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Hello guys, it's already been more than a month since I uploaded this novel. Although there were small problems with the grammar in some chapters, you'll still continue supporting this novel. Due to that, I'm greatly thankful to all of you! [img=recommend]
100 chapter into the story, have the system aspects we all love but with a twist to make every character develope in a unique way. MC is strong but not in a cheesy way, he strugles and developes hopefull for the future of this story!! give it a chance you will love it
What app did you use to make your cover because I want to make my own.Can you tell me please.🙏🏾
I tried, but I just found the mc utterly unlikable and the writing quality subpar. But the premise of the story is good, so if you don’t mind an annoying and quite dumb mc and you can get past the writing quality then give it a shot I guess 🤷🏼♂️
Grammar mistakes are seldom and could be ignored since they don't really affect comprehension. Personally, I do not think that the horror tag was justified in the novel. The "fears" of the characters were induced more so by the mc's powers rather than because of the writing itself. I think it really lacks the atmosphere that a horror novel should have. I was also disappointed when the mc turned human because the exact reason I read was because of the tag NON-HUMAN and Ghost mc. Is the mc still non-human when he has the soul of a human and uses a skill to turn human? "A human with a ghost/horror system" is an appropriate description here. IDK if this will change in the future chapters, please do tell me. Anyhow, it's a personal preference, so it doesn't matter, I guess? It's not my cup of tea, but it's ok.
Couldn't read past chapter 23. Horribly inconsistent, as MC could pick up items that seem useful, then will never even look at them and just forget about them. MC levels up many times, but still feels very fragile, as he requires to use others to kill his enemies, as well MC gets stronger by scaring people and killing things, but he is just a dumb wimp that constantly wants to be human, but weakens himself because he wastes opportunities or points just to be able to maybe be human. He even refuses to kill humans even though it's his main track to grow strength, and literally chooses an incredibly useless job class for his current point because 'he doesn't like killing things.' MC is just annoying to read, and thinks like a Karen. Grammer is decent, but very inconsistent as well.
Revelar Spoiler
I liked the novel very much. The character is developed well with focus on mc.
I liked the story. Story progression is going smoothly, and characters are likeable. Horror system is a nice touch for this story. I liked that's it's about apocalypse instead of gates. Despite having some English issues, honestly, they're not that many and not to an unbearable extent. Examples ("have" instead of "has" or "able to" to instead of "in order"), they're few and easily readable. ---------- Currently, I only noticed 2 bad things that I could point out: 1 - Slow pacing when it's not needed to be slow (MC following a child for 3-5 chapters without adding anything to the story. Or when detailing combat and unnecessarily wasting time going into detail about side characters fighting). 2 - Story is about horror and MC has a horror system, and the synopsis is going on about how MC is the ultimate horror where everyone is afraid of him. HOWEVER, what we get is an MC with a conscience, he probably will scare humans by being creepy instead of actually scaring them (like how mad scientists scare people). When I started reading, I at least thought MC is going to have a few screws loose and gets thrilled by scaring others or he might have good intentions but he's so awkward/creepy that he scares people unintentionally. Heck, I thought he might even be an actual sociopath that disregarded his humanity and embraced ghost power. I enjoyed the story but it's not exactly what it conveyed itself as. However, despite that, I never thought the story is lacking. Author made such a good job giving us a glimpse in the first chapter about MC that we get to know his character naturally, MC develops and struggles within the confines of reason, there's no illogical plot armor or courting death. It's a steady story with good world building and good progression.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. A unique concept with interesting elements and good world building. It's great reading novels where characters have real personality. This was quite a fun read.
Great story with a unique take on the system trope. Loving how individualized the abilities are and the MCs personality.
Bruh, Idk but the mc is a retard. and the author making him choose the common (upgradable ) class is so forced, like, how would the mc know if that class is better than the legendary ones? and the excuses he gave for not choosing the legendary classes...
The story flows well and keeps you reading late into the night well past when you should have gone to bed. The grammar is pretty good but you can see small mistakes here or there and the mistakes don't impact the story much at all.The selfish part of me wishes the update speed was faster but again, that is my own selfish wish. The author still updates regularly at least. I will admit I am worried about how drastically the MC's personality has changed since the book started. He seems to be developing a lot of mental illnesses based on how erratic his actions and thoughts have become.
Revelar Spoiler
Disappointed by the development of the story. Horror is a tricky topic, telling a character is afraid does not suffice to render an horrific atmosphere. We end up in a light tone and unoriginal system novel.
5 stars for this book since it deserves it! (The summary already piqued my interest.)
i finished chapter 1 i think it’s good it reminds me the novel i read last time about a scarecrow using this kind of system too but i hope there’s no romance in here✨
I Am not really good at reviewing stuff but I want to say please give this novel a try
Over 100 chapters the system, concept of leveling and technique is very good but the mc is overly stupid like three years old it’s getting on my nerve hopefully author increase his intelligence in the following chapters.
definitely love this novel, got hooked from the first chap! author, please continue with your great work and don't let others bring you down.
Everything is perfect except for the mistakes in calculating experience points.
I'm already at 100 chapters of this novel, I again want to add another review to tell you how good this novel was 😭. It carried both horror, cultivation, leveling, and slight comedy perfectly. First time seeing this type of novel, author keeps it up!
Simply well done in my opinion. Um, keep up the good work and please keep making more wonderful chapters. You should try it out. You know, see if you like it or not.
This novel contains both leveling and cultivation, Huhuhu, it's a really strange yet perfectly written novel. I recommend this to all of you❤️.
Subarashii ne~I honestly can't pick one fault or downside to this novel. Such a great read! I started reading while eating breakfast and was late for work. I decided to call in sick so that I could read this masterpiece. Please we need.more chapters!!!!!
Keep it up and make more chapters! You have a high chance of winning the event! Also, I like the unstable mental health of the MC😭😂.
Revelar Spoiler
Very good so far. some basic Grammer mistakes with using the wrong words to describe present / past tense actions. I hope the author can keep it up.good job author-san
Upload more chapters, hoping for more action and exciting parts ❤️❤️. Good job author👌.
Hello guys, it's already been more than a month since I uploaded this novel. Although there were small problems with the grammar in some chapters, you'll still continue supporting this novel. Due to that, I'm greatly thankful to all of you! [img=recommend]
100 chapter into the story, have the system aspects we all love but with a twist to make every character develope in a unique way. MC is strong but not in a cheesy way, he strugles and developes hopefull for the future of this story!! give it a chance you will love it
What app did you use to make your cover because I want to make my own.Can you tell me please.🙏🏾
I tried, but I just found the mc utterly unlikable and the writing quality subpar. But the premise of the story is good, so if you don’t mind an annoying and quite dumb mc and you can get past the writing quality then give it a shot I guess 🤷🏼♂️
Grammar mistakes are seldom and could be ignored since they don't really affect comprehension. Personally, I do not think that the horror tag was justified in the novel. The "fears" of the characters were induced more so by the mc's powers rather than because of the writing itself. I think it really lacks the atmosphere that a horror novel should have. I was also disappointed when the mc turned human because the exact reason I read was because of the tag NON-HUMAN and Ghost mc. Is the mc still non-human when he has the soul of a human and uses a skill to turn human? "A human with a ghost/horror system" is an appropriate description here. IDK if this will change in the future chapters, please do tell me. Anyhow, it's a personal preference, so it doesn't matter, I guess? It's not my cup of tea, but it's ok.
Couldn't read past chapter 23. Horribly inconsistent, as MC could pick up items that seem useful, then will never even look at them and just forget about them. MC levels up many times, but still feels very fragile, as he requires to use others to kill his enemies, as well MC gets stronger by scaring people and killing things, but he is just a dumb wimp that constantly wants to be human, but weakens himself because he wastes opportunities or points just to be able to maybe be human. He even refuses to kill humans even though it's his main track to grow strength, and literally chooses an incredibly useless job class for his current point because 'he doesn't like killing things.' MC is just annoying to read, and thinks like a Karen. Grammer is decent, but very inconsistent as well.
Revelar Spoiler I liked the novel very much. The character is developed well with focus on mc.
I liked the story. Story progression is going smoothly, and characters are likeable. Horror system is a nice touch for this story. I liked that's it's about apocalypse instead of gates. Despite having some English issues, honestly, they're not that many and not to an unbearable extent. Examples ("have" instead of "has" or "able to" to instead of "in order"), they're few and easily readable. ---------- Currently, I only noticed 2 bad things that I could point out: 1 - Slow pacing when it's not needed to be slow (MC following a child for 3-5 chapters without adding anything to the story. Or when detailing combat and unnecessarily wasting time going into detail about side characters fighting). 2 - Story is about horror and MC has a horror system, and the synopsis is going on about how MC is the ultimate horror where everyone is afraid of him. HOWEVER, what we get is an MC with a conscience, he probably will scare humans by being creepy instead of actually scaring them (like how mad scientists scare people). When I started reading, I at least thought MC is going to have a few screws loose and gets thrilled by scaring others or he might have good intentions but he's so awkward/creepy that he scares people unintentionally. Heck, I thought he might even be an actual sociopath that disregarded his humanity and embraced ghost power. I enjoyed the story but it's not exactly what it conveyed itself as. However, despite that, I never thought the story is lacking. Author made such a good job giving us a glimpse in the first chapter about MC that we get to know his character naturally, MC develops and struggles within the confines of reason, there's no illogical plot armor or courting death. It's a steady story with good world building and good progression.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. A unique concept with interesting elements and good world building. It's great reading novels where characters have real personality. This was quite a fun read.
Great story with a unique take on the system trope. Loving how individualized the abilities are and the MCs personality.
Bruh, Idk but the mc is a retard. and the author making him choose the common (upgradable ) class is so forced, like, how would the mc know if that class is better than the legendary ones? and the excuses he gave for not choosing the legendary classes...
The story flows well and keeps you reading late into the night well past when you should have gone to bed. The grammar is pretty good but you can see small mistakes here or there and the mistakes don't impact the story much at all.The selfish part of me wishes the update speed was faster but again, that is my own selfish wish. The author still updates regularly at least. I will admit I am worried about how drastically the MC's personality has changed since the book started. He seems to be developing a lot of mental illnesses based on how erratic his actions and thoughts have become.
Revelar Spoiler Disappointed by the development of the story. Horror is a tricky topic, telling a character is afraid does not suffice to render an horrific atmosphere. We end up in a light tone and unoriginal system novel.
5 stars for this book since it deserves it! (The summary already piqued my interest.)
i finished chapter 1 i think it’s good it reminds me the novel i read last time about a scarecrow using this kind of system too but i hope there’s no romance in here✨
I Am not really good at reviewing stuff but I want to say please give this novel a try
Over 100 chapters the system, concept of leveling and technique is very good but the mc is overly stupid like three years old it’s getting on my nerve hopefully author increase his intelligence in the following chapters.
definitely love this novel, got hooked from the first chap! author, please continue with your great work and don't let others bring you down.
Everything is perfect except for the mistakes in calculating experience points.
I'm already at 100 chapters of this novel, I again want to add another review to tell you how good this novel was 😭. It carried both horror, cultivation, leveling, and slight comedy perfectly. First time seeing this type of novel, author keeps it up!
Simply well done in my opinion. Um, keep up the good work and please keep making more wonderful chapters. You should try it out. You know, see if you like it or not.
This novel contains both leveling and cultivation, Huhuhu, it's a really strange yet perfectly written novel. I recommend this to all of you❤️.
Subarashii ne~I honestly can't pick one fault or downside to this novel. Such a great read! I started reading while eating breakfast and was late for work. I decided to call in sick so that I could read this masterpiece. Please we need.more chapters!!!!!
Keep it up and make more chapters! You have a high chance of winning the event! Also, I like the unstable mental health of the MC😭😂.
Revelar Spoiler Very good so far. some basic Grammer mistakes with using the wrong words to describe present / past tense actions. I hope the author can keep it up.good job author-san
Upload more chapters, hoping for more action and exciting parts ❤️❤️. Good job author👌.
Author shameless review... I finally uploaded 20 chapters.