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It's just outstanding, one of the best Dragon ball and DC Universe crossover fanfiction I've read
Great Idea Author For me I would have preferred a reincarnator even though he only knows the names of characters from the dc world without the plot knowledge. Anyways here is your 5 stars for writing a new fic. 👍👍👍👌
Apesar do início ter algumas palavras floridas, melhorou depois,é um pouco lenta,mas é uma ótima história, não é só copiar um verso,ele adaptou e criou seu próprio fundo de verso, espero que continue......
Well... This is CLEARLY written by AI and badly edited by the author... Lots of texts, beautiful words, almost no dialog, sometimes repeat the same thing but said in another manner and fails at the context and other important bits of a story. The Saiyan race here is nerfed by 99%. Where a Super Saiyan God BLUE cannot destroy a mere "Star Destroyer" aka, a spaceship. Then they lose the war and mc is sent to DC ... I have read some very good AI made stories. but those were edited by the author to be good. Very likely author gives some promps and has the AI write the chapter instead of writing a rough version himself and sent it to the AI to edit and polish.
tbh i enjoy reading this story but the Ai is overpowering the enjoyment of this story sigh. _______________________________________________________---
Boring writing, lots of beautiful words but useless sometimes entire sentences like that, a character who should be a scientist from a superior race behaves like a child with anger problems, until the current chapter we have an unpleasant protagonist and a story that doesn't progress because it stays beating around the bush with words that only prolong things.
already read all chaps it was good and don't mind the negative reviews I bet they didn't even read till Chp 15+
don't be discourage by the earlier chaps. till chapter 12 i think, as the as the narrative writing will be toned down and more on character interaction, which is not between one dimensional characters as they have their own perks. i kinda find it slow pace though. yooo,,, author how many harems do you plan for orach??.... interesting book by the way.
Interested so far. But I have to say, I think the author changed Superman fundamentally. Particularly the first time MC met him. After resolving the initial misunderstanding and healing Hal, Superman punches him? really? later on also includes scenes where it doesn't make sense for superman to do that or out of character. Either the author changed him a bit intentionally or didn't truly understand how clark thinks. But beyond that, so far im still interested how this will go
Dude, I was reading and stuff, but what's written is almost all AI, lots of big, beautiful words with a twist to say directly what it is. the story is good, yes, but written like that it doesn't
Honestly, I don't like it, the author takes too much time to tell things, which makes it boring, and that adding that the protagonist is a walking cliché, he literally looks like the typical shonen protagonists, naive, kind of stupid (that is, the guy listened to cyborg explain why he couldn't control himself and still blames him, and the worst thing is that he is a scientist, who can't control his emotions), and that he is embarrassed by stupid things.
The story was generated by AI, making it unlikable and boring to read. There are too many words that don't convey much meaning, and it feels off. It seems like there isn't a single chapter written by a human.
idk but well it good just a Saiyan who got stranded in unknown world that we reader know that is DC and note that this Saiyan is not reincarnate soul one but the original Saiyan.Seriously do I read a story with just a narrator voice more often than the character voice.🤔🤔🤔
It's just outstanding, one of the best Dragon ball and DC Universe crossover fanfiction I've read
Great Idea Author For me I would have preferred a reincarnator even though he only knows the names of characters from the dc world without the plot knowledge. Anyways here is your 5 stars for writing a new fic. 👍👍👍👌
Apesar do início ter algumas palavras floridas, melhorou depois,é um pouco lenta,mas é uma ótima história, não é só copiar um verso,ele adaptou e criou seu próprio fundo de verso, espero que continue......
Well... This is CLEARLY written by AI and badly edited by the author... Lots of texts, beautiful words, almost no dialog, sometimes repeat the same thing but said in another manner and fails at the context and other important bits of a story. The Saiyan race here is nerfed by 99%. Where a Super Saiyan God BLUE cannot destroy a mere "Star Destroyer" aka, a spaceship. Then they lose the war and mc is sent to DC ... I have read some very good AI made stories. but those were edited by the author to be good. Very likely author gives some promps and has the AI write the chapter instead of writing a rough version himself and sent it to the AI to edit and polish.
tbh i enjoy reading this story but the Ai is overpowering the enjoyment of this story sigh. _______________________________________________________---
Boring writing, lots of beautiful words but useless sometimes entire sentences like that, a character who should be a scientist from a superior race behaves like a child with anger problems, until the current chapter we have an unpleasant protagonist and a story that doesn't progress because it stays beating around the bush with words that only prolong things.
already read all chaps it was good and don't mind the negative reviews I bet they didn't even read till Chp 15+
don't be discourage by the earlier chaps. till chapter 12 i think, as the as the narrative writing will be toned down and more on character interaction, which is not between one dimensional characters as they have their own perks. i kinda find it slow pace though. yooo,,, author how many harems do you plan for orach??.... interesting book by the way.
Interested so far. But I have to say, I think the author changed Superman fundamentally. Particularly the first time MC met him. After resolving the initial misunderstanding and healing Hal, Superman punches him? really? later on also includes scenes where it doesn't make sense for superman to do that or out of character. Either the author changed him a bit intentionally or didn't truly understand how clark thinks. But beyond that, so far im still interested how this will go
Dude, I was reading and stuff, but what's written is almost all AI, lots of big, beautiful words with a twist to say directly what it is. the story is good, yes, but written like that it doesn't
Honestly, I don't like it, the author takes too much time to tell things, which makes it boring, and that adding that the protagonist is a walking cliché, he literally looks like the typical shonen protagonists, naive, kind of stupid (that is, the guy listened to cyborg explain why he couldn't control himself and still blames him, and the worst thing is that he is a scientist, who can't control his emotions), and that he is embarrassed by stupid things.
The story was generated by AI, making it unlikable and boring to read. There are too many words that don't convey much meaning, and it feels off. It seems like there isn't a single chapter written by a human.
idk but well it good just a Saiyan who got stranded in unknown world that we reader know that is DC and note that this Saiyan is not reincarnate soul one but the original Saiyan.Seriously do I read a story with just a narrator voice more often than the character voice.🤔🤔🤔
Good book with stable characters. Tad slow on updating but pleasing to read