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The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.
Great till Chapter 205, then for no reason the author inserted forced romance and ruined it. it's a hot mess. There are better Hollywood themed novels in Webnovel like Versatile Superstar and many others whose names I can't remember. FORCED ROMANCE DISGUSTED ME
It's a nice story. Other works of this author is also good. BTW, I heard an awesome song today - John Mayer - Say - I hope the author corporates this song in this one. It's beautiful!
Brilliant Hollywood novel, really good cheat which doesn’t just give him the skills to succeed. Overall one of my favourite novels of this genre, good to see a different type of mc also.
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Its a good hollywood fic but so far the MC just feels so one dimensional like a perfect character who can never make a mistake. Donating to charity and not seeking revenge like it feels very unnatural ig? Idk
This is actually a masterpiece. The author've created this just by using real life-based information, and that seems actually surreal for me. Obviously, that means that the author has done a lot of research since starting "Tycoon Actor in Hollywood" because you can't just do something like that without giving any kind of preparation ahead. First of all, I think that the relationship between Lucas and Jennifer is really beautiful because it has its own ups and downs. Everyone's had it once in their life. But the main thing is that they'll figure it out together like an indestructible couple of lovers.
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Loving this keep up the good work, only reason am not giving it a 5 is because there's always more room for improvement
While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.
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Gran novela amigo, también hice una portada sobre esta novela jaja, lo hice con un personaje más realista ya que en la novela interactura con gente real, así que se me hace raro hacerlo estilo animación, ojala te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo[img=strong][img=strong] Por cierto en la respuesta dejaré la versión blanca
I think it is the best Hollywood fanfic I've ever read. You know, you will understand me when you read it.[img=Smug]
Ну, это работа действительно хороша, понравился главный герой, хотя то что у него нашлась вторая половинка так рано это немного разочарование на самом деле, ну а так все хорошо!
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There's no spoilers here. 😏 Well anyways, I really love this type of story. #Transmigration #Showbiz #Acting #Career-focus #Cheat
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I love this story and how the writer describes the path of the mc through an alternative Hollywood
Great novel; the pacing is also good, like that he has no system but has powers or skills (which make him different than everyone; who doesn't like an OP MC? ), which makes it a unique experience. Dialogue between characters does not feel forced. Kudos to the author.
I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned. I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned.
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Just read the newest chapter (234) and I’ll have to say I’m really enjoying this story so far. The original characters are done well and the real characters are written fairly similar to how I’d imagine they’d be in real life. I’ll also like to say that I’ve read some of your previous work (Gamer Tycoon) and you’re written has greatly improved since the beginnings of that story. So do keep up the hard work
I like the novel. It's not perfect, but it's entertaining and it has me hooked. i hope you continue to story. Good Luck. Will Lucas try another genre. I would love to see him sing 'Numb' by Linkin Park, one of my favorites. RIP Chester Bennington.
I really liked you other work so I tried this one and I liked the idea but the mc destroyed it its like reading a Chinese novel and I didn't come her for that, i came here to read an American novel I mean I know its not exactly an American novel but if you talking about Hollywood I wanna read similar things about Hollywood not Chinese Hollywood and that's why I gave this 3,4
I love how you done everything with the movies and acting but I think you should try and get more into business side and start building up his business empire
Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..
The writing is essentially GPT-slop. At least 60% of the wordcount could be removed and it would only leave a better story behind. Characters feel disingenuous, as every piece of stilted dialogue has been turned into fancy-sounding drivel by letting the AI (re-?)write it for you, and it really killed any chance of it ever becoming a decent story. Other than that, it drags on to a ridiculous degree, some movies taking up an endless amount of time for no reason, with scenes repeated from different points of view. Every movie generally feels the same in the characters' reactions and the general progression, which leaves behind a boring, repetitive story full of holes and an extreme overuse of AI writing. It's also very clear that you haven't done sufficient research on how movie-making, auditions or general Hollywood works. Then there's the songs forced into every project, even when they don't even remotely fit. Overall, you should be pretty ashamed of this. If it had at least been your own writing, it might be a bit more interesting, but when you run everything through an AI and just release it like that, your own voice and style is completely lost. What's left behind is a story with zero soul. Hopefully you find some way to raise your standards if you want to keep writing, if you can even call this writing.
Great till Chapter 205, then for no reason the author inserted forced romance and ruined it. it's a hot mess. There are better Hollywood themed novels in Webnovel like Versatile Superstar and many others whose names I can't remember. FORCED ROMANCE DISGUSTED ME
It's a nice story. Other works of this author is also good. BTW, I heard an awesome song today - John Mayer - Say - I hope the author corporates this song in this one. It's beautiful!
Brilliant Hollywood novel, really good cheat which doesn’t just give him the skills to succeed. Overall one of my favourite novels of this genre, good to see a different type of mc also.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Too much water
Its a good hollywood fic but so far the MC just feels so one dimensional like a perfect character who can never make a mistake. Donating to charity and not seeking revenge like it feels very unnatural ig? Idk
This is actually a masterpiece. The author've created this just by using real life-based information, and that seems actually surreal for me. Obviously, that means that the author has done a lot of research since starting "Tycoon Actor in Hollywood" because you can't just do something like that without giving any kind of preparation ahead. First of all, I think that the relationship between Lucas and Jennifer is really beautiful because it has its own ups and downs. Everyone's had it once in their life. But the main thing is that they'll figure it out together like an indestructible couple of lovers.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Trash
Revelar Spoiler Loving this keep up the good work, only reason am not giving it a 5 is because there's always more room for improvement
While the story is good in general & progressing nicely, the mc feels very one dimensional. See nobody can be good all the time, i am not saying to make him a criminal or anything along those lines, i just feel he is always too good. Taking care of everybody, donating everything, never felling anything bad or taking revenge for that matter, loving somebody all of a sudden, etc. It feels like a game or some mythological who is always calm, virtuous. But it doesn't work actually.
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
Gran novela amigo, también hice una portada sobre esta novela jaja, lo hice con un personaje más realista ya que en la novela interactura con gente real, así que se me hace raro hacerlo estilo animación, ojala te guste, sigue con el buen trabajo[img=strong][img=strong] Por cierto en la respuesta dejaré la versión blanca
I think it is the best Hollywood fanfic I've ever read. You know, you will understand me when you read it.[img=Smug]
Ну, это работа действительно хороша, понравился главный герой, хотя то что у него нашлась вторая половинка так рано это немного разочарование на самом деле, ну а так все хорошо!
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
There's no spoilers here. 😏 Well anyways, I really love this type of story. #Transmigration #Showbiz #Acting #Career-focus #Cheat
Revelar Spoiler I love this story and how the writer describes the path of the mc through an alternative Hollywood
Great novel; the pacing is also good, like that he has no system but has powers or skills (which make him different than everyone; who doesn't like an OP MC? ), which makes it a unique experience. Dialogue between characters does not feel forced. Kudos to the author.
I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned. I like your writing. Story Development is good and stable. Uber's idea is excellent. World Background should be more planned.
I like it.........✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌🖕✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖕✌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just read the newest chapter (234) and I’ll have to say I’m really enjoying this story so far. The original characters are done well and the real characters are written fairly similar to how I’d imagine they’d be in real life. I’ll also like to say that I’ve read some of your previous work (Gamer Tycoon) and you’re written has greatly improved since the beginnings of that story. So do keep up the hard work
I like the novel. It's not perfect, but it's entertaining and it has me hooked. i hope you continue to story. Good Luck. Will Lucas try another genre. I would love to see him sing 'Numb' by Linkin Park, one of my favorites. RIP Chester Bennington.
I really liked you other work so I tried this one and I liked the idea but the mc destroyed it its like reading a Chinese novel and I didn't come her for that, i came here to read an American novel I mean I know its not exactly an American novel but if you talking about Hollywood I wanna read similar things about Hollywood not Chinese Hollywood and that's why I gave this 3,4
I love how you done everything with the movies and acting but I think you should try and get more into business side and start building up his business empire
Please stop dropping your fics in favor a new one. It really frustrating investing time in reading then you just drop it out of nowhere. ..