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this review is based on my personal reason after i read ch 59 The MC is reincarnated as Riser Phenex. He train since he can walked. Not driven by useless pride, and do everything logically. His peerage is more focused in quality rather than quantity, way more better than the original. I like how the MC will pay whatever the price so he can save his loved ones and protect them. Hopefully author can write more chapter, cuz for me this is one of the best fanfic with Riser as the MC and it will be really sad if this fanfic become hiatus. thank you and good luck, author.
The story started out good. Then the mc became a weak chicken. At this point an oc Riser would have been better than an SI one. As he'll still be weak whether he uses his canon knowledge or not. I'm disappointed. Be careful when reading.
excellent way to tell a good story, it feels more realistic to expect that from demons, not all demons are like gremory and that was excellent, only with the ones from the visions you had some problems when adding it but fine as far as I'm concerned. thanks for a good story, it would be nice to make the chapters longer but thanks
The reviews for this story make absolutely no sense. The quality of this story is really good I think so many people are used to this edgy op no personality characters and then get mad when one has actual depth and background to his strength. This is definitely a top 10 for me in quality Ffs on here it’s really good
I can blame the author for trying to make a very interesting plot twist and get bashed for it. Down sides of the fic: some of the characters are a bit exaggerated, like Ria's, risers parents and so on. Up side of the fic: the author uses the bad situation and turns it into a better one with more freedom to do as he wishes with better connections. Spoiler warning: I'm 50 chapters in, yes his parents are awful, but he gets his bishop and teacher back with his own estate, new peerage and new stronger connections.
Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei,
it started off decent but then he changed the personalities of all the characters in the story to fit his plot which just ruins it, ay that point its not a fanfic its just a story borrowing character templates anyways just save yourself the disappointment don't read this unless you're really bored
The story is amazing It's more relestic with the devil Mc trains's and use's his brain and is not op in a short time span So keep up the good work
a really good start and unique story line am looking forward to see what you'd do moving forward. also what would you do with the parents. Will you go revenge route or something else.
Author help this poor reader a little tell me who is the character that is on the novel cover.
i dont really care if its stolem as long as its: a better translated work, more interesting than the original, more convenient and accessable, or if the story is good and i just cant be bothered to search it up.
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Author I hope you continue this story as the original author has dropped it, it is a pretty good story and not a wish fulfillment one.
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I really enjoyed the first 14 chapters of the fanfic it is rare that I even write a review so I just wanted to say that this story is going great so far and I’m enjoying to way to story is progressing. I’m looking forward to the future of this fanfic and hope it is now one of the ones that get dropped and abandoned in the future.
Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs and harem in this novel ?
Love the novel so far only thing I hope you explore his wind abilities more I find riser fanfics tend to completely forget wind is also part of the clan ability. Also I hope mc don't get a scared gear or sharingan or some other visual bs power when they are so many cool wind and fire abilities.
Quite good and interesting start. Hope we see how he will interact with Rias hahahah. However you should add that he got reincarnated as Riser Phenex into your synopsis and change the story picture because I thought a girl got reincarnated into dxd for the first impression.
Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs and harem in this novel ?
I'm still waiting for more/the author to continue, it's been months and i get sad Everytime i peer at this story only to see no new chapters
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this review is based on my personal reason after i read ch 59 The MC is reincarnated as Riser Phenex. He train since he can walked. Not driven by useless pride, and do everything logically. His peerage is more focused in quality rather than quantity, way more better than the original. I like how the MC will pay whatever the price so he can save his loved ones and protect them. Hopefully author can write more chapter, cuz for me this is one of the best fanfic with Riser as the MC and it will be really sad if this fanfic become hiatus. thank you and good luck, author.
The story started out good. Then the mc became a weak chicken. At this point an oc Riser would have been better than an SI one. As he'll still be weak whether he uses his canon knowledge or not. I'm disappointed. Be careful when reading.
excellent way to tell a good story, it feels more realistic to expect that from demons, not all demons are like gremory and that was excellent, only with the ones from the visions you had some problems when adding it but fine as far as I'm concerned. thanks for a good story, it would be nice to make the chapters longer but thanks
The reviews for this story make absolutely no sense. The quality of this story is really good I think so many people are used to this edgy op no personality characters and then get mad when one has actual depth and background to his strength. This is definitely a top 10 for me in quality Ffs on here it’s really good
I can blame the author for trying to make a very interesting plot twist and get bashed for it. Down sides of the fic: some of the characters are a bit exaggerated, like Ria's, risers parents and so on. Up side of the fic: the author uses the bad situation and turns it into a better one with more freedom to do as he wishes with better connections. Spoiler warning: I'm 50 chapters in, yes his parents are awful, but he gets his bishop and teacher back with his own estate, new peerage and new stronger connections.
Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei, Eu gostei,
it started off decent but then he changed the personalities of all the characters in the story to fit his plot which just ruins it, ay that point its not a fanfic its just a story borrowing character templates anyways just save yourself the disappointment don't read this unless you're really bored
The story is amazing It's more relestic with the devil Mc trains's and use's his brain and is not op in a short time span So keep up the good work
a really good start and unique story line am looking forward to see what you'd do moving forward. also what would you do with the parents. Will you go revenge route or something else.
Author help this poor reader a little tell me who is the character that is on the novel cover.
i dont really care if its stolem as long as its: a better translated work, more interesting than the original, more convenient and accessable, or if the story is good and i just cant be bothered to search it up.
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Author I hope you continue this story as the original author has dropped it, it is a pretty good story and not a wish fulfillment one.
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Revelar Spoiler nul c'est juste un riser qui n'est pas un pervert [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I really enjoyed the first 14 chapters of the fanfic it is rare that I even write a review so I just wanted to say that this story is going great so far and I’m enjoying to way to story is progressing. I’m looking forward to the future of this fanfic and hope it is now one of the ones that get dropped and abandoned in the future.
Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs and harem in this novel ?
Love the novel so far only thing I hope you explore his wind abilities more I find riser fanfics tend to completely forget wind is also part of the clan ability. Also I hope mc don't get a scared gear or sharingan or some other visual bs power when they are so many cool wind and fire abilities.
Quite good and interesting start. Hope we see how he will interact with Rias hahahah. However you should add that he got reincarnated as Riser Phenex into your synopsis and change the story picture because I thought a girl got reincarnated into dxd for the first impression.
Hello author I wanted to know if there is seggs and harem in this novel ?
I'm still waiting for more/the author to continue, it's been months and i get sad Everytime i peer at this story only to see no new chapters