Reviews of HP: Magic Punk (Completed) by kamidemond - Webnovel

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great and interesting Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like that MC/Orion not op from start (he even weaker than other First Year when he go to Hogwarts).. I like his power (absorb other magical power/creature to make him stronger).. I also like his pet/familiar Red, is rare to see others phoenix beside Fawkes, hope to see/read Red more in the future.. The story is interesting too.. To see Merlin memory, magic power level, etc.. I like that he train Rune, Magic Bender, etc,, to supplement/protect himself from others (especially bully like Malfoy and his gang).. What make me dissapointed is MC/Orion as reincarnator have future knowledge, but why he doesn't changed many thing (like troll insident, Hagrid dragon egg, etc)?? I understand if he afraid to change so much, but little is fine I think.. And why he join Gryffindor?? If it just to know about the plot, it's failed, he often forget about important event like troll, etc.. He can go to Ravenclaw (he doesn't interest other house) instead, it will make the story more interesting.. Maybe make Hermione and Rose (I like genderbend Harry) join him in Ravenclaw.. Please make them his love interest 😍 Who is Nick Iron?? Can't wait to see his reveal.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

1yr
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TheNAlien

A very good book, I definitely want to see the final of this history. Very stable development, a good updating stability and history progress. The history keep you focused and interested with many novelties more than simply the Harry Potter history to explore.

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1yr
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Mamdouh_mohamed

All I'm saying is that the novel is wonderful and no one should listen to the negative comments because they all complain about how quickly the MC gains power. They almost want the MC to become the most powerful magician in the world in twenty chapters.

1yr
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DiligentKraken

satisfying read fun and adventurous 🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘

28d
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Emmanuel_Elias

Una obra muy buena, tiene un gran desarrollo de los personajes principales, denle una oportunidad y seguramente les encantará la historia. Resumen. Orden y Caos, la gerra de mil años hasta la llegada del elegido.... Tan tan tantaaaannnnn.

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1mth
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Naruto_kamikaze

It's a good read if you are one looking for op protaganist. Got some comedy too.

1mth
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Truriy

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😃😄😃😃😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

1mth
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Megatrix123

After my past review which was only 3 stars or something no offense but then this book proceeded to give me the best plot twists ever and I realized this is an insane book even from the start I don't understand how someone can create a plot like so 5 stars.

1mth
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Regulus_Dragneel

freaking loved it.................................................................................................................................................

1mth
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NoNameOrLife

a great novel just the writing and character designs are a bit lacking but still a pretty decent read it has decently used the HP world for fun stuff

2mth
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Elvenerable

Damn if I know that everything is Mc but it would be difficult for you to add a Pov or two of Dafne or Rose or some other female character and maybe not forget them and add more interactions with them and have dates because at this point they seem to be worth kk to the mc I wouldn't be surprised if they kept going or lost interest, damn it, not even a damn kiss or something, they practically forget or ignore it.

2mth
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Voids_TrueOverlord

am dropping this...cause too much drama and unnecessary parallel world intervention to mc world

3mth
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Harshit_Tripathi_2831

I have to say that author have done some quite nice work done here very good mc he started as a lv 0 character who went up to lv 999+ with the most basic of a cheat

3mth
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Akira_TheFallen

I got really frustrated when the whole deal with Hermione began ngl, but i got impressed by the maturity development of the MC, in fact author, you did an amazing job making that, you made him mad for not getting the thing he most wanted but in the end the MC just let it go knowing that life isn't fair, another thing that made me hyped is that the MC no longer get thrashed around by the cast, i mean, Malfoy just beat him every time but now the MC just shrugs it off about. Thanks for the amazing job and I hope you keep it up!

4mth
Ver 2 Respostas
Lordmoonlight

Tbh Orion hasn’t grown from the first chapter doesn’t matter how you try to but it mc character is stagnant the fate arc just turn the fic into a train wreck then the vampire BS which he could have figured out but oh nah he can’t it’s just so annoying for you to say your going to let the mc grow but oh new problem that let mc goes back to square 1 he got all that power and nth to show for it tbh and the worst thing I’ve ever seen is nick iron he should have been dead from the get go but stick around like a bad anime trope…….yup that all my ranting

4mth
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_TheWatcher_

A very good fic. I have read other books by the author and this is one of my favorites.

5mth
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Elvenerable

Me gusta pero a medida que avanza hay relleno que realmente me aburre y realmente quisiera avance amoroso Real por parte del MC a este punto pq jdr no hay casi nada, en caso de ser solo una traducción, el trabajo traducido es gloria y bien hecho

5mth
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Ster_Bern

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6mth
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LordRamcel

what happened to hermione on the latest chaps ?

6mth
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szewei10

There is a lot of infodump but overall a HP fanfic especially since its an AU. The only part I dont like is him going into the fate world it made it feel like you ran out of ideas.

6mth
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WizzyTheWizard

Started out good but the Author kept doubling down on what I can best describe as the "Meme" personality of the MC and Merlin. The writing quality could be better but it's alright. The story itself is actually pretty cool, but again, the MC kind of makes it hard to read at times.

7mth
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nerghomek

esta bien, no lo leeria una segunda vez pero merece unas cuantas mas estrellas de las que se le dan----------------------------------------------------------

8mth
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Emu_Lator

liked the story at first. But the moment the mc let his enemy who almost killed him go just because of hermione, this became absolutely unreadable for me. letting an enemy go after almost getting killed and permanently disabled. screw this author im out

8mth
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SHADOW_MONARCH

great book, the updates are stable. the writing quality it's not bad, but it's not super good either. but the narrative it self keeps you hooked to know what's going to happen next. ( OBS: I know that the betrayal from Hermione looks forced and all, but it was a good twist,and I am still waiting for the MC get his revenge on her. if anyone knows some Fanfiction with betrayal/revenge with some key characters and the MC please tell me about... I love see the good and old vengeance being served. )

8mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Britcio
LV 13 Badge

Que genial historia 😉👌🏻, tiene una gran trama y desarrollo junto con el poder especial del mc, los más interesante es que se va profundizando más en la era antigua (civilización antigua y dioses) y una misión de Miles de años para impedir los planes de la "Muerte"

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8mth
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Thiccc_Loli

It's good so far ................................................................................................................................

9mth
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aasulya_My

- Do you believe in miracles? - I am a wizard, it's my job to believe in them! : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : )

9mth
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Egika
LV 2 Badge

Started good, but now not anymore, I just feel that i'm reding something for people who do not care about what they reading, Just to make clear I read more than 120 chap, cause i wanted to give a real try before stating My opinión, so kinda dissapointed tbh

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9mth
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TheGeekWhoLived

Awesome story, very intriguing. Hope to see more of this.

9mth
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ProfaneImmortal

Bro find a proofreader, there are tonnes of mistakes. And I know you think you're being funny with the 4th wall breaks but I feel it breaks the immersion in the story. The plot is fine.

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9mth
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Valar_morghulis

It’s good and all but all the problem with his magic and all became disgusting and now he loses his arm for nothing

10mth
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Woutt
LV 2 Badge

Pretty interesting, its has a tendency to be a bit drawn out but it has a good story and the author is doing his best and i feel like he is slowly improving

10mth
Ver 1 Respostas
cynchely_24

pour mieux apprécier le livre prière pensez a la traduction en français

10mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great and interesting Harry Potter fanfiction!! 👍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I like that MC/Orion not op from start (he even weaker than other First Year when he go to Hogwarts).. I like his power (absorb other magical power/creature to make him stronger).. I also like his pet/familiar Red, is rare to see others phoenix beside Fawkes, hope to see/read Red more in the future.. The story is interesting too.. To see Merlin memory, magic power level, etc.. I like that he train Rune, Magic Bender, etc,, to supplement/protect himself from others (especially bully like Malfoy and his gang).. What make me dissapointed is MC/Orion as reincarnator have future knowledge, but why he doesn't changed many thing (like troll insident, Hagrid dragon egg, etc)?? I understand if he afraid to change so much, but little is fine I think.. And why he join Gryffindor?? If it just to know about the plot, it's failed, he often forget about important event like troll, etc.. He can go to Ravenclaw (he doesn't interest other house) instead, it will make the story more interesting.. Maybe make Hermione and Rose (I like genderbend Harry) join him in Ravenclaw.. Please make them his love interest 😍 Who is Nick Iron?? Can't wait to see his reveal.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

1yr
Ver 6 Respostas
TheNAlien

A very good book, I definitely want to see the final of this history. Very stable development, a good updating stability and history progress. The history keep you focused and interested with many novelties more than simply the Harry Potter history to explore.

img
1yr
Ver 2 Respostas
Mamdouh_mohamed

All I'm saying is that the novel is wonderful and no one should listen to the negative comments because they all complain about how quickly the MC gains power. They almost want the MC to become the most powerful magician in the world in twenty chapters.

1yr
Ver 2 Respostas
DiligentKraken

satisfying read fun and adventurous 🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘

28d
Ver 0 Respostas
Emmanuel_Elias

Una obra muy buena, tiene un gran desarrollo de los personajes principales, denle una oportunidad y seguramente les encantará la historia. Resumen. Orden y Caos, la gerra de mil años hasta la llegada del elegido.... Tan tan tantaaaannnnn.

img
1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Naruto_kamikaze

It's a good read if you are one looking for op protaganist. Got some comedy too.

1mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Truriy

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😃😄😃😃😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

1mth
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Megatrix123

After my past review which was only 3 stars or something no offense but then this book proceeded to give me the best plot twists ever and I realized this is an insane book even from the start I don't understand how someone can create a plot like so 5 stars.

1mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Regulus_Dragneel

freaking loved it.................................................................................................................................................

1mth
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NoNameOrLife

a great novel just the writing and character designs are a bit lacking but still a pretty decent read it has decently used the HP world for fun stuff

2mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Elvenerable

Damn if I know that everything is Mc but it would be difficult for you to add a Pov or two of Dafne or Rose or some other female character and maybe not forget them and add more interactions with them and have dates because at this point they seem to be worth kk to the mc I wouldn't be surprised if they kept going or lost interest, damn it, not even a damn kiss or something, they practically forget or ignore it.

2mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Voids_TrueOverlord

am dropping this...cause too much drama and unnecessary parallel world intervention to mc world

3mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Harshit_Tripathi_2831

I have to say that author have done some quite nice work done here very good mc he started as a lv 0 character who went up to lv 999+ with the most basic of a cheat

3mth
Ver 0 Respostas
Akira_TheFallen

I got really frustrated when the whole deal with Hermione began ngl, but i got impressed by the maturity development of the MC, in fact author, you did an amazing job making that, you made him mad for not getting the thing he most wanted but in the end the MC just let it go knowing that life isn't fair, another thing that made me hyped is that the MC no longer get thrashed around by the cast, i mean, Malfoy just beat him every time but now the MC just shrugs it off about. Thanks for the amazing job and I hope you keep it up!

4mth
Ver 2 Respostas
Lordmoonlight

Tbh Orion hasn’t grown from the first chapter doesn’t matter how you try to but it mc character is stagnant the fate arc just turn the fic into a train wreck then the vampire BS which he could have figured out but oh nah he can’t it’s just so annoying for you to say your going to let the mc grow but oh new problem that let mc goes back to square 1 he got all that power and nth to show for it tbh and the worst thing I’ve ever seen is nick iron he should have been dead from the get go but stick around like a bad anime trope…….yup that all my ranting

4mth
Ver 0 Respostas
_TheWatcher_

A very good fic. I have read other books by the author and this is one of my favorites.

5mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Elvenerable

Me gusta pero a medida que avanza hay relleno que realmente me aburre y realmente quisiera avance amoroso Real por parte del MC a este punto pq jdr no hay casi nada, en caso de ser solo una traducción, el trabajo traducido es gloria y bien hecho

5mth
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Ster_Bern

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6mth
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LordRamcel

what happened to hermione on the latest chaps ?

6mth
Ver 1 Respostas
szewei10

There is a lot of infodump but overall a HP fanfic especially since its an AU. The only part I dont like is him going into the fate world it made it feel like you ran out of ideas.

6mth
Ver 0 Respostas
WizzyTheWizard

Started out good but the Author kept doubling down on what I can best describe as the "Meme" personality of the MC and Merlin. The writing quality could be better but it's alright. The story itself is actually pretty cool, but again, the MC kind of makes it hard to read at times.

7mth
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nerghomek

esta bien, no lo leeria una segunda vez pero merece unas cuantas mas estrellas de las que se le dan----------------------------------------------------------

8mth
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Emu_Lator

liked the story at first. But the moment the mc let his enemy who almost killed him go just because of hermione, this became absolutely unreadable for me. letting an enemy go after almost getting killed and permanently disabled. screw this author im out

8mth
Ver 0 Respostas
SHADOW_MONARCH

great book, the updates are stable. the writing quality it's not bad, but it's not super good either. but the narrative it self keeps you hooked to know what's going to happen next. ( OBS: I know that the betrayal from Hermione looks forced and all, but it was a good twist,and I am still waiting for the MC get his revenge on her. if anyone knows some Fanfiction with betrayal/revenge with some key characters and the MC please tell me about... I love see the good and old vengeance being served. )

8mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Britcio
LV 13 Badge

Que genial historia 😉👌🏻, tiene una gran trama y desarrollo junto con el poder especial del mc, los más interesante es que se va profundizando más en la era antigua (civilización antigua y dioses) y una misión de Miles de años para impedir los planes de la "Muerte"

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8mth
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Thiccc_Loli

It's good so far ................................................................................................................................

9mth
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aasulya_My

- Do you believe in miracles? - I am a wizard, it's my job to believe in them! : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : )

9mth
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Egika
LV 2 Badge

Started good, but now not anymore, I just feel that i'm reding something for people who do not care about what they reading, Just to make clear I read more than 120 chap, cause i wanted to give a real try before stating My opinión, so kinda dissapointed tbh

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9mth
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TheGeekWhoLived

Awesome story, very intriguing. Hope to see more of this.

9mth
Ver 1 Respostas
ProfaneImmortal

Bro find a proofreader, there are tonnes of mistakes. And I know you think you're being funny with the 4th wall breaks but I feel it breaks the immersion in the story. The plot is fine.

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9mth
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Valar_morghulis

It’s good and all but all the problem with his magic and all became disgusting and now he loses his arm for nothing

10mth
Ver 1 Respostas
Woutt
LV 2 Badge

Pretty interesting, its has a tendency to be a bit drawn out but it has a good story and the author is doing his best and i feel like he is slowly improving

10mth
Ver 1 Respostas
cynchely_24

pour mieux apprécier le livre prière pensez a la traduction en français

10mth
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