Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

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Indra_lord

When I see the name of the novel. From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me. I craved to the strength and certainty of steel. I aspired to the purity of the blessed machine. Your kind cling to your flesh as if it will not decay and fail you. One day the crude biomass that you called a temple will wither and you'll beg my kind to save you. But I am already saved. For the machine is immortal. Even in death i serve the Omnissiah.

LV 15

Iseeyou

I like the novel and idea but I’m really getting beyond sick of people using chat gpt. It’s so robotic and dry and makes the novel feel so fake it’s hard to describe but it makes the story feel so dry.

LV 4

tt_g

It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.

LV 4

Athan1098

No harem or romance, you’re already my favorite author.

LV 15

Gh0st00

I haven't read it yet but what kind of story is good if it doesn't even have a little romance in it if all it will pertain to is mostly technology sounds like a somebody ain't never had any relationships don't know how to write a romance and it ain't got to be all about it but I would like him to have some kind of partner you know like Natasha or something

LV 14

warmonger0007

this is boring and dry ,Chatgpt made it boring and dry,author edit your Chatgpt story to make it seem natural at least

LV 5

Bogdan7

just another AI generated story.........

LV 4

Elyk_Graham

Love the idea of the story but it feel more like a bunch of recaps on what the mic did than an actual story

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Lizrock

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Darth_Ullyses

this is good.. (if this is translated then the translator did a good job)Keep us the excellent work 👏 👏 👏 👏

LV 4

MagnusAugust

This has all the elements of Chinese in it. Weakening of Mc for plot, the experiences of past life are left in the past itself, stupid MC but somehow regarded as genius in the novel, mysterious MC, Chinese cultivation bs. This is just till the chapters that I have read.

LV 1

Concor_Corcoran

To be honest the plot is simply a general version of most other stories. The Golden Finger doesnt really make sense and for being powerful super cliche. Also from reading to the latest chapters, the story seems to be partly written with some type of AI software and seemingly partly edited.

LV 4

Ireallylikereading

well unlike what you think there are actually very good novels without any romance, also i came to this novel Because it doesnt focus on that "bro cant i just read for the story and not the smut".

LV 4

Daoist521575

Why is there so many "QUADRA TYPE 66 JAVELINA" refferences!!!!!

LV 1

secret_1_reader

need few editing and some rewriting else the story is all good. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 14

Project_Traveler

5 ⭐ ...take it slow and don't rush it..you are doing great work..

LV 4

Zed1_Eren_

It's too bad. Here author explains nothing not even why mc started to fight and mainly this fic writing style is too bland. ohh and here mc thinks that Punisher is an OP character as he is Anti-hero😅. mc thinks that only someone who can easily destroy planets can be a Anti Hero 😂. Mc is a pu**y

LV 4

definitely_human

a RAAAAAAHHH !!!!! FOR THE MACHINE GOD RAAAAAAHHHH !!!!