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It feels like this was almost entirely written by chatgpt. The main character is only a side character and acts as like a revamped dumbledore.
Nice HP fic! Looking forward for more. Although the changes in the POV and the story seems to focus more on the trio cant help but feel intrigue to the MC like his past and such. Anyways, please keep them coming.
It's mostly a different take from year 3. The main character seems somewhat intriguing and the rest of the cast seems to be fleshed out with personality. One thing that bothers me quite a bit, however, is the endless introduction of random oc's. While I want to learn more about the main character, I'd rather have him interact the normal cast and get insight into him from there, instead we keep introducing these random students that 1) makes no sense 2) haven't brought anything new or good to the table. The muggleborn witch is fine, we could see how the new teacher was perceived by others through her perspective. However, the random italian and ghost?girl were just weird and broke my immersion instantly. While having oc's is kind of fine, they have to be introduced in a controlled manner, these just pop up like mushrooms after rain.
Good but had to stop reading it bc it changes pov a lot and the main character feels like a side character.
Hello author don't want to look rude but can you recommend my novel " I am a Waste who got system " at the end of one of your chapters
good writing and MC a bit of shame that the storie is about a bit too much about the golden trio than the MC sigh
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Surprised by how good the story is, first story I've read where the main character is a professor and somehow isn't annoying or unlikable.
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Giving 5 stars honestly to my fanfiction, I hope to meet the requirements for a good novel, and I also aim to maintain a consistent release of chapters.
Waiting for more chapters to be released. I liked the idea of not focusing so much on the trio of MCs and using their actions to give relevance to other characters.
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The approach proposed by the author is interesting, it revealed a little of the MC's past, but still left a mystery to be solved. Continue with the releases
So far good chapters, and its getting better at focusing on the New teacher's story keep up this pace its very good tô read. He explained well how the spells are used.
Only two chapters but it's going in the rigth direction, Just dont stop and go on with the releases. The story has potential :) :) :) go on go on go on i hope it focuses more on the mc
I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters.
Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more.
I hope it doesnt be another story with a great introduction that after 10 chapters the author simply stpos publishing.. :) :) :) 😀 😃 Keep going please, its always a new student who becomes part of the three, may you write differently
This is a good fanfiction with an interesting main character. But it feels like it started in the middle. There are many unknown terms, flashbacks, and storylines... to be honest, I would like to read the story from the very beginning, when the main character just appeared.
It feels like this was almost entirely written by chatgpt. The main character is only a side character and acts as like a revamped dumbledore.
Nice HP fic! Looking forward for more. Although the changes in the POV and the story seems to focus more on the trio cant help but feel intrigue to the MC like his past and such. Anyways, please keep them coming.
It's mostly a different take from year 3. The main character seems somewhat intriguing and the rest of the cast seems to be fleshed out with personality. One thing that bothers me quite a bit, however, is the endless introduction of random oc's. While I want to learn more about the main character, I'd rather have him interact the normal cast and get insight into him from there, instead we keep introducing these random students that 1) makes no sense 2) haven't brought anything new or good to the table. The muggleborn witch is fine, we could see how the new teacher was perceived by others through her perspective. However, the random italian and ghost?girl were just weird and broke my immersion instantly. While having oc's is kind of fine, they have to be introduced in a controlled manner, these just pop up like mushrooms after rain.
Good but had to stop reading it bc it changes pov a lot and the main character feels like a side character.
Hello author don't want to look rude but can you recommend my novel " I am a Waste who got system " at the end of one of your chapters
good writing and MC a bit of shame that the storie is about a bit too much about the golden trio than the MC sigh
🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩🤩😍😆😆🤩🤩🤩😆😆😍🤩🤩😍😆😆😍🤩🤩
Surprised by how good the story is, first story I've read where the main character is a professor and somehow isn't annoying or unlikable.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Giving 5 stars honestly to my fanfiction, I hope to meet the requirements for a good novel, and I also aim to maintain a consistent release of chapters.
Waiting for more chapters to be released. I liked the idea of not focusing so much on the trio of MCs and using their actions to give relevance to other characters.
I Liked I liked I liked i liked i liked I Liked I liked I liked i liked i liked I Liked I liked I liked i liked i liked I Liked I liked I liked i liked i liked
The approach proposed by the author is interesting, it revealed a little of the MC's past, but still left a mystery to be solved. Continue with the releases
So far good chapters, and its getting better at focusing on the New teacher's story keep up this pace its very good tô read. He explained well how the spells are used.
Only two chapters but it's going in the rigth direction, Just dont stop and go on with the releases. The story has potential :) :) :) go on go on go on i hope it focuses more on the mc
I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters. I liked it, i hope it has more chapters.
Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more. Very good boy, please publising more.
I hope it doesnt be another story with a great introduction that after 10 chapters the author simply stpos publishing.. :) :) :) 😀 😃 Keep going please, its always a new student who becomes part of the three, may you write differently
This is a good fanfiction with an interesting main character. But it feels like it started in the middle. There are many unknown terms, flashbacks, and storylines... to be honest, I would like to read the story from the very beginning, when the main character just appeared.