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Great book. Everyone should give it a shot. interesting abilities, and the main character earns his growth instead of just clicking a button. Also, the world is well designed and interesting.
im realyyy enjoying the book ! great harem btw prob one of the best i ever read the only sad thing about this book is that it doesnt have enough chapters (yet) pls keep it up author your doing great!!
Best 18+ novel I’ve ever read on this app. Story and characters are great, looking forward to more updates and chapters!
Absolutely loving the story find myself waiting for every new chapter after binging the already released ones keep up the amazing work always going to get my golden tickets
Is the story abandonded? I'd love to know if Author have dropped it or not, and why it has been dropped. Its such a pity when a high quality story gets dropped like that.
I love it, I started to read and I was instantly hooked, the story is unique and fun even the power system is unique I never read a novel with psionic powers where it was this, for a lack of better words, 'whole'. all the other psionic power based novels are like telekinesis and done, but here are many different kinds of psionic powers and it is always interesting to read more about them. the world building is really good there is a thorough background story. it is my favorite book till now and really worth it to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This was one of the few novels I picked to find something new to read and turned out better than expected. The free chapters give a good grasp on the story to decide if it’s up your alley I believe. The mc is a free spirit which works well with how its set in the universe so plenty to explore. He also enjoys researching in his lab on occasion or watching battles. Background or side characters come across well with some fun personalities. Story goes at a steady pace that lets information come across more organically and setting up future events or characters we will see in a natural way. The hive and the mc’s growth that has happened but even more so that has yet to happen will definitely be fun to read. It does have spelling mistakes here and there but at least for me it didn’t mess with the flow while reading. Anyway I found it an enjoyable read and will continue to as hopefully it goes on for a long time. It’s definitely worth a shot to see if you’ll like it.
Very well written book good characters, good main character main character in a DOM. He’s not super naïve. Just an all-around good story good progression good building a good power ARC just a really gifted story.
Good strong main character Austin supporting side characters just overall good it had some snow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody good strong main character. Awesome supporting side characters just overall good. It has some slow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody.
at ch13 and i love it so far almost dropped it cus of the harem tag . thank god i didnt. its not the harem that you might think of. just give it a shot you wont regret it (probably).
After reading shadow slave for quite a while and stumbled upon this gold I was quite disappointed. First, the writing is so bad I couldn't understand who's talking. Second, there's no proper spacing as well as proper uppercasing. Overall, everything is great! The only problem is the writing.
This is really good. Over 120ch and I've enjoyed pretty much every single one. The characters are well written, and the setting is also very well done. As far as harems go, it honestly ranks up pretty high on the list. It's a premise I haven't seen before, and it's been done very well too. Thanks for writing this and sticking with it! I have a couple questions for author though. Will there be ntr/sharing/yaoi? I doubt there will, but it's always good to ask. Also will there be yuri in the harem/group activities? A lot of the non hive love interests are giving me vibes that it might happen later. It isn't a deal breaker but I'd like to know if it will happen and what "level" it would be at. If you have questions, I can help clarify 😄
The writing style was god awful to read. Grammatical errors every other word. The only good thing it had going for it was the somewhat unique storyline. There was simply too many errors for it to be a good read.
on chapter 110 the author is starting to open up the world and it feels like the story is about to take off. all previous chapters were good introduction, character development and teeing up what promises to be a spectacular space drama. This story is not overly focused on the underlying system as most stories in this space are but the power scaling is trickle fed in a way to move the plot forward bit by bit. Not a typical harem system but strangely romantic when you least expect it. Looking forward to the rest!
-read to chapter 30. Spelling and grammatical errors all over. (Not hard to understand the meaning though since it’s often just words that sound the same but are spelled differently are used like plain and plane, but there are still other errors.) Missing punctuation in some places. (Not a big deal but there’s gonna be some run-on sentences and kinda odd sentence structure) Still a very fun read. Highly recommended, just wish someone could proofread it
vambora autor, cade os capitolos mestre vamoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo PORTUGUES pt br.,.,.,.,.,,...,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,.,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,,,.,.,,,,,,,,.,,,.,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,
It’s good. Ive Been looking for hive mind stories for a while now alltho i have to admit it isnt exaclty what i was looking for but i like it
Although the author could improve his grammar and structure a bit, the story is amazing and fun. It’s very unique and I’m enjoying it greatly. I wish I could fast forward into the future to read the whole thing when it has all its chaps released😫. Keep it up author!
My first time giving a review, anyway i love these book and it's characters and how he is literaly the lover of a whole hive👍
I really Like the uniquenes of the Konzept of this Story the Rest is also pretty Good
the best harem novel fr fr. very fun read interesting world and characters. Excited to read more
Great story amazing concept new and original hope you keep writing and I wish u the best of luck in life
It's really a great book, but there are some things I didn't like, although I'm not in the current chapters yet, but I don't see the protagonist using everything he can to get stronger, the queen has hundreds of races and races in her database. the protagonist decides to make basic improvements to it, the other bad thing is the grammar
Great book. Everyone should give it a shot. interesting abilities, and the main character earns his growth instead of just clicking a button. Also, the world is well designed and interesting.
im realyyy enjoying the book ! great harem btw prob one of the best i ever read the only sad thing about this book is that it doesnt have enough chapters (yet) pls keep it up author your doing great!!
Best 18+ novel I’ve ever read on this app. Story and characters are great, looking forward to more updates and chapters!
Absolutely loving the story find myself waiting for every new chapter after binging the already released ones keep up the amazing work always going to get my golden tickets
Is the story abandonded? I'd love to know if Author have dropped it or not, and why it has been dropped. Its such a pity when a high quality story gets dropped like that.
I love it, I started to read and I was instantly hooked, the story is unique and fun even the power system is unique I never read a novel with psionic powers where it was this, for a lack of better words, 'whole'. all the other psionic power based novels are like telekinesis and done, but here are many different kinds of psionic powers and it is always interesting to read more about them. the world building is really good there is a thorough background story. it is my favorite book till now and really worth it to read.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This was one of the few novels I picked to find something new to read and turned out better than expected. The free chapters give a good grasp on the story to decide if it’s up your alley I believe. The mc is a free spirit which works well with how its set in the universe so plenty to explore. He also enjoys researching in his lab on occasion or watching battles. Background or side characters come across well with some fun personalities. Story goes at a steady pace that lets information come across more organically and setting up future events or characters we will see in a natural way. The hive and the mc’s growth that has happened but even more so that has yet to happen will definitely be fun to read. It does have spelling mistakes here and there but at least for me it didn’t mess with the flow while reading. Anyway I found it an enjoyable read and will continue to as hopefully it goes on for a long time. It’s definitely worth a shot to see if you’ll like it.
Very well written book good characters, good main character main character in a DOM. He’s not super naïve. Just an all-around good story good progression good building a good power ARC just a really gifted story.
Good strong main character Austin supporting side characters just overall good it had some snow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody good strong main character. Awesome supporting side characters just overall good. It has some slow points but it is really good Reed enjoy everybody.
at ch13 and i love it so far almost dropped it cus of the harem tag . thank god i didnt. its not the harem that you might think of. just give it a shot you wont regret it (probably).
After reading shadow slave for quite a while and stumbled upon this gold I was quite disappointed. First, the writing is so bad I couldn't understand who's talking. Second, there's no proper spacing as well as proper uppercasing. Overall, everything is great! The only problem is the writing.
This is really good. Over 120ch and I've enjoyed pretty much every single one. The characters are well written, and the setting is also very well done. As far as harems go, it honestly ranks up pretty high on the list. It's a premise I haven't seen before, and it's been done very well too. Thanks for writing this and sticking with it! I have a couple questions for author though. Will there be ntr/sharing/yaoi? I doubt there will, but it's always good to ask. Also will there be yuri in the harem/group activities? A lot of the non hive love interests are giving me vibes that it might happen later. It isn't a deal breaker but I'd like to know if it will happen and what "level" it would be at. If you have questions, I can help clarify 😄
The writing style was god awful to read. Grammatical errors every other word. The only good thing it had going for it was the somewhat unique storyline. There was simply too many errors for it to be a good read.
on chapter 110 the author is starting to open up the world and it feels like the story is about to take off. all previous chapters were good introduction, character development and teeing up what promises to be a spectacular space drama. This story is not overly focused on the underlying system as most stories in this space are but the power scaling is trickle fed in a way to move the plot forward bit by bit. Not a typical harem system but strangely romantic when you least expect it. Looking forward to the rest!
-read to chapter 30. Spelling and grammatical errors all over. (Not hard to understand the meaning though since it’s often just words that sound the same but are spelled differently are used like plain and plane, but there are still other errors.) Missing punctuation in some places. (Not a big deal but there’s gonna be some run-on sentences and kinda odd sentence structure) Still a very fun read. Highly recommended, just wish someone could proofread it
vambora autor, cade os capitolos mestre vamoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo PORTUGUES pt br.,.,.,.,.,,...,.,,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,.,,,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,,,.,.,,,,,,,,.,,,.,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,
It’s good. Ive Been looking for hive mind stories for a while now alltho i have to admit it isnt exaclty what i was looking for but i like it
Although the author could improve his grammar and structure a bit, the story is amazing and fun. It’s very unique and I’m enjoying it greatly. I wish I could fast forward into the future to read the whole thing when it has all its chaps released😫. Keep it up author!
My first time giving a review, anyway i love these book and it's characters and how he is literaly the lover of a whole hive👍
I really Like the uniquenes of the Konzept of this Story the Rest is also pretty Good
the best harem novel fr fr. very fun read interesting world and characters. Excited to read more
Great story amazing concept new and original hope you keep writing and I wish u the best of luck in life
It's really a great book, but there are some things I didn't like, although I'm not in the current chapters yet, but I don't see the protagonist using everything he can to get stronger, the queen has hundreds of races and races in her database. the protagonist decides to make basic improvements to it, the other bad thing is the grammar