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Escreva uma avaliaçãoI like that the author continues with the story despite the people who criticize him in the comments 👏
it is a good fanfic BUT and a hige BUT the writing style tends to stretch out the story/stories into several chapters that includes info dumping, a few predictable dialogues and a few cringey moments. Still this a a good fanfic story. You need to have a lot of patience when reading the story as the author tends overstretch the story as I mentioned earlier that it would tempt you skip one or two chapters especially if you are familiar with the HP movies or books. Kudos though to the author as some chapters are indeed engaging enough to encourage you to read further. If you lack some patience you can skip the unecessary or predictable parts as this is still a good fanfic to read
I find this book extraordinary with the way you travel between the world's from where I left off I look forward to the tournament of the wizards and a suggestion for the third world to gain more power I would suggest charmed because you can get a lot of magic powers
I like this novel, it's very interesting. Harry Potter The Journey to godhood. The story is very good and well develop. With the way it's going, I can see the mc becoming some sort of Godlike Magical Ancestor in the future with a Powerful Family that spend a cross Universes. He is an Animagus ( he is able to transform into a Dragon), and now that he fused himself with the blood of Daenerys Targaryen it can be said that he practically created a bloodline that gives it's user the ability to control Dragons, transform into a Dragon, enhance the user overall body constitution, the immunity to fire and the ability to use and learn magics. This is practically the definition of a Powerful Ancestor. I can't wait to see how his children and future bloodlines will develop.
Revelar SpoilerA fairly solid book but it’s so cliche it’s hard to read sometimes. With the tri wizard tournament arc I find it to be an unwise choice to have anyone besides the mc and Harry to participate. It just means we will just be reading chapters that don’t have the mc as the center point in the plot, and honestly that can be fine and even enhance the story but the author has shown that he doesn’t do well with that. Mainly in the chapters of Cho Chang in the World Cup and hermione in the dueling championships. After he swapped back to the Harry Potter world the book honestly became unbearably boring to read. But overall it’s decent and I hope it gets better.
Revelar Spoilerthe story, so far is good, but there is an excessive amount of chapters where 1/3 is just "he's so handsome"; and the summoning system will mostly be just plot-convinient "oh I got it last month" stuff
I like this story because there's no system and the the reason why I put one less star on the story development is I feel like he rushed the first few chapters more specifically him getting immediately out of the orphanage I feel like you would have to talk to Dumbledore because technically he is the guardian of all Wizarding children of non-wispering origin
Es una buena historia pero la estoy dejando(capitulo 44), tal vez sea porque no estoy del humor adecuado para leerla ahora, pero me cansó. El MC hace cualquier estupidez y ya tiene a todo Hogwarts alabándolo y a todas las chicas detrás de él como si hubiera hecho algo milagroso. El desarrollo de los personajes es pobre, parece que todos menos el MC pierden las neuronas cuando hablan con él, incluyendo los profesores. Los capítulos son demasiado cortos y hay muchos capítulos innecesarios sobre temas poco importantes(como el partido contra Rogers), esas escenas podrían ponerse todas en un solo capitulo.
Revelar SpoilerI have read alot of OP MC in my time. The fic here is fine and your writing quality is really clean with not alot of grammar or spelling problem. But the only problem im having is each chapters are shorts and the lack of flaws of MC kinda make the storylines abit boring..If its ok, can lessen the amount of girls flocking onto MC. It's giving me headaches as it blocking the growth of the story from getting interesting. Thanks[img=recommend]
Muito bom mesmo só têm uma falha não têm maís cap. Agora Sobre a história como um cara que pôde usar magia, e pôde se transforma em dragão ficar tão em defeso que tem que fugir com o rabinho entre as pernas.
Alric I am coming. Wait !!!!! Best fanfic I have ever read till now . Don't drop It. Best. Don't forget I am coming to take you to GODHOOD!!!!
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ah lyk eet... but where's the pokemons? give him pokemonsssss, most of HP's magical creatures are ugly, bring in the pokemons 🤣🤣
The story is super good. it is well written and very enjoyable. The characters are well written as well and so is the world although it is the same old hp world i felt interested in reading the explanations instead of skimming through them. Mc is cool calm and collected most of the time which i really enjoy, i do wish we could have more of the monthly summons in the story it was introduced fairly early but not used as much in the later portions of the story. The explanations are very interesting including other worlds and universes. I wish to see more about other worlds idk how i would feel about him traveling to other worlds but if written correctly it could be very good and interesting i do wonder how his power would transfer world to world if magic or mana reacts the same in other worlds as hp. Enough rambling but it is a very good story would love to see how the story progresses and continues hopefully we can get updates soon and this story isnt dropped HIGHLY RECOMENDED READ!!!!!!!
Revelar SpoilerI enjoy how it's told its slow enough so it doesn't feel like it's jumping here and there but also fast enough so it doesn't feel standing still, the dialog is actual talking back and forth and just driving the plot forward, it has a nice story so far to OP but OP done right
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Good story, interesting story idea. The only drawback in my opinion is that Mc is too charm-grazing with girls and most likely has. Harem? To be honest I'm a bit tired of reading Ff HP whose prontagonist has a harem. If the writer made another HP story, could it make Mc oc female and not harem? Don't make him a supporting role either but really prontagonist (Draco or harry is fine, but I'm more cloudy Draco as a couple. Maybe Draco could have changed for the better if he had been friends with mc earlier)
For God's sake, when and if you choose a romantic partner for the main character, show at least a little originality and do not use Daphne or Fleur, who are chosen by everyone. Actually, I'd be rooting for Ginny. I don't remember a single fanfiction where she was.
I like that the author continues with the story despite the people who criticize him in the comments 👏
it is a good fanfic BUT and a hige BUT the writing style tends to stretch out the story/stories into several chapters that includes info dumping, a few predictable dialogues and a few cringey moments. Still this a a good fanfic story. You need to have a lot of patience when reading the story as the author tends overstretch the story as I mentioned earlier that it would tempt you skip one or two chapters especially if you are familiar with the HP movies or books. Kudos though to the author as some chapters are indeed engaging enough to encourage you to read further. If you lack some patience you can skip the unecessary or predictable parts as this is still a good fanfic to read
I find this book extraordinary with the way you travel between the world's from where I left off I look forward to the tournament of the wizards and a suggestion for the third world to gain more power I would suggest charmed because you can get a lot of magic powers
I like this novel, it's very interesting. Harry Potter The Journey to godhood. The story is very good and well develop. With the way it's going, I can see the mc becoming some sort of Godlike Magical Ancestor in the future with a Powerful Family that spend a cross Universes. He is an Animagus ( he is able to transform into a Dragon), and now that he fused himself with the blood of Daenerys Targaryen it can be said that he practically created a bloodline that gives it's user the ability to control Dragons, transform into a Dragon, enhance the user overall body constitution, the immunity to fire and the ability to use and learn magics. This is practically the definition of a Powerful Ancestor. I can't wait to see how his children and future bloodlines will develop.
Revelar SpoilerA fairly solid book but it’s so cliche it’s hard to read sometimes. With the tri wizard tournament arc I find it to be an unwise choice to have anyone besides the mc and Harry to participate. It just means we will just be reading chapters that don’t have the mc as the center point in the plot, and honestly that can be fine and even enhance the story but the author has shown that he doesn’t do well with that. Mainly in the chapters of Cho Chang in the World Cup and hermione in the dueling championships. After he swapped back to the Harry Potter world the book honestly became unbearably boring to read. But overall it’s decent and I hope it gets better.
Revelar Spoilerthe story, so far is good, but there is an excessive amount of chapters where 1/3 is just "he's so handsome"; and the summoning system will mostly be just plot-convinient "oh I got it last month" stuff
I like this story because there's no system and the the reason why I put one less star on the story development is I feel like he rushed the first few chapters more specifically him getting immediately out of the orphanage I feel like you would have to talk to Dumbledore because technically he is the guardian of all Wizarding children of non-wispering origin
Es una buena historia pero la estoy dejando(capitulo 44), tal vez sea porque no estoy del humor adecuado para leerla ahora, pero me cansó. El MC hace cualquier estupidez y ya tiene a todo Hogwarts alabándolo y a todas las chicas detrás de él como si hubiera hecho algo milagroso. El desarrollo de los personajes es pobre, parece que todos menos el MC pierden las neuronas cuando hablan con él, incluyendo los profesores. Los capítulos son demasiado cortos y hay muchos capítulos innecesarios sobre temas poco importantes(como el partido contra Rogers), esas escenas podrían ponerse todas en un solo capitulo.
Revelar SpoilerI have read alot of OP MC in my time. The fic here is fine and your writing quality is really clean with not alot of grammar or spelling problem. But the only problem im having is each chapters are shorts and the lack of flaws of MC kinda make the storylines abit boring..If its ok, can lessen the amount of girls flocking onto MC. It's giving me headaches as it blocking the growth of the story from getting interesting. Thanks[img=recommend]
Muito bom mesmo só têm uma falha não têm maís cap. Agora Sobre a história como um cara que pôde usar magia, e pôde se transforma em dragão ficar tão em defeso que tem que fugir com o rabinho entre as pernas.
Alric I am coming. Wait !!!!! Best fanfic I have ever read till now . Don't drop It. Best. Don't forget I am coming to take you to GODHOOD!!!!
gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo gracias por el capitulo
ah lyk eet... but where's the pokemons? give him pokemonsssss, most of HP's magical creatures are ugly, bring in the pokemons 🤣🤣
The story is super good. it is well written and very enjoyable. The characters are well written as well and so is the world although it is the same old hp world i felt interested in reading the explanations instead of skimming through them. Mc is cool calm and collected most of the time which i really enjoy, i do wish we could have more of the monthly summons in the story it was introduced fairly early but not used as much in the later portions of the story. The explanations are very interesting including other worlds and universes. I wish to see more about other worlds idk how i would feel about him traveling to other worlds but if written correctly it could be very good and interesting i do wonder how his power would transfer world to world if magic or mana reacts the same in other worlds as hp. Enough rambling but it is a very good story would love to see how the story progresses and continues hopefully we can get updates soon and this story isnt dropped HIGHLY RECOMENDED READ!!!!!!!
Revelar SpoilerI enjoy how it's told its slow enough so it doesn't feel like it's jumping here and there but also fast enough so it doesn't feel standing still, the dialog is actual talking back and forth and just driving the plot forward, it has a nice story so far to OP but OP done right
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Good story, interesting story idea. The only drawback in my opinion is that Mc is too charm-grazing with girls and most likely has. Harem? To be honest I'm a bit tired of reading Ff HP whose prontagonist has a harem. If the writer made another HP story, could it make Mc oc female and not harem? Don't make him a supporting role either but really prontagonist (Draco or harry is fine, but I'm more cloudy Draco as a couple. Maybe Draco could have changed for the better if he had been friends with mc earlier)
For God's sake, when and if you choose a romantic partner for the main character, show at least a little originality and do not use Daphne or Fleur, who are chosen by everyone. Actually, I'd be rooting for Ginny. I don't remember a single fanfiction where she was.
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