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I'm writing this after finishing chapter 36. The beginning was good, and I really liked the idea, then Felicia, and I've seen this or a similar thread too many times, so I didn't like it very much, boss... you probably already know, and although I wanted to get into this part, it was somehow difficult for me. Then I couldn't get back into the story until the point where he was talking to the guy on the bridge before the jump, then I just kept going through the chapters without paying much attention to them, just thinking "again? ". Overall, I lost interest in this story
Just the sneak peak of the MC The first chapter. Makes me want to kill myself. The plot may seem interesting. But there is a reason these types of depressing and also yes kind of funny, characters are SIDE CHARACTERS in any novel. It's because when ur main emotion is lethargy. the audience wants to vomit.
This book is an absolute riot! 😂 I haven't laughed this hard in quite some time—it's totally my kind of humor. Dude, keep those updates rolling. I need more of this hilarious goodness in my life. It totally surpassed my expectations. 👏 Can't wait for what's next!
This is a high-quality and original fanfic based on the Marvel universe, I read it in one breath and recommend it to everyone. I hope the author will continue to delight readers. (Google Translate)
didn't really expect much but wow man this is a gemunlike those stupid general power fantasies this is fresh thanks a lotand keep updating at this paceDONT YOU DARE DROP MONGREL!!!
The snopsis is fvking perfect it's your execution of the story. Like him and valerie passing outside of his old apartment you would recognize the person who saved you no mater how much time passed. And him meeting black cat is completely different to the snopsis. So like I said it's the execution of the story that has me and how stupid it is in parts are is you go back and redo the story to the quality of the snopsis with a lot more time and thought into the time gap between some actions then it would be 5 stars.P.S. Would love to keep reading but until you can fix the story and how stupid he is I wont be reading. (couldn't he have gone to the Baxter buildings and seen if they could figure out straight away?)
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Loving the novel so far for how dark it is there is also quite a bit of humor and happiness so I feel everything is pretty balanced so far!
good story ruined by stupid mc and villains with dumb plot armor . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .
How many love interests will there be? I don't like harem stories, but I can accept it if there are 2, maximum 3 love interests. And I like the story, so I decided to ask now so that if there is a harem, I will end with positive impressions.
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This is am absolute banger. Grim as a character is likeable and his interactions with other characters just exudes his charm. Keep up the great work author!
Very much enjoyed so far however was expecting mc to meet up with Valeria after reawakening so a lil disappointed but it’s cool and pretty much exactly what I’d want for myself if I could have any 1 wish granted
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so far everything's good I like how the book started I like the character and he's got the perfect power for someone who wants to die making him not able to die
you managed to make me cry in 6 chapters a great start i say ...please don't drop 🙏🥺
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Please in the name of the Holy Emperor of Man pull this off and you'll be on the right path to Holy Terra. I haven't started to read but the synopsis I have high hopes
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I'm writing this after finishing chapter 36. The beginning was good, and I really liked the idea, then Felicia, and I've seen this or a similar thread too many times, so I didn't like it very much, boss... you probably already know, and although I wanted to get into this part, it was somehow difficult for me. Then I couldn't get back into the story until the point where he was talking to the guy on the bridge before the jump, then I just kept going through the chapters without paying much attention to them, just thinking "again? ". Overall, I lost interest in this story
Just the sneak peak of the MC The first chapter. Makes me want to kill myself. The plot may seem interesting. But there is a reason these types of depressing and also yes kind of funny, characters are SIDE CHARACTERS in any novel. It's because when ur main emotion is lethargy. the audience wants to vomit.
This book is an absolute riot! 😂 I haven't laughed this hard in quite some time—it's totally my kind of humor. Dude, keep those updates rolling. I need more of this hilarious goodness in my life. It totally surpassed my expectations. 👏 Can't wait for what's next!
This is a high-quality and original fanfic based on the Marvel universe, I read it in one breath and recommend it to everyone. I hope the author will continue to delight readers. (Google Translate)
didn't really expect much but wow man this is a gemunlike those stupid general power fantasies this is fresh thanks a lotand keep updating at this paceDONT YOU DARE DROP MONGREL!!!
The snopsis is fvking perfect it's your execution of the story. Like him and valerie passing outside of his old apartment you would recognize the person who saved you no mater how much time passed. And him meeting black cat is completely different to the snopsis. So like I said it's the execution of the story that has me and how stupid it is in parts are is you go back and redo the story to the quality of the snopsis with a lot more time and thought into the time gap between some actions then it would be 5 stars.P.S. Would love to keep reading but until you can fix the story and how stupid he is I wont be reading. (couldn't he have gone to the Baxter buildings and seen if they could figure out straight away?)
Revelar Spoiler Loving the novel so far for how dark it is there is also quite a bit of humor and happiness so I feel everything is pretty balanced so far!
good story ruined by stupid mc and villains with dumb plot armor . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .
How many love interests will there be? I don't like harem stories, but I can accept it if there are 2, maximum 3 love interests. And I like the story, so I decided to ask now so that if there is a harem, I will end with positive impressions.
Muy emotivo el inicio con Valerie, jajajs me haz hecho lagrimear[img=update][img=update][img=update] [img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is am absolute banger. Grim as a character is likeable and his interactions with other characters just exudes his charm. Keep up the great work author!
Very much enjoyed so far however was expecting mc to meet up with Valeria after reawakening so a lil disappointed but it’s cool and pretty much exactly what I’d want for myself if I could have any 1 wish granted
Revelar Spoiler so far everything's good I like how the book started I like the character and he's got the perfect power for someone who wants to die making him not able to die
you managed to make me cry in 6 chapters a great start i say ...please don't drop 🙏🥺
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Please in the name of the Holy Emperor of Man pull this off and you'll be on the right path to Holy Terra. I haven't started to read but the synopsis I have high hopes
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