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What a heart breaking start (in a good way). The author really does a fantastic job of building up her female lead and the personalities she juggles around with, due to her day to day work. The little frustrations, some big and some small, are start to mesh into one pile. While it phases others around her, she handles it like a pro. But its always the personal things that will hurt her most. Great job building it up author! Looking forward to more!
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A lot of writers struggle with first person, but this author has demonstrated a beautiful power over writing in the first person
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I don't like 1st POV I've said it many times, but oof, I stand corrected. This novel captivated me, it's heartbreaking (in a way I'll never stop loving). But it's beautiful. Can't wait for more. Now, as per tradition:
Great story. Nice character design and word editing. Fast paced but enjoyable. Would love to read more chapters in the future, author san ❤️
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A great start😍. The main character is highly relatable, her emotions and inner feelings vividly presented as narrative. Hope to read more chapters ❤️
What a heart breaking start (in a good way). The author really does a fantastic job of building up her female lead and the personalities she juggles around with, due to her day to day work. The little frustrations, some big and some small, are start to mesh into one pile. While it phases others around her, she handles it like a pro. But its always the personal things that will hurt her most. Great job building it up author! Looking forward to more!
Revelar Spoiler A lot of writers struggle with first person, but this author has demonstrated a beautiful power over writing in the first person
This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. This is too good to not read. yes i am a bot. (no i'm not) or am i?
I don't like 1st POV I've said it many times, but oof, I stand corrected. This novel captivated me, it's heartbreaking (in a way I'll never stop loving). But it's beautiful. Can't wait for more. Now, as per tradition:
Great story. Nice character design and word editing. Fast paced but enjoyable. Would love to read more chapters in the future, author san ❤️
let my grand daughter cook [img=gift][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=strong]
A great start😍. The main character is highly relatable, her emotions and inner feelings vividly presented as narrative. Hope to read more chapters ❤️