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Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!
The beginning felt rushed and the choices the MC made don’t make sense. The story within the first 5 chapters is very similar to the story super god gene. Even used the situation were the MC hits a transformed girl that leads to several issues for the MC.
Not great. Interactions are lacking and there are a bunch of translation errors that affect greatly reading and comprehending this story
What can I say? The author doesn't have the knowledge or wisdom of human interactions to pull off this novel. There's a lot of nonsensical situations and interactions. The concept is good though but the logic sequences for the character interactions leaves one wanting. I only read the first few chapters. Maybe the author picks his game up later on. Personally I'd rewrite from the beginning to fix some discrepancies. I.E. It is supposed to find a shelter. The MC finds one seemingly immediately after leaving his start point shelter. Start point shelters have newbie protection. But the protection is voided as soon as you leave the room? That doesn't make sense. There's no food or water in the room. You have to leave just to find food, water, and to relieve yourself. What's the point of newbie protection?
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unintelligible gibberish, don't know if it is because the translator is incompetent or the writer is incompetent but it amounts to the same thing, this is unreadable nonsense.
Your story is reallly similar to super gene. From the teleporting to another world to the first soul he gets the levels of genes and needing to eat to get stronger etc. so far there is little difference in the two stories and super gene has something like 3000 chapters.
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there are mistakes in all chapters the author confuses the name of the characters and the story doesn't make any sense
To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history
I like the story, I am fan of slowly getting powerful so looking forward to it
I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.
Just read all the free chapters (so up to chapter 45) unfortunately the story seems to focus more on some random character that is introduced than the main character. In 45 chapters nothing really happened. In fact within the first 15 chapters the main characters system goes through an update that basically disables his ability that makes him special for 3 months. All in all reading it felt like a waste of time and the story doesn’t really flow in a smooth manner. I don’t know if this would even qualify as junk food. I’m not paying for chapters as the free chapters didn’t justify it. If anyone else has and it somehow does a 180 in quality let me know.
what is with the book cover? xD dude got three hand or is it supposed to be a skill?
I don’t care what other may say about this story if what they are saying is bad because I am deeply interested in it.
Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 🙏.
This novel really surprised me, I was just at a moment where I no longer wanted to read anything else, something like reader's block, but I found this novel quite entertaining.The pleasant atmosphere is maintained at all times and the personality of the MC is also really good, I like it a lot and I hope the author continues uploading more chapters
Honestly, the story is really well written. The Mc, Ty, has his own unique path that the author managed to explain and plan in a special way. His background story and motives really are good.
Splendid novel characterized by inspiring characters and grimly appealing worldbuilding. The central concept is as chilling as can be. Apart from human bravery, this world is a desolate and frightening place that is terrorized by beings beyond imagination. The style is very much characteristic to the author, concise, clean, and impactful. Another thing that pops out is the intensely likable main character. Plot is tense. Very tense. Never seen such a colorful combination of post-apocalyptic and wildly dreamlike stuff before wrapped in compact and witty words like this, but I sure do love it.
Story was like some cliche in start but it got better in next chapters, it was interesting and have grabbed my interest. I do recommend it to others. Author, Now I am waiting for more chapters looking at my phone.
More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters!
Mc of this novel is reacting more like a normal human person and I really liked that. Author, keep up the good work. I will keep supporting your work. Hope to receive your more chapters.
The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Comment if you have any questions.
Thank you for giving my book a read, I won’t go to much into detail but if you have any questions before diving in just let me know!
The beginning felt rushed and the choices the MC made don’t make sense. The story within the first 5 chapters is very similar to the story super god gene. Even used the situation were the MC hits a transformed girl that leads to several issues for the MC.
Not great. Interactions are lacking and there are a bunch of translation errors that affect greatly reading and comprehending this story
What can I say? The author doesn't have the knowledge or wisdom of human interactions to pull off this novel. There's a lot of nonsensical situations and interactions. The concept is good though but the logic sequences for the character interactions leaves one wanting. I only read the first few chapters. Maybe the author picks his game up later on. Personally I'd rewrite from the beginning to fix some discrepancies. I.E. It is supposed to find a shelter. The MC finds one seemingly immediately after leaving his start point shelter. Start point shelters have newbie protection. But the protection is voided as soon as you leave the room? That doesn't make sense. There's no food or water in the room. You have to leave just to find food, water, and to relieve yourself. What's the point of newbie protection?
Revelar Spoiler unintelligible gibberish, don't know if it is because the translator is incompetent or the writer is incompetent but it amounts to the same thing, this is unreadable nonsense.
Your story is reallly similar to super gene. From the teleporting to another world to the first soul he gets the levels of genes and needing to eat to get stronger etc. so far there is little difference in the two stories and super gene has something like 3000 chapters.
Revelar Spoiler there are mistakes in all chapters the author confuses the name of the characters and the story doesn't make any sense
To many POV make the history hard to follow and a little boring. The start is good but i would love more focus on the MC. Besive the score i belive that could be a great history
I like the story, I am fan of slowly getting powerful so looking forward to it
I think this would be a good novel if I could actually read it without having to pause and comprehend what the author was trying to say. I’m guessing the authors first language isn’t English which good job I only know English but if you want a more coherent read for native English speakers try downloading grammerly.
Just read all the free chapters (so up to chapter 45) unfortunately the story seems to focus more on some random character that is introduced than the main character. In 45 chapters nothing really happened. In fact within the first 15 chapters the main characters system goes through an update that basically disables his ability that makes him special for 3 months. All in all reading it felt like a waste of time and the story doesn’t really flow in a smooth manner. I don’t know if this would even qualify as junk food. I’m not paying for chapters as the free chapters didn’t justify it. If anyone else has and it somehow does a 180 in quality let me know.
what is with the book cover? xD dude got three hand or is it supposed to be a skill?
I don’t care what other may say about this story if what they are saying is bad because I am deeply interested in it.
Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 🙏.
This novel really surprised me, I was just at a moment where I no longer wanted to read anything else, something like reader's block, but I found this novel quite entertaining.The pleasant atmosphere is maintained at all times and the personality of the MC is also really good, I like it a lot and I hope the author continues uploading more chapters
Honestly, the story is really well written. The Mc, Ty, has his own unique path that the author managed to explain and plan in a special way. His background story and motives really are good.
Splendid novel characterized by inspiring characters and grimly appealing worldbuilding. The central concept is as chilling as can be. Apart from human bravery, this world is a desolate and frightening place that is terrorized by beings beyond imagination. The style is very much characteristic to the author, concise, clean, and impactful. Another thing that pops out is the intensely likable main character. Plot is tense. Very tense. Never seen such a colorful combination of post-apocalyptic and wildly dreamlike stuff before wrapped in compact and witty words like this, but I sure do love it.
Story was like some cliche in start but it got better in next chapters, it was interesting and have grabbed my interest. I do recommend it to others. Author, Now I am waiting for more chapters looking at my phone.
More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters! More Chapters!
Mc of this novel is reacting more like a normal human person and I really liked that. Author, keep up the good work. I will keep supporting your work. Hope to receive your more chapters.
The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Comment if you have any questions.