Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!

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Black_Reaper13

I have to say that until chapter 152 and I am quite immersed in the story, on a personal level I would like the protagonist to use some weapon to give it style or to make him look more dominant, maybe a sword, dagger or spear and although the most common ones, well, in personal taste are the best, the way in which xian yan is dense with his feelings also keeps me in suspense and I hope he realizes what he feels, the writing is good, although I would like to know more about the background of the world of the magicians and Noah's current world and also knowing about his past as a wizard god and finally, author, thank you for writing this novel and we are not supporting anything here as a reader.

LV 3

Archrevise

I really nothing to say except 'I Love This Novel!'

LV 4

GeneralDeFartos_L

A clumsy attempt at writing a novel. Don't get me wrong, I liked the concept and I've been waiting for it to get more chapters before reading, but now that I've read about 50 chapters I'm just disappointed and dissatisfied. It has a unique interesting idea and throughout the story you can see what the author wanted to characters to be like. (Like how MC can do things impossible to do with qi cultivation or how a green haired mommy is a playful sugar mommy) The main problem with this story: 1- Exposition is not done properly. Author doesn't know what to give more information about and what to skip. Noah basically has no personality here while his previous body owner has a set personality, or how author kept using flashbacks at the start, or how we have no info on the Mage god Noah, or how we got too many useless info about irrelevant things. this is mainly cuz author doesn't know how to properly show us what he wants us to see. 2- Characters have messed up personalities. It feels like author just wants to add scenes he read in other works and wanted to have them attached to certain characters. (Noah is supposedly ruthless but acts kind to who he wants to. But here everytime he acts he's either flirty or teasing and when he has his moments it's not that cool, It just doesn't reflect an old man who's filled with wisdom.) (There's also mommy, she's supposedly mature, but she got over her sons death and gets blushing by Noah from day 1, there's no development, she's still getting over her loss, why would she feel a tingle in her heart just from some kindness? She's not naive, she's mature. So it doesn't make sense.) The relationship and feelings they feels towards each other just feel forced. 3- Author is dragging out what could be over and done long ago. He's adding new enemies just for the sake of it. A lot of elements here are pointless and don't add to the story. Dear author, think thoroughly before adding pointless drama and pointless info, would any of this be relevant after 30~60 chapters? I think not. It's just for added drama, but that just makes it as boring and cliche as other cultivation works.

LV 13

Odayaka

New novel, New world.This time I trying to dabble with both cultivation and magic world at once, it might get challanging but i think the plot is worth it.use this review as a place to ask questions regarding the book and suggestions and of course no spoilers let's get started with the jade beauty

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QuantumVoid

Ah yes, perfect must read suggested nice comedy (yeah don't question my reviewing skills suckers)

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SeraphWedd

First and foremost, I love the premise of the story. 🔥 The part where he panicked right before reincarnation got me laughing. 🤣 Anyway, the review: The author's use of words were playful and enthralling. The grammar was alright, but there's a few that need correction—only a few. 😎 Over all, it was a great read, and I feel like reading more. Definitely would recommend to others~! Great work author~! More chapters~!

this is Chaos, i love chaos. i need Chaos

LV 15

Kasism_u

This story is absolutely fantastic so far cant wait for more to come keep up the good work! Happy new years :)

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daiost_Pure_void

it's so so good that i can't wait for new chapters....author plz mass release plz......................................................................

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joshua_peppers

story is really good now that im up to the hundred or so chapter i have read but the mc is to stuck in his past. he has a new life i know he has alot of his past that haunt him but he has a need life and hopefully the story develops more so he can escape the shadows of his past and live in his new life

LV 15

RagingMutant

I really like the story but I’m just curious when he gets his own body. All progression he makes feels pointless because it’s not truly for him, and sure he makes developments with some women, but due to not having his own body they don’t actually do anything other than flirt.

LV 4

DaoistEh8aRT

I won't lie to you This book is a Masterpiece. I haven't read anything this riveting in a really long time. The plot and storyline are epic. Seeing the characters grow and morph is splendid. It has drawn out so many emotions from me; laughter, tears and sadness, hope and joy - something only a top rate book would do. (And I know many people feel the same way too). I would, if I had the resources, turned it into a film adaptation (series preferably) or at least a 3-5 part printed novel. (Lord of the Rings format). It just amazing. I haven't ever written a comment or review like this. I just hope the author reads it and gets inspired to more greatness

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DaoistoV3EJd

I would recommend that you rewrite the book. Noah shouldn't reincarnate but his legacy should be passed to the body to heal the soul and body of the mc instead of taking over. the est of the story is very interesting but you lost out on a lot of emotional content there. or if not legacy at least all the memories.

LV 6

DaoistHerbz

i like the story, though the flashback at the very start is a little stretched out but it made it a little more immersive. the pacing is slow too so i hope to pick up the pace after leaving the secret realm.

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CastlePanda

I'm furious with this author for writing such a book. You'd think it's a mid tier harem book but it has such great elements that even without reading you can tell from the synopsis that it's a great story. I released even before I opened the first chapter, that's my fastest record yet. This author is a disgustingly good writer and he deserves corporal punishment. He should cultivate immortal rice for five hundred years with a spoon until he becomes crippled.

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H2Oz_Anxious

Just like many other webnovels, this one is evolving as well. It’s good, pretty readable, and certainly something good to pass one’s time. Give it a try if you can, everyone. ❤️

LV 3

PsionicMind

I don't think there is much to say here. the book is pretty good for those who like questionable comedy.

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DaoistHCbksz

First of all, wow. I have no idea how u guys get such amazing ideas. love the plot and character development. 👍

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Kanekikunnnnnn

hey....can someone pls spoil me...like does the mc get op also no ntr...and is long tian mc's reincarnation...I really want to start the novel but from the comments I read it really is making my stomach churn and just avoid the novel but it has come soooo many times in my daily free that I really want to try but not traumatize myself...please, I would really appreciate it! also is the romance good?