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Эта история невероятно крутая. Один из любимейших персонажей, Гарп, теперь и в Наруто.) У вас получилось очень четко передать характер Монки) Большое вам спасибо, автор)
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I like this story and you can use Wood-wood Davil Fruit for MC because it can give user Eternal Youth and Infinite Lifespan by Absorption anything and Everything and Gain powers also though it like Sage Body by Absorb of Sanju blood or fist cell or Death body
i really like how the author has integrated garp's personality also without much difference.
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a lot of these stories change the characters to fit their morals and beliefs but you kept it on point for garp so thanks cant wait for more
simply fantastic Garp being a playful and loving grandfather taking care of and remodeling the most dangerous trio in naruto into good people, just this trait already makes this story perfect now putting the theme of war never changing and trying to solve problems with true justice through peaceful means without killing It's something incredible, this story has great potential to be one of the best, I hope Garp helps change the story to a better example, saving the good-hearted people of the Uchiha clan, preventing Sasuke from losing his family and even saving Minato and Kushina, preventing Naruto from suffering childhood.
This is a really good book so far.Hopefully You won't forget about the book.
First off this is a great idea I like the story and how this is going second my only problem is the plot holes like why does donso already have the bandages even though it’s before the massacre and what is up with power scaling I can tell from a single glance author is a heavy one piece fan with how the power scaling is going I understand that garp is powerful but peak madara ”might cause him some trouble like what. To be short this has potential but author really needs to watch out for plot holes it really ruins the immersion. And I like how the story is going with the rain village.
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So far I love it and I do hope you update more often as your a great writer...................................................................................
This is a wholesome fanfic to read, it does good to the heart and we see Garp with a new personality and a new family, plus the story is incredibly well written and phrased, the one who wrote it is a guy who could very well be a college graduate given how well his mind works being the creator of this great fanfic.
More please, haven't seen a fanfic with garp in naruto world,, moree!!!!!! more!!! more more!!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!!
great story, please don’t quit this job, and this rating is only for chapter 2, I’m looking forward to the continuation💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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THE AUTHOR LOVES THIS NOVEL BUT NOT WHY BIG DADDY WHITEBEARD THE NARUTO COULD USE A LOVING FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD BECAUSE THE ADULTS IN NARUTO ABUSE AND BRAINWASH KIDS IN THE NARUTO WORLD NEED OF A FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD., AFTER THE WAR WHITEBEARD APPEARED IN NARUTO WORLD.
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Эта история невероятно крутая. Один из любимейших персонажей, Гарп, теперь и в Наруто.) У вас получилось очень четко передать характер Монки) Большое вам спасибо, автор)
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I like this story and you can use Wood-wood Davil Fruit for MC because it can give user Eternal Youth and Infinite Lifespan by Absorption anything and Everything and Gain powers also though it like Sage Body by Absorb of Sanju blood or fist cell or Death body
i really like how the author has integrated garp's personality also without much difference.
Hhhhjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjsndnbddjeiejbdhwvvdvsbjsvxvhebf Irene we’ve nekejebsbhsbs djjddjdjdns jdndndnd djdjdjd djsjdjdjdn jdndnd hdjdjd jsjdjd jsjdjd jdjdjd jsjdjdh jsjdjd dhsjdjsjs hdjdjdns jsjdjd hsjsjwb jsjsjsbs jsjsjsjs hahahaha
a lot of these stories change the characters to fit their morals and beliefs but you kept it on point for garp so thanks cant wait for more
simply fantastic Garp being a playful and loving grandfather taking care of and remodeling the most dangerous trio in naruto into good people, just this trait already makes this story perfect now putting the theme of war never changing and trying to solve problems with true justice through peaceful means without killing It's something incredible, this story has great potential to be one of the best, I hope Garp helps change the story to a better example, saving the good-hearted people of the Uchiha clan, preventing Sasuke from losing his family and even saving Minato and Kushina, preventing Naruto from suffering childhood.
This is a really good book so far.Hopefully You won't forget about the book.
First off this is a great idea I like the story and how this is going second my only problem is the plot holes like why does donso already have the bandages even though it’s before the massacre and what is up with power scaling I can tell from a single glance author is a heavy one piece fan with how the power scaling is going I understand that garp is powerful but peak madara ”might cause him some trouble like what. To be short this has potential but author really needs to watch out for plot holes it really ruins the immersion. And I like how the story is going with the rain village.
Revelar Spoiler So far I love it and I do hope you update more often as your a great writer...................................................................................
This is a wholesome fanfic to read, it does good to the heart and we see Garp with a new personality and a new family, plus the story is incredibly well written and phrased, the one who wrote it is a guy who could very well be a college graduate given how well his mind works being the creator of this great fanfic.
More please, haven't seen a fanfic with garp in naruto world,, moree!!!!!! more!!! more more!!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!! more!!!
great story, please don’t quit this job, and this rating is only for chapter 2, I’m looking forward to the continuation💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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THE AUTHOR LOVES THIS NOVEL BUT NOT WHY BIG DADDY WHITEBEARD THE NARUTO COULD USE A LOVING FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD BECAUSE THE ADULTS IN NARUTO ABUSE AND BRAINWASH KIDS IN THE NARUTO WORLD NEED OF A FATHER LIKE WHITEBEARD., AFTER THE WAR WHITEBEARD APPEARED IN NARUTO WORLD.
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dont stop this story man. its great and got huge potential