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Escreva uma avaliaçãoNOTGOOD/10 I knew I didn’t like this story when I just started skimming which is something I almost never do. Grammar is atrocious but I suppose that is expected when many creators here aren’t native English speakers.
i dont know if its me alone , but the conversation between characters seems soooo mechanical , as if it was written by AI or something. the stability of updates is meh , charecter design is pretty good so far. overall i reccomend the author to improve his writting to make to more smooth for reader.
A melhor série primeira vez que vejo um a novel dele e adorei continui não deixe a de lado como muitos criadores de conteúdo obrigado pelo livro.
Buena novela 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The concept is ultimately interesting, sadly the author fails to evolve it. One of the bad points is the scripted style, that is the worst thing you can do if you want someone to really feel immersed in your narrative, using, MC: Hello. Just feels soulless, You remove all personality by stopping narrating your story to give more attention to mere dialogue. Another thing that I don't like is the development of the story, you can't develop the story by having the characters explain everything, for example: in chapter 5 a secondary character talks to who is supposed to be the MC's cousin "Ah, you talk about your cousin who is such a person, who achieved certain things and who did it at this moment", which I understand is a resource for the reader to know what happened in the plot, for me that is a problem, the story has to offer a development, not a character in a single dialogue. I hope the author is able to change these aspects so that, in my opinion, the story improves. Good luck.
Very good novel please more chapter update 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
great novel, but with lack of updates. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Bom. Está se desenvolvendo para algo interessante, gostei da introdução do personagem, sentindo falta do pov dele, mas ok até agora. ..........................................................................................................................................
My guy you are developing something wonderful over there, please don’t drop it! No pressure or anything but please post the next chapter soon can’t wait for the canon to start!!!
First of all I Love You author for making this novel !!!! Secondly loved how you showed the timeline with shift and change in the MC life and how they meet [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A great start, with such a unique idea. The ball is in your court now folks, I for one have great hopes for this, plus the no harem tag is always good to see.
Here's 5 starts just for writing a fanfic on f.r.i.e.n.d.s. Please don't drop. Your other fanfics are also great.
I need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............................................................
NOTGOOD/10 I knew I didn’t like this story when I just started skimming which is something I almost never do. Grammar is atrocious but I suppose that is expected when many creators here aren’t native English speakers.
i dont know if its me alone , but the conversation between characters seems soooo mechanical , as if it was written by AI or something. the stability of updates is meh , charecter design is pretty good so far. overall i reccomend the author to improve his writting to make to more smooth for reader.
A melhor série primeira vez que vejo um a novel dele e adorei continui não deixe a de lado como muitos criadores de conteúdo obrigado pelo livro.
Buena novela 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The concept is ultimately interesting, sadly the author fails to evolve it. One of the bad points is the scripted style, that is the worst thing you can do if you want someone to really feel immersed in your narrative, using, MC: Hello. Just feels soulless, You remove all personality by stopping narrating your story to give more attention to mere dialogue. Another thing that I don't like is the development of the story, you can't develop the story by having the characters explain everything, for example: in chapter 5 a secondary character talks to who is supposed to be the MC's cousin "Ah, you talk about your cousin who is such a person, who achieved certain things and who did it at this moment", which I understand is a resource for the reader to know what happened in the plot, for me that is a problem, the story has to offer a development, not a character in a single dialogue. I hope the author is able to change these aspects so that, in my opinion, the story improves. Good luck.
Very good novel please more chapter update 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
great novel, but with lack of updates. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Bom. Está se desenvolvendo para algo interessante, gostei da introdução do personagem, sentindo falta do pov dele, mas ok até agora. ..........................................................................................................................................
My guy you are developing something wonderful over there, please don’t drop it! No pressure or anything but please post the next chapter soon can’t wait for the canon to start!!!
First of all I Love You author for making this novel !!!! Secondly loved how you showed the timeline with shift and change in the MC life and how they meet [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A great start, with such a unique idea. The ball is in your court now folks, I for one have great hopes for this, plus the no harem tag is always good to see.
Here's 5 starts just for writing a fanfic on f.r.i.e.n.d.s. Please don't drop. Your other fanfics are also great.
I need moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............................................................
Lemme know if it continues.. was very good but for now I’ll have to take it off my library