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I read until the 39th chapter, which is updated on 10.02.2024. I don't understand why so many people gave it low scores. In my opinion, the novel is very interesting and progresses well. From what I understand from the bad reviews, people want the character to get stronger immediately or immediately change the story by disrupting the "DC" plot. Although it may be a good idea in the short term, such a situation will make the novel unreadably boring in the long term. I love it the way you wrote it now and I can't wait to read the rest of the novel. The only illogical point that bothered me so far was that it went to another universe. Technically, he didn't even want to use the travel card he won, he was thrown into another universe without understanding what was happening. This doesn't make sense. The system has its own intelligence and forces the MC to evolve by throwing him into another universe. (I understand why he went to another universe, so he could easily swallow the bad guys and gain their powers, which he couldn't do in his own universe because it would bring a lot of trouble.) [I use google translate when commenting because my English grammar is terrible. If I wrote something that is not understandable, forget it.]
I added this to my library long ago but postponed it as the cover was both a turnoff and flaming hot. Read it whole and its a piece of art. 8.9/10 and the potential of becoming a 10/10
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. I finally foud a character i liked. The prose was good ,I like who he is indifferent , he is not sexual and he does everything in cold blood. I really 😍😍😍love this novels, thank you
Me parece bastante bueno, aunque desearía que el mc tuviera un poco más de pensamiento Crítico,piénsalo tiene una gacha multiversal, puede comprar puntos de gacha con dinero entonces vuélvete loco comprando
Revelar Spoiler
This was a really good idea. And it was pretty good up until you had him go be a part of the brotherhood of assassins. You spent way too long in that place. You had him there for multiple multiple multiple multiple multiple chapters. That should have just been a stop gap until he got powerful enough to escape. But you had an languish there. Then you had the stupid thought to send him to another fking universe. Why would you do that when you haven't even explored the one you're fking currently in? We have seen there are 2 places in the one universe that he was reborn into. Gotham city and the brotherhood of assassins. There's really 2 places we've seen. He hasn't gone to metropolis. He hasn't gone anywhere else in that f****** universe. And he hasn't done anything but stupid missions for the brotherhood. What happened to him getting place of his own? What happened him setting up his own operation? Nothing is going as it should in the book.
I love hating the Injustice verse so much (That must precisely be the writers' goal when they created this universe) ! This verse shows everything that is wrong with the way of thinking of all the characters in the comics! People literally hated Superman for the "unforgivable" act of killing the Joker more than they hated the Joker and Harley for doing what they did! Harley was inexplicably "forgiven" for everything she did! Superboy somehow talked about how awful HE felt about what Superman did to the Joker and not about how Horribly and irreversibly devastated Superman was by what happened , he literally went to confront Superman and, while crying, he dared to ask "Why did you have to kill him? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? How am I supposed to feel about this? How do you expect me to carry that symbol on my chest after what you did ?" . the characters were Idiots for nothing (Flash and Cyborg LITERALLY played school bullies to Robin [Damian Wayne]), persecuted themselves morally for no reason ( during EVERY issue ) , were ridiculously exaggerated, and worst of all, anyone familiar with The canon comics can easily see this entire story actually happening in the original comics for no reason at all . All the things portrayed in this universe actually happened in the canonical comics over many decades of meaningless nonsense ! It's tiring ! It's great to see this in your FanFiction
How about making a Superboy fanfic? There aren't many and the ones that do exist are either bad or abandoned. ................................................................................................................................
Really enjoyed reading this. Among the good fanfics out there for the DC verse.
One of the best ff you can find in here and that is a Huge compliment. A masterpiece - just like Meta Essence ff by EvansKannon
the story is good, the pacing is good, there IS character development, there is a change of perspective and world development, the fanfic is too good to be in the webnovel, I don't even understand how there are people complaining about it! See, the character uses the gacha but he doesn't receive things that make him Op instantly, he doesn't disrespect cosmic beings like most MCs from other works, the author doesn't cut out all the important scenes like the dialogues, he executes everything very well, This author is too good to be in the webnovel! If it were fanfiction or something else, I would even understand, after all, webnovel = harem and Op. Author, I send you a kiss 💋
It's one of your best works yet, I'm always excited for a new chapter to drop. ......................................................................................................................................
Thank u for creating this story, really enjoy reading this story and can´t wait to see what ripples every decission will make and how it will shape the story
This an interesting story I hope the author keeps up the good work. The essence isn’t overpowered . Dc characters abilities aren’t enchanted to the point where mc isn’t always on an uphill battle. Characters that we have seen are fluffy out enough that they aren’t one dimensional.
it's definitely above average. I do think you are rushing through plot though, with mc getting too strong stuff too quickly. The immediate loss of MC's secret identity wasn't great but I think you handled it very well as a method of driving plot forward. The interaction with beings like Klarion and Death so early on are awful though. It trivialises the whole multiverse that the weak mc is worthy of talking to them and not instantly dying. Not to mention they seem like late game forces used too early. who cares about weaker villains when klarion is there from the get go etc.
The story has potential and is quite interesting. I don't like some things and I think he escalates too quickly since I would have preferred him to stay in Gotham but no story is perfect
Revelar Spoiler
so far so good i do hope to see some vengeance of the MC against the league of shadows, that and no wussy justice league shenanigans
Revelar Spoiler
Good idea, poor execution. Pros: - The Gacha started nice, with competent but not overly powerful gains, giving him the power to survive mundane threats. - Attention to little details like how having taskmaster's aptitude and mimicry would change his balance and gait, revealing him as unordinary. Cons: - Started in Gotham again. It's a city that's suffering from a warlock's curse, not transmigration and reincarnation central. - The story lacks proper emotional expression, from both the MC and the other characters. It's only got sentences that states what they are feeling bluntly and adjectives set a tone that is never properly explored. - Plot points lack proper foreshadowing and build up. Like the league of shadows suddenly attacking the MC. It would be fine if there was a paragraph of events leading up to that point afterwards or may snippets, but no, the author just put in a note saying that the league was watching batman for a while. - Too many powerful entities are interacting with the MC, creating a dissonance with the setting. - The MC's personality is bland. He's got traits like being calm but that's it. No proper motivation beyond surviving to be found. But this is early on in the story, so this can change. These are just a few points and critics. The author can improve upon these, making it null. If the author decides to give high intellect to the MC, be aware of mundane plots and situations that this intelligence can help prevent, because judging from the current material, I highly doubt the author can write a proper genius MC.
so far the story is great and it's progressing really well not to fast or to slow just right. the idea is really original and fresh I like it quite a lot
It starts very well, honestly, although the beginning is forced and an event happens for him to go to the league of shadows just because of the reason that the author wants to get the waifus there, the plot starts well for a fanfic... But everything it goes downhill when there is descendant drama, and these multiverse OP entities meddling in the MC's life. Why can't we just have a direct reincarnation? Why does he need to reconcile with his system? Why does it have to be so complicated? Now, in the recent chapter, he was an existence similar to an Edritch god, he was unique, now thanks to his SIMP for his death, he 'forcibly' signed a kind of contract for his soul to be handed over to her if he died thus completely losing its unique status. Yes, this had a lot of potential, but it was completely destroyed by the pointless drama, and these multiverse beings that keep sprouting out of nowhere. It's only the 20th chapter, it's at the power level of a city destroyer, but these beings keep appearing like flies, meh.
The idea is cool, but the story doesn't make sense, full of forced and stupid events and decisions. Although the gacha isn't random at all, I liked how it placed the MC on the street level instead of starting on the city-destroying level, but unfortunately the bad plot ruined the fic for me.
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This story has a massive potential to be great. Already one masterpiece with the Cao Cao story, looking forward to this as well. Please continue both!
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La snopsis es confusa. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I read until the 39th chapter, which is updated on 10.02.2024. I don't understand why so many people gave it low scores. In my opinion, the novel is very interesting and progresses well. From what I understand from the bad reviews, people want the character to get stronger immediately or immediately change the story by disrupting the "DC" plot. Although it may be a good idea in the short term, such a situation will make the novel unreadably boring in the long term. I love it the way you wrote it now and I can't wait to read the rest of the novel. The only illogical point that bothered me so far was that it went to another universe. Technically, he didn't even want to use the travel card he won, he was thrown into another universe without understanding what was happening. This doesn't make sense. The system has its own intelligence and forces the MC to evolve by throwing him into another universe. (I understand why he went to another universe, so he could easily swallow the bad guys and gain their powers, which he couldn't do in his own universe because it would bring a lot of trouble.) [I use google translate when commenting because my English grammar is terrible. If I wrote something that is not understandable, forget it.]
I added this to my library long ago but postponed it as the cover was both a turnoff and flaming hot. Read it whole and its a piece of art. 8.9/10 and the potential of becoming a 10/10
🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩😂🤩👍🤩👍
. I finally foud a character i liked. The prose was good ,I like who he is indifferent , he is not sexual and he does everything in cold blood. I really 😍😍😍love this novels, thank you
Me parece bastante bueno, aunque desearía que el mc tuviera un poco más de pensamiento Crítico,piénsalo tiene una gacha multiversal, puede comprar puntos de gacha con dinero entonces vuélvete loco comprando
Revelar Spoiler This was a really good idea. And it was pretty good up until you had him go be a part of the brotherhood of assassins. You spent way too long in that place. You had him there for multiple multiple multiple multiple multiple chapters. That should have just been a stop gap until he got powerful enough to escape. But you had an languish there. Then you had the stupid thought to send him to another fking universe. Why would you do that when you haven't even explored the one you're fking currently in? We have seen there are 2 places in the one universe that he was reborn into. Gotham city and the brotherhood of assassins. There's really 2 places we've seen. He hasn't gone to metropolis. He hasn't gone anywhere else in that f****** universe. And he hasn't done anything but stupid missions for the brotherhood. What happened to him getting place of his own? What happened him setting up his own operation? Nothing is going as it should in the book.
I love hating the Injustice verse so much (That must precisely be the writers' goal when they created this universe) ! This verse shows everything that is wrong with the way of thinking of all the characters in the comics! People literally hated Superman for the "unforgivable" act of killing the Joker more than they hated the Joker and Harley for doing what they did! Harley was inexplicably "forgiven" for everything she did! Superboy somehow talked about how awful HE felt about what Superman did to the Joker and not about how Horribly and irreversibly devastated Superman was by what happened , he literally went to confront Superman and, while crying, he dared to ask "Why did you have to kill him? HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? How am I supposed to feel about this? How do you expect me to carry that symbol on my chest after what you did ?" . the characters were Idiots for nothing (Flash and Cyborg LITERALLY played school bullies to Robin [Damian Wayne]), persecuted themselves morally for no reason ( during EVERY issue ) , were ridiculously exaggerated, and worst of all, anyone familiar with The canon comics can easily see this entire story actually happening in the original comics for no reason at all . All the things portrayed in this universe actually happened in the canonical comics over many decades of meaningless nonsense ! It's tiring ! It's great to see this in your FanFiction
How about making a Superboy fanfic? There aren't many and the ones that do exist are either bad or abandoned. ................................................................................................................................
Really enjoyed reading this. Among the good fanfics out there for the DC verse.
One of the best ff you can find in here and that is a Huge compliment. A masterpiece - just like Meta Essence ff by EvansKannon
the story is good, the pacing is good, there IS character development, there is a change of perspective and world development, the fanfic is too good to be in the webnovel, I don't even understand how there are people complaining about it! See, the character uses the gacha but he doesn't receive things that make him Op instantly, he doesn't disrespect cosmic beings like most MCs from other works, the author doesn't cut out all the important scenes like the dialogues, he executes everything very well, This author is too good to be in the webnovel! If it were fanfiction or something else, I would even understand, after all, webnovel = harem and Op. Author, I send you a kiss 💋
It's one of your best works yet, I'm always excited for a new chapter to drop. ......................................................................................................................................
Thank u for creating this story, really enjoy reading this story and can´t wait to see what ripples every decission will make and how it will shape the story
This an interesting story I hope the author keeps up the good work. The essence isn’t overpowered . Dc characters abilities aren’t enchanted to the point where mc isn’t always on an uphill battle. Characters that we have seen are fluffy out enough that they aren’t one dimensional.
it's definitely above average. I do think you are rushing through plot though, with mc getting too strong stuff too quickly. The immediate loss of MC's secret identity wasn't great but I think you handled it very well as a method of driving plot forward. The interaction with beings like Klarion and Death so early on are awful though. It trivialises the whole multiverse that the weak mc is worthy of talking to them and not instantly dying. Not to mention they seem like late game forces used too early. who cares about weaker villains when klarion is there from the get go etc.
The story has potential and is quite interesting. I don't like some things and I think he escalates too quickly since I would have preferred him to stay in Gotham but no story is perfect
Revelar Spoiler so far so good i do hope to see some vengeance of the MC against the league of shadows, that and no wussy justice league shenanigans
Revelar Spoiler Good idea, poor execution. Pros: - The Gacha started nice, with competent but not overly powerful gains, giving him the power to survive mundane threats. - Attention to little details like how having taskmaster's aptitude and mimicry would change his balance and gait, revealing him as unordinary. Cons: - Started in Gotham again. It's a city that's suffering from a warlock's curse, not transmigration and reincarnation central. - The story lacks proper emotional expression, from both the MC and the other characters. It's only got sentences that states what they are feeling bluntly and adjectives set a tone that is never properly explored. - Plot points lack proper foreshadowing and build up. Like the league of shadows suddenly attacking the MC. It would be fine if there was a paragraph of events leading up to that point afterwards or may snippets, but no, the author just put in a note saying that the league was watching batman for a while. - Too many powerful entities are interacting with the MC, creating a dissonance with the setting. - The MC's personality is bland. He's got traits like being calm but that's it. No proper motivation beyond surviving to be found. But this is early on in the story, so this can change. These are just a few points and critics. The author can improve upon these, making it null. If the author decides to give high intellect to the MC, be aware of mundane plots and situations that this intelligence can help prevent, because judging from the current material, I highly doubt the author can write a proper genius MC.
so far the story is great and it's progressing really well not to fast or to slow just right. the idea is really original and fresh I like it quite a lot
It starts very well, honestly, although the beginning is forced and an event happens for him to go to the league of shadows just because of the reason that the author wants to get the waifus there, the plot starts well for a fanfic... But everything it goes downhill when there is descendant drama, and these multiverse OP entities meddling in the MC's life. Why can't we just have a direct reincarnation? Why does he need to reconcile with his system? Why does it have to be so complicated? Now, in the recent chapter, he was an existence similar to an Edritch god, he was unique, now thanks to his SIMP for his death, he 'forcibly' signed a kind of contract for his soul to be handed over to her if he died thus completely losing its unique status. Yes, this had a lot of potential, but it was completely destroyed by the pointless drama, and these multiverse beings that keep sprouting out of nowhere. It's only the 20th chapter, it's at the power level of a city destroyer, but these beings keep appearing like flies, meh.
The idea is cool, but the story doesn't make sense, full of forced and stupid events and decisions. Although the gacha isn't random at all, I liked how it placed the MC on the street level instead of starting on the city-destroying level, but unfortunately the bad plot ruined the fic for me.
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This story has a massive potential to be great. Already one masterpiece with the Cao Cao story, looking forward to this as well. Please continue both!
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