Legend of The Young Master

LV 15

Jmitch1

The novel is excellent, and has hallmarks of what I enjoy in my stories: political intrigue, war, adventure. Furthermore, the author makes cultivation seem grounded and realistic. The powers people hold and the importance of the common folk and low-ranking warriors. They miss the intricacies of skills and tactics and strategy. That said, I was worried for a moment. I absolutely abhor control skills. And for a bit, I thought the novel would be ruined. Anything that takes away someone’s freedom, is a blight. But, the way the author employs the skills don’t ruin the story. However, I’d say there are some pacing issues. Often, I must say the novel is too slow, and rarely, sometimes too fast. I actually skipped the first 4 chapters outright. Didnt read. The story doesn’t begin until chapter 5. And then there are chapter after chapter of daily things that are at times interesting but at times cumbersome. And I fear at times the author forgets that they need to advance the plot. I can’t go 1/4th of the year with the MC fighting one war. If the plot feels like it’s moving, the story doesn’t feel slow. And there should be purpose to a chapter. When I finish reading a chapter, I should feel as if there was a purpose to it. Sometimes, I’m like, “meh”. In the end, I’m enjoying myself. I hope the novel continues, but I also hope in the future the author tightens up the storytelling.

From being a thug type of gangster to being born into a historic eastern fantasy type of world, the main character's life completely turned 180° lol, I bet it's gonna be fun to See his journey and how he handles his powers. Sure gonna finish this story as more chapters comes out

I'm so excited how will he use his powers in the future, he's just so overpowered even with a little glimpse of his powers,I've always loved overpowered main character.can only give 5 stars cause there isn't more thn 5! this book deserve more starsjust done reading it and I'm already waiting for new chapters..this is definitely going to my bookmark!

LV 2

kofuy

wasn't much of a fan of this genre...recently started reading this genre and I clicked on this book randomly...now I'm addicted to this book...the slow story development makes me feel like I'm growing along with the main character... I'm looking forward to more chapters!!

LV 2

Rohan_Gianni

Felt pity for the old man ngl he's poor and above that he had to take care of our MC, I understand his decision for giving up the Young kid tbh I'm very excited to see what's coming ahead for him and the MC... I have full trust on the writer to meet the expectations😁

Genuinely impressed with the quality. It's easier to understand and connect with the characters, the author's creativity will touch your soul, it really surpassed all my expectations!

LV 1

Ug0ur

I have read 41 chapters so far and I like the pace of the novel, as someone who is tired of novels that immediately get stronger and destroy everyone, I quite like the slow pace and I am very curious to see where it will lead.

Just loved it! Completed all the available chapters in one day hehe, that's how addictive I found this novel , loved the world in this story.. Definitely recommended, try it yourself and you will love the main character and his powers and how he uses it

LV 14

Ethanquiv

Something I appreciate about this book is the writing style, it’s different and refreshing compared to normal novels on Webnovel. Though the novel so far is somewhat slow, I enjoy the build up and accumulation of the main character. I hope the author keeps writing, as I’ve grown to really enjoy this book.

I really appreciate the level of detail and care put into this story by the author. This novel is not another cliche ridden, self fulfillment fantasy, but rather a carefully crafted, work of art. Some may consider it slow, but I love that the author takes the time to carefully build this novel, line upon line, allowing the readers to comfortably sink in to the author's world. I can't think of another original work in webnovel I'd rather read than this. Great job

Impressionnant, vraiment...je n'aurai jamais crû qu'une telle magique existe, peut importe ce les autres dises mais je pense qu'il faut regarder le bon côté

LV 13

Highdaoist

a true gem,.......,,..........,......,...,

Very wonderful story I like it very much I recommend you to read it one time in your life.I am sure you will enjoy it very much 😊❤️😊..............

LV 2

Martin_Donhy

Just loved it! I kinda find it funny and cute to see a beast master who's used to taking care of animals like horses now has to take care of a young kid after being left by his grandpa.. I fr enjoy their conversations lol

LV 15

Nerdyobesegamer

One of the best written books I’ve seen here. Very few grammar/spelling mistakes. The character’s background is short but fully explained and not forgotten by the author. It’s kinda slow right now without any real action (ch 30ish) but it flows well and I’ve got high hopes for where it’s going

LV 1

kyleqi

Now this is how a young master should be! [img=recommend]Two words- Over Powered[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 3

rzs_gr

It s good, I especally liked the start and the first two teachers of the mc. The mc is not idiot, in fact I think this story almost deserves a villain tag.

LV 13

lolbingolol

Is it harem? hope it’s ………………………………………..

LV 2

Lucio_Fay

The main character's powers are really unique fr, loved how the author was clear abt it so it was easy for us to understand, because someone like me finds anything hard to understand that's why I barely open webnovel app but this book is an exception, not really a book person but definitely gonna finish it 🤣😁