weak for the One Piece world but he's not supposed to be a physical fighter, he's a pokemon breeder. Overall, a great slice-of-life novel.
Five stars just because I liked it and the translation is good, without Chinese elements and boring nationalism 😳😳😳😳🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚
Really interesting story, slow but the characters act just as they should from the original One Piece.
aside from few writing mistakes....I only have one word for this fic......it's entertaining..... really looking forward to more chapters
It’s a good written story and the personality of the people semi to be pretty good so it makes sense when the character are younger
I like the idea as well as the way the MC is dealing with the pokemon. He is quite weak(There are 36 chapters right now), but that seems to be changing quite fast. The other characters are ok. Overall it's a very nice fanfic.
looking forward the development of the story, i like the background of the system and that the MC is neutral and love pokemon and know how dangerous one piece world can be.
Keep it up I’m loving your story so please please please please keep writing it
So far so good, but there's was some mistakes about Pokémon names and mistranslation. But i like it anyway
This is a very fun read. I would recommend it. Some things get mixed up a little bit in the writing, and the progress is a little jumpy, but I like the way the story is going. keeper going
5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.
i love this fanfic, been a while since I've seen a hidden gem. keep it up and more chapters please
Writing skill is admirable, grammar is near perfect, story is interactive and interesting. Good job author ✍️
I love it. I think the idea is great and all the baby pokemon are adorable. I don't usually read pokemon books because I have horrible memory and don't understand them very well but I feel like you've done very well. it's kept my attention, I started reading it today and will probably catch up by tonight. It's great!!!
Good story, love the character interactions between the pokemon and all the characters
Awesome concept that is unique. Honestly super intriguing and engaging. Would definitely recommend to those familiar with OP and Pokemon to have a read.
i enjoyed reading this fic, I hope u continue translating it and thanks for the peak fics
This is a great translations with no flaws except for the pokemon names. Certain pokemon are named by a different pokemon's name but there are no pokemon translated as chinese names like "Rai Zhu" and etc. The character is very enjoyable and has a philosophy towards pokemon that I respect. He is relatively weak for the One Piece world but he's not supposed to be a physical fighter, he's a pokemon breeder. Overall, a great slice-of-life novel.
Five stars just because I liked it and the translation is good, without Chinese elements and boring nationalism 😳😳😳😳🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚
Really interesting story, slow but the characters act just as they should from the original One Piece.
aside from few writing mistakes....I only have one word for this fic......it's entertaining..... really looking forward to more chapters
It’s a good written story and the personality of the people semi to be pretty good so it makes sense when the character are younger
I like the idea as well as the way the MC is dealing with the pokemon. He is quite weak(There are 36 chapters right now), but that seems to be changing quite fast. The other characters are ok. Overall it's a very nice fanfic.
looking forward the development of the story, i like the background of the system and that the MC is neutral and love pokemon and know how dangerous one piece world can be.
Keep it up I’m loving your story so please please please please keep writing it
So far so good, but there's was some mistakes about Pokémon names and mistranslation. But i like it anyway