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I personally like the MC and his borderline insanityl.Very good..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I dropped ! this was a bit too much for me to handle but the writing quality and story progression is good I have read till he went to oversee Romania after that well it was personally disgusting for me but damn I thought i knew gore and crazy 😹 I was so wrong. I would love to see another story from author but preferably not a crazy mad scientist 😹💀 seriously the amount of time i had the urge & curiosity to just torture the shit of that mad scientist and see his reaction to see what would make him feel miserable made me rethink about my sanity 😂
im just venting my frustration of this story that made me so invested and disappointed.
good shit, evil mc, not thinking with his dic. average comedy? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I like this book coz it fits the type of characters I like in novels,would have been a 5 star but u lazy and take long to update
Amazing novel love it hope you post more and don’t just drop it like most people do
What's with the rating? This job deserves a lot more. 1½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒2½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒3½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒4½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒5½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒6½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒
The work is good, although the updates are not as frequent as I would like. i like the big chapters and the pace of the story. Although MC is a clichéd genius for DxD, this is also presented better than in other similar cases and he does not collect stars out of nowhere.
in general the work is interesting (I read up to chapter 9 and glanced at the current chapters superficially) I like the 'Villain/scientist' protagonist, I always found this type of protagonist interesting. my only complaint would be the fact that I didn't get to the dxd "cannon", I'm very curious about what the interactions with the main characters of the original work would be like, but I see that I can only wait until I get there.
Great Story looking for more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
haven't even read this but for author killing and torture is better than ntr lol
More chapters please don't stop pumping them out.[img=recommend]. You better not slow down[img=faceslap][img=faceslap[img=faceslap]][img=faceslap]
on the scale of 1 to boring story, it try so hard to be unique yet it fail flat with that very reason. dxd fanfics is always filled with overly edgy characters and this one not much different.
.................................................................................................................................................. At first it was interesting, but then the author spoiled my mood. In short, I don’t recommend reading this. .....................................................................................
I don't know why it is showing Translational Quality instead of Writing quality in my review, but whatever, Let's start with Writing Quality... Grammer and all is good, Pov change is also done decently which also gives us some depth and thought process of characters which makes me come to my next point, Characters are portrayed nicely with respect to Devil Society, updated schedule is wonderful of 3 or 4 chapters per week, mind you, average chapter length is around 4K, Let's talk about MC now, Personally he is the type of Mc which checks my all lists, somethings are different from the ideal Mc I like, but that makes the story interesting itself as it changed a bit of feature of my ideal too... anyway, I like Mc's ambition and what he generally does, Dxd generally has harem route heavily focused, so it's fun to see good world building of magic and all, Author is also responsive which makes commenting fun as well, This all facts make me genuinely anticipate the next chapter instead of stacking chapters straight and such fics for me can be counted on one hand, so Author-san keep up the good work. I will also try to find some flaws in this fic which I might have ignored previously, so you can perfect your craft.
This one of the best dxd fan fiction becaus of the author research and very thoughtful writing. I love him having evil mc character. But I didn’t like is having rais in harem why just why her I mean mc suppose to enjoy life not be control by little gril other gril I fine not rais as 1 could not see anybenifit of her and why did accepts other arrangements he is suppose to be neutral evil to benefit himself he will do anything. ANd I not could see any benefits of her and more his child will be named gremory if child have other clan trait. And she is not loyal to him. what about or mc have personality to take advantage of anything.
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Dropped. I have nothing to complain about, the author writes well, he respects the rules of the DxD world, he keeps the characters' personalities close to the original material. It's an excellent fanfiction. Unfortunately I won't continue, the protagonist's characterization is that of a 100% chaotic evil psychopath lol, I don't like reading things like that. Those who don't care about this can read without fear, they won't regret it.
Фанфик превратился в дно ибо вот все у гг хорошо все спланировано но типо аджука эго разоблачает такой бред блять ей богу[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Auto 5 star, the author said no clone stuff, recommended, not like the stupid marvel fanfic with clone drama too stupid [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Median.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I don't understand the main character family. The devil trait is being smart but he acts a little dumb. No offense but the mc makes a skill and the family instantly know how to do it. if that possible then he should know his brother magic just like that by looking at it.
I love this so far especially the mc so far except some minor things. Like the oc Characters especially like the maid or Alice. Also don't really like latia being so close to the mc honestly but ehh it's your story and it's very good.
I personally like the MC and his borderline insanityl.Very good..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I dropped ! this was a bit too much for me to handle but the writing quality and story progression is good I have read till he went to oversee Romania after that well it was personally disgusting for me but damn I thought i knew gore and crazy 😹 I was so wrong. I would love to see another story from author but preferably not a crazy mad scientist 😹💀 seriously the amount of time i had the urge & curiosity to just torture the shit of that mad scientist and see his reaction to see what would make him feel miserable made me rethink about my sanity 😂
im just venting my frustration of this story that made me so invested and disappointed.
good shit, evil mc, not thinking with his dic. average comedy? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I like this book coz it fits the type of characters I like in novels,would have been a 5 star but u lazy and take long to update
Amazing novel love it hope you post more and don’t just drop it like most people do
What's with the rating? This job deserves a lot more. 1½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒2½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒3½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒4½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒5½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒6½¹⅓¹¼¹⅕¹⅙¹⅐¹⅛¹⅑¹⅒
The work is good, although the updates are not as frequent as I would like. i like the big chapters and the pace of the story. Although MC is a clichéd genius for DxD, this is also presented better than in other similar cases and he does not collect stars out of nowhere.
in general the work is interesting (I read up to chapter 9 and glanced at the current chapters superficially) I like the 'Villain/scientist' protagonist, I always found this type of protagonist interesting. my only complaint would be the fact that I didn't get to the dxd "cannon", I'm very curious about what the interactions with the main characters of the original work would be like, but I see that I can only wait until I get there.
Great Story looking for more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
haven't even read this but for author killing and torture is better than ntr lol
More chapters please don't stop pumping them out.[img=recommend]. You better not slow down[img=faceslap][img=faceslap[img=faceslap]][img=faceslap]
on the scale of 1 to boring story, it try so hard to be unique yet it fail flat with that very reason. dxd fanfics is always filled with overly edgy characters and this one not much different.
.................................................................................................................................................. At first it was interesting, but then the author spoiled my mood. In short, I don’t recommend reading this. .....................................................................................
I don't know why it is showing Translational Quality instead of Writing quality in my review, but whatever, Let's start with Writing Quality... Grammer and all is good, Pov change is also done decently which also gives us some depth and thought process of characters which makes me come to my next point, Characters are portrayed nicely with respect to Devil Society, updated schedule is wonderful of 3 or 4 chapters per week, mind you, average chapter length is around 4K, Let's talk about MC now, Personally he is the type of Mc which checks my all lists, somethings are different from the ideal Mc I like, but that makes the story interesting itself as it changed a bit of feature of my ideal too... anyway, I like Mc's ambition and what he generally does, Dxd generally has harem route heavily focused, so it's fun to see good world building of magic and all, Author is also responsive which makes commenting fun as well, This all facts make me genuinely anticipate the next chapter instead of stacking chapters straight and such fics for me can be counted on one hand, so Author-san keep up the good work. I will also try to find some flaws in this fic which I might have ignored previously, so you can perfect your craft.
This one of the best dxd fan fiction becaus of the author research and very thoughtful writing. I love him having evil mc character. But I didn’t like is having rais in harem why just why her I mean mc suppose to enjoy life not be control by little gril other gril I fine not rais as 1 could not see anybenifit of her and why did accepts other arrangements he is suppose to be neutral evil to benefit himself he will do anything. ANd I not could see any benefits of her and more his child will be named gremory if child have other clan trait. And she is not loyal to him. what about or mc have personality to take advantage of anything.
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Dropped. I have nothing to complain about, the author writes well, he respects the rules of the DxD world, he keeps the characters' personalities close to the original material. It's an excellent fanfiction. Unfortunately I won't continue, the protagonist's characterization is that of a 100% chaotic evil psychopath lol, I don't like reading things like that. Those who don't care about this can read without fear, they won't regret it.
Фанфик превратился в дно ибо вот все у гг хорошо все спланировано но типо аджука эго разоблачает такой бред блять ей богу[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Auto 5 star, the author said no clone stuff, recommended, not like the stupid marvel fanfic with clone drama too stupid [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Median.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I don't understand the main character family. The devil trait is being smart but he acts a little dumb. No offense but the mc makes a skill and the family instantly know how to do it. if that possible then he should know his brother magic just like that by looking at it.
I love this so far especially the mc so far except some minor things. Like the oc Characters especially like the maid or Alice. Also don't really like latia being so close to the mc honestly but ehh it's your story and it's very good.
Love it it is very entertaining good job so far keep going