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I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.
I think the author has improved so much since the last time I read this novel. The descriptions are getting more detailed, and the world of the novel is slowly coming together! I've had such a fun time trying to solve the mystery that the author has been trying the create.
The author's narrations is direct and descriptive. No unnecessary parts but plenty of points where mysteries are introduced, making the readers guess what would happen next. Writing is good too, except some paragraphs that are very long😅.
Honestly I love story that takes place inside a book of the characters universe. It allows use the reader to see how competent our protagonist and a bit of their personality by how they choose to interact with the story they find themselves in. The writing style is a conversational based with some detail about the happening going on and some background detail. I like it. The writing is smoothly connected and the transitions between scenes are smooth. you can tell the author is genuinely invested and cares about their story. 5 stars your doing a great job, keep it up
Wow I'm actually surprised to find myself enjoying this book. Amazing writing. A little emotional but it has it's charm too. I definitely recommend.💪💪💪❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
After reading the newer chapters, I think that the author has improved their writing and storyline a lot, and I'm very excited to see what else the author has in store.
The romance was sweet, it really hit my heart with love. Good job, very details and clear writing styles. I added it to my library! Every each of character had it own unique sense, that make me really can tell which one is which. And it story goes move interesting and more addicting the more I read it. Good job for author and good luck, I love your book! Wish to see it until the end.
when the writer thinking and the story writing are impressive and I like it
An engaging storyline, a nicely done background, and slick character design make this book one to read. The plot is balanced and fun to read.
So hello as a fellow writer who writes in this specific genre i have completed till chapter 15 i can assure you that the more you will read it the more you will drawn towards the story. also i like reading the other world story and good character and an interesting plot hooks you in the story... also one advice i know it's hard but yeah be a little more descriptive .. 100% i recommend the story. keep up the good work!
Exciting, engaging, enticing and enthralling! This work checks all the boxes of a promising novel. Great penmanship, strong plot, and intriguing characters. My only regret is that it has too few chapters. I have already read till the end, I need more chapters! Author please update soon!
Not only is your story enthralling, but your writing style is absolutely brilliant. Every word is meticulously chosen, and your prose flows effortlessly, painting vivid images in my mind. It is evident that you have poured your heart and soul into creating this masterpiece, and it truly shows. Cleo and Cecil for the win
Wow, just wow! This book blew me away with its clever, genre-blending premise. Is an ordinary person randomly getting tossed into a mysterious magical dimension? Yes, please! I enjoyed trying to solve the mystery alongside the protagonist. Highly original stuff. 100 recommend 👌
For fans of isekai, this book is a must-read! ✨️ I thoroughly enjoyed delving into this captivating story. The author has crafted a fascinating magical world populated with characters who truly draw you in. I found myself eagerly turning the pages, eager to uncover how the story would unfold. Additionally, Cecil is a character who adds an extra layer of enjoyment to the narrative. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for an immersive and enchanting read. 🌸
Very well wrtitten, very much into the genre tropes but also a very fun read. Author is using a lot of small references to Greek mythology which I love. Definitely worth a read!
The writing is interesting, and the introduction was captivating. I would definitely recommend this as a fun new story. The writer is off to a good attempt for what seems to be an early start. However, I would like to see more development in terms of visual description (what the characters, environment, and other things looks like). I'd like to see a more fleshed out background and a bit more meat to this tale. With that being said, I wish the author the best on his/her writing voyage. With all that being said, I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.
Good work, interesting script, good setting, with a fluid reading without major traffic jams. Within the Isekai genre it has a good chance of being one of the good ones.
Such a great story with interesting characters. The plot is intriguing and it hook me in. I can’t wait for more 🔥
Hey! I like it :) Keep up good work. What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world. I think I will look up ur novel after few weeks also!
This isekai has potential....the beginning comes off pretty well it pushes you into the characters and the small world for awhile and it adds context to the novel the character likes. This novel has potential
The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.
Shameless author alert! Just giving myself a review for all the hard work I've done for this. And maybe boost my reviews a bit. Hope you enjoy the story!
I like the concept, since I'm a big fan of isekai/reincarnation stories. The first chapter really drew me in. I can't want for there to be more chapters!
It's only in the first chapter yet but the story looks promising... Keep it up and i upload more chapters... I might change my review after remembering some more.
Its a great novel and i think it really hooks u in since the start, and i would totally suggest everyone at least give it a try and see if its for them.
I must say this story is so good that I have to write a review. Overall, the writing quality is good, the plot and romance was done nicely. Although the isekai plot of dying by trunk-kun is overused, who doesn't like trunk-kun? I feel like it deserves to have its character seeing how it is used all the time. Anyways, I have one complaint though. it's the spacing! Please, space your work! I can't stress how important this is! No reader likes reading a very long paragraph. It just kills the mood. That's the only thing keeping me back from giving a complete five star review. Continue writing this story, Author. May the story bless you.
I think the author has improved so much since the last time I read this novel. The descriptions are getting more detailed, and the world of the novel is slowly coming together! I've had such a fun time trying to solve the mystery that the author has been trying the create.
The author's narrations is direct and descriptive. No unnecessary parts but plenty of points where mysteries are introduced, making the readers guess what would happen next. Writing is good too, except some paragraphs that are very long😅.
Honestly I love story that takes place inside a book of the characters universe. It allows use the reader to see how competent our protagonist and a bit of their personality by how they choose to interact with the story they find themselves in. The writing style is a conversational based with some detail about the happening going on and some background detail. I like it. The writing is smoothly connected and the transitions between scenes are smooth. you can tell the author is genuinely invested and cares about their story. 5 stars your doing a great job, keep it up
Wow I'm actually surprised to find myself enjoying this book. Amazing writing. A little emotional but it has it's charm too. I definitely recommend.💪💪💪❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
After reading the newer chapters, I think that the author has improved their writing and storyline a lot, and I'm very excited to see what else the author has in store.
The romance was sweet, it really hit my heart with love. Good job, very details and clear writing styles. I added it to my library! Every each of character had it own unique sense, that make me really can tell which one is which. And it story goes move interesting and more addicting the more I read it. Good job for author and good luck, I love your book! Wish to see it until the end.
when the writer thinking and the story writing are impressive and I like it
An engaging storyline, a nicely done background, and slick character design make this book one to read. The plot is balanced and fun to read.
So hello as a fellow writer who writes in this specific genre i have completed till chapter 15 i can assure you that the more you will read it the more you will drawn towards the story. also i like reading the other world story and good character and an interesting plot hooks you in the story... also one advice i know it's hard but yeah be a little more descriptive .. 100% i recommend the story. keep up the good work!
Exciting, engaging, enticing and enthralling! This work checks all the boxes of a promising novel. Great penmanship, strong plot, and intriguing characters. My only regret is that it has too few chapters. I have already read till the end, I need more chapters! Author please update soon!
Not only is your story enthralling, but your writing style is absolutely brilliant. Every word is meticulously chosen, and your prose flows effortlessly, painting vivid images in my mind. It is evident that you have poured your heart and soul into creating this masterpiece, and it truly shows. Cleo and Cecil for the win
Wow, just wow! This book blew me away with its clever, genre-blending premise. Is an ordinary person randomly getting tossed into a mysterious magical dimension? Yes, please! I enjoyed trying to solve the mystery alongside the protagonist. Highly original stuff. 100 recommend 👌
For fans of isekai, this book is a must-read! ✨️ I thoroughly enjoyed delving into this captivating story. The author has crafted a fascinating magical world populated with characters who truly draw you in. I found myself eagerly turning the pages, eager to uncover how the story would unfold. Additionally, Cecil is a character who adds an extra layer of enjoyment to the narrative. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for an immersive and enchanting read. 🌸
Very well wrtitten, very much into the genre tropes but also a very fun read. Author is using a lot of small references to Greek mythology which I love. Definitely worth a read!
The writing is interesting, and the introduction was captivating. I would definitely recommend this as a fun new story. The writer is off to a good attempt for what seems to be an early start. However, I would like to see more development in terms of visual description (what the characters, environment, and other things looks like). I'd like to see a more fleshed out background and a bit more meat to this tale. With that being said, I wish the author the best on his/her writing voyage. With all that being said, I invite the author to check out my adventure fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger (TLV)". It is a spinoff of "Avatar: Macai's Journey (AMJ)". It might help to read the first 1-3 chapters of AMJ first, but I really don't think that's necessary to enjoy this one.
Good work, interesting script, good setting, with a fluid reading without major traffic jams. Within the Isekai genre it has a good chance of being one of the good ones.
Such a great story with interesting characters. The plot is intriguing and it hook me in. I can’t wait for more 🔥
Hey! I like it :) Keep up good work. What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world. I think I will look up ur novel after few weeks also!
This isekai has potential....the beginning comes off pretty well it pushes you into the characters and the small world for awhile and it adds context to the novel the character likes. This novel has potential
The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.
Shameless author alert! Just giving myself a review for all the hard work I've done for this. And maybe boost my reviews a bit. Hope you enjoy the story!
I like the concept, since I'm a big fan of isekai/reincarnation stories. The first chapter really drew me in. I can't want for there to be more chapters!
It's only in the first chapter yet but the story looks promising... Keep it up and i upload more chapters... I might change my review after remembering some more.
Its a great novel and i think it really hooks u in since the start, and i would totally suggest everyone at least give it a try and see if its for them.