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the author deserves a Grammy... take that from me . Ms Author-chan... you have my lower brothers love. For a lady to write a male oriented book capable of captivating male audience amazes me... Much love♥
I just got done with chapter 30... And I have to say the nook is goo so far bit what I want to know is does the MC die and have to gwt a new body and/or his wife witch!??? I read the chapter names and jave have to say I hate them!!! WHAT I WANT TK KNOW IS DOES THE MC DIE OR NOT BECAUSE ONE OD THE CHAPTERS SAYS THE MC DIES I WANT TO KNOW IF HE DOES AND IF HE GETS A NEW BODY AND HAS TO STARTING ALL OVER AGAIN AND IF HE LOSES THE SWORD INSIDE OF HIM AND THE 2 MAGIC SPELLS THAT HE GOT WHEN HE PUT THE RING ON FROM THE WITCH!?? So please let me know what happened from ANYONE that has read that far because I dont want to ewad this book if it happened!!
was loving everything about this novel till he got a power up only to end up dying (lose his body ) i just don't like that kind of development other then that this is a great story 👍
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Ill start off by saying that im not terribly far in the story thus far. The premise, world, and characters have alot of potential in my opinion. I like alot of the dialogue so far, and it seems to be heading in a good direction. Unfortunately, I feel like the pacing is not great. Character relationships develop abnormally quickly, certain, seemingly, major character developments and reveals sort of just happen. Plot points come at you really quickly. I imiagine the author is eager to get into the meat of the story and has plans for where to go, which I like very much. However, I feel as though it comes at the expense of meaningful character development. The beginning exposition is extremely important. I think its worth giving a read to see if its your cup of tea, and I think its entirely possible some of these issues can be straightened out as the story continues. I will say I have been enjoying it, putting aside the aforementioned issues.
Hi Author! There are too many married women in harem? I don’t like that kind of woman. They’re not deserved for Mc’s holy rod. And there were too much other men’s stains and clues in their holes and on their bodies. However their secret cave have used to full with other man’s liquids. after Mc pierce them and then he use his rod with other harem’s members that can make other woman dirty with other men’s stains and clues too.
This is easily a 4.5 star story despite the few things that are quite taboo in the genre. The MC dies, there is a huge timeskip and separation from his wives, there is a short period where the MC is gender swapped, and the MC receives a huge nerf due to said timeskip. Another thing that people may not like is the fact that the MC is constantly abused over and over by his wives, often times to the point of almost dying. However if you push past said things it is a pretty entertaining read.
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I was going to read it till I saw the 'punishment' part, I can see where this got inspired from, but this unfortunately isn't my cup of tea.
I simply loved the work, the construction of characters, the construction of the world, I'm happy that the author didn't follow the path of the protagonist having all the powers of the world, thus having a new female body (the idea of starting over to create a solid base and good, but the female body is frustrating). Author by the caps I could tell that you read that other famous vampire novel there, I sincerely hope it doesn't take the same direction.
The book is good but it seems The author is highly inspired from another book " Reincarnated with Van Hellsing System" .... They are very similar
It was a great story until chapter 30 its the first pay to read chapter and the mc begins to hide his identity and author gives a terrible reason. Also author claims he gives notice that the mc changes gender but doesn’t. He says it as genre which you would not associate with gender than criticizes people and tells them to skip part of the story
pro; a decent book drawing from many other books painting a simple to understand power structure that makes it easy to digest and interesting enough to draw you in. irrelevant power ups are skipped, and fight scenes are engaging yet succinct enough not to be annoying. cons; mental health issues being prolonged and exaggerated in a rather irritating manner. 13 years and 60 chapters later, a grown man in a child's body still doesn't understand his own self. fiction is a gateway away from the mundane and self evident failures of real life, who wants to escape real life to deal with a man-child. 5/10 for me, easily consumable but nasty plot issues.
Bardzo fajnie się to czyta przyjemne i dobrze napisane mc też jest bardzo dobry i czekam na więcej :......................... ..............
an easy 4.2 out of 5 for me, this review is only based on the first 60+ chapters. The writing quality is good, only problem for me would be inconsistent length of the chapters that effect the price for the chapters like some are 20+ and some are 9 to 10. The story is very interesting even though I have read a fair share of vampire stories this one is still unique in its own way, even though there are reference from famous works but that's make it better for me so i really like the humour and the plot of the story. Some characters are not flushed out and are there just to get face slapped by mc, or either to develop the plot more, not all but some. The world has not been explored but from the auxiliary chapter about the World building it looks promising.
story was absolutely great, enjoyable had twosts and ups and downs, low points and high points, was ruined at chapter 100, when the mc dies, his women basically abandoned for 10 years due to it and then is reincarnated in A WOMANS BODY. maybe mention genderbend in the tags in the synopsis or something, waste of 1000 coins/ 20 bucks. Other than that it was well written, with just a few grammar issues and 2 nontranslated paragraphs.
Another 5 stars because I want. I like the novel and the author, so yeah...............................................................................
I love this book so far pace is great, the investment of each character is amazing
Chapters felt Short but Works Character designs are Weak People Don't feel Alive needs work Writing Style is Good but Can Improve a lot in-depth and minor details are completely missing
This is such a great novel, I’m happy that I found it relatively early. The world building and characters are what makes this fun. You’ll see familiar names from novels, biblical lore, and mythologies. Now don’t worry, there may be some similarities but the authors taken their own unique spin on things. Few things make me happier than a novel that has a stupid OP mom that’ll do practically anything for their kid, so even excluding my bias I would still recommend everyone try this out. (One thing to note is that the author has stated English isn’t their first language, but don’t be scared! The grammar is really good, and doesn’t mess with the immersion.)
The story is great, that's all... But why? Because the author writes it with love, not only to milk money but really cares to deliver something that the readers like, an epic adventure with Dante being an excellent MC, smart, hardworking, kind to his lovers but ruthless to his enemies. The main female leads have different personalities and are very pleasant. I'm not going to say that everything is perfect, but the author is learning from each mistake and taking readers' feedback, so give it a try, you might be surprised at how enjoyable this story can be.
obra brasileira ? Very good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello Author, could you say if there will be Yuri or not (I hope not). Just my opinion but I don't think it's cool to put in the story and there are a lot of people who don't like it and lose interest because of it. But it's just my opinion and the author is you, so if you want to put it forward, go ahead with full respect.
Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I make them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thanks for reading! There is a moment in the novel where there is a punishment for our MC so that he stays in a female body for a few chapters, they can be skipped if you don't want to read, please don't come and hate me, please be a normal person . This is not a Yuri, it is not "Gay" as they say. Just don't read it if you don't like it, please...
the author deserves a Grammy... take that from me . Ms Author-chan... you have my lower brothers love. For a lady to write a male oriented book capable of captivating male audience amazes me... Much love♥
I just got done with chapter 30... And I have to say the nook is goo so far bit what I want to know is does the MC die and have to gwt a new body and/or his wife witch!??? I read the chapter names and jave have to say I hate them!!! WHAT I WANT TK KNOW IS DOES THE MC DIE OR NOT BECAUSE ONE OD THE CHAPTERS SAYS THE MC DIES I WANT TO KNOW IF HE DOES AND IF HE GETS A NEW BODY AND HAS TO STARTING ALL OVER AGAIN AND IF HE LOSES THE SWORD INSIDE OF HIM AND THE 2 MAGIC SPELLS THAT HE GOT WHEN HE PUT THE RING ON FROM THE WITCH!?? So please let me know what happened from ANYONE that has read that far because I dont want to ewad this book if it happened!!
was loving everything about this novel till he got a power up only to end up dying (lose his body ) i just don't like that kind of development other then that this is a great story 👍
Revelar Spoiler Ill start off by saying that im not terribly far in the story thus far. The premise, world, and characters have alot of potential in my opinion. I like alot of the dialogue so far, and it seems to be heading in a good direction. Unfortunately, I feel like the pacing is not great. Character relationships develop abnormally quickly, certain, seemingly, major character developments and reveals sort of just happen. Plot points come at you really quickly. I imiagine the author is eager to get into the meat of the story and has plans for where to go, which I like very much. However, I feel as though it comes at the expense of meaningful character development. The beginning exposition is extremely important. I think its worth giving a read to see if its your cup of tea, and I think its entirely possible some of these issues can be straightened out as the story continues. I will say I have been enjoying it, putting aside the aforementioned issues.
Hi Author! There are too many married women in harem? I don’t like that kind of woman. They’re not deserved for Mc’s holy rod. And there were too much other men’s stains and clues in their holes and on their bodies. However their secret cave have used to full with other man’s liquids. after Mc pierce them and then he use his rod with other harem’s members that can make other woman dirty with other men’s stains and clues too.
This is easily a 4.5 star story despite the few things that are quite taboo in the genre. The MC dies, there is a huge timeskip and separation from his wives, there is a short period where the MC is gender swapped, and the MC receives a huge nerf due to said timeskip. Another thing that people may not like is the fact that the MC is constantly abused over and over by his wives, often times to the point of almost dying. However if you push past said things it is a pretty entertaining read.
Revelar Spoiler I was going to read it till I saw the 'punishment' part, I can see where this got inspired from, but this unfortunately isn't my cup of tea.
I simply loved the work, the construction of characters, the construction of the world, I'm happy that the author didn't follow the path of the protagonist having all the powers of the world, thus having a new female body (the idea of starting over to create a solid base and good, but the female body is frustrating). Author by the caps I could tell that you read that other famous vampire novel there, I sincerely hope it doesn't take the same direction.
The book is good but it seems The author is highly inspired from another book " Reincarnated with Van Hellsing System" .... They are very similar
It was a great story until chapter 30 its the first pay to read chapter and the mc begins to hide his identity and author gives a terrible reason. Also author claims he gives notice that the mc changes gender but doesn’t. He says it as genre which you would not associate with gender than criticizes people and tells them to skip part of the story
pro; a decent book drawing from many other books painting a simple to understand power structure that makes it easy to digest and interesting enough to draw you in. irrelevant power ups are skipped, and fight scenes are engaging yet succinct enough not to be annoying. cons; mental health issues being prolonged and exaggerated in a rather irritating manner. 13 years and 60 chapters later, a grown man in a child's body still doesn't understand his own self. fiction is a gateway away from the mundane and self evident failures of real life, who wants to escape real life to deal with a man-child. 5/10 for me, easily consumable but nasty plot issues.
Bardzo fajnie się to czyta przyjemne i dobrze napisane mc też jest bardzo dobry i czekam na więcej :......................... ..............
an easy 4.2 out of 5 for me, this review is only based on the first 60+ chapters. The writing quality is good, only problem for me would be inconsistent length of the chapters that effect the price for the chapters like some are 20+ and some are 9 to 10. The story is very interesting even though I have read a fair share of vampire stories this one is still unique in its own way, even though there are reference from famous works but that's make it better for me so i really like the humour and the plot of the story. Some characters are not flushed out and are there just to get face slapped by mc, or either to develop the plot more, not all but some. The world has not been explored but from the auxiliary chapter about the World building it looks promising.
story was absolutely great, enjoyable had twosts and ups and downs, low points and high points, was ruined at chapter 100, when the mc dies, his women basically abandoned for 10 years due to it and then is reincarnated in A WOMANS BODY. maybe mention genderbend in the tags in the synopsis or something, waste of 1000 coins/ 20 bucks. Other than that it was well written, with just a few grammar issues and 2 nontranslated paragraphs.
Another 5 stars because I want. I like the novel and the author, so yeah...............................................................................
I love this book so far pace is great, the investment of each character is amazing
Chapters felt Short but Works Character designs are Weak People Don't feel Alive needs work Writing Style is Good but Can Improve a lot in-depth and minor details are completely missing
This is such a great novel, I’m happy that I found it relatively early. The world building and characters are what makes this fun. You’ll see familiar names from novels, biblical lore, and mythologies. Now don’t worry, there may be some similarities but the authors taken their own unique spin on things. Few things make me happier than a novel that has a stupid OP mom that’ll do practically anything for their kid, so even excluding my bias I would still recommend everyone try this out. (One thing to note is that the author has stated English isn’t their first language, but don’t be scared! The grammar is really good, and doesn’t mess with the immersion.)
The story is great, that's all... But why? Because the author writes it with love, not only to milk money but really cares to deliver something that the readers like, an epic adventure with Dante being an excellent MC, smart, hardworking, kind to his lovers but ruthless to his enemies. The main female leads have different personalities and are very pleasant. I'm not going to say that everything is perfect, but the author is learning from each mistake and taking readers' feedback, so give it a try, you might be surprised at how enjoyable this story can be.
obra brasileira ? Very good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hello Author, could you say if there will be Yuri or not (I hope not). Just my opinion but I don't think it's cool to put in the story and there are a lot of people who don't like it and lose interest because of it. But it's just my opinion and the author is you, so if you want to put it forward, go ahead with full respect.
Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I make them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thanks for reading! There is a moment in the novel where there is a punishment for our MC so that he stays in a female body for a few chapters, they can be skipped if you don't want to read, please don't come and hate me, please be a normal person . This is not a Yuri, it is not "Gay" as they say. Just don't read it if you don't like it, please...