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Escreva uma avaliaçãoIts stupid, ridiculous and frankly, most people reading this review could probably write something better after 2-3 tries. Though, probably only the Pathetic Ass author will read this before deleting it and crying about the 1 star review to a 0 star story. Jesus, where to begin. whether its the terrible grade-school level writing or the "guhuhuh, I am more eviler than you" ahh character. its pathetic. I am all for Evil or Villain MCs but the character is clearly a self insert for the author, a woman-hating wannabe psycho who likely makes Joker Smiles to himself in the mirror and talks about how he is an Anarchist to his fellow Woman-Hating friends on Discord while thinking about how to R*pe women he met one time. The world itself is more poorly made than a school project held together by gum and toothpicks. The author is constantly pulling random bullshit out of thin air, acting like this is a Dystopian Future where smog fills the sky and a single hacker can turn a city into a hellhole.
This has been one of the most interesting villain deku story’s I’ve ever read. I can’t wait to see what chaos Izuku causes next. The difference between villain Izuku and regular Izuku is like night and day and I find that a very amazing character trait.
Revelar Spoilerпостоянное повторение предыдущих строк, откровенно говоря, раздражает. в главах они затягивают разговор и постоянно повторяют его, как будто для умственно отсталых. Иногда темы перескакивают друг в друга. The plot seems to be there, the idea is not bad, but why the hell did he want to go to UA school as a spy. Frankly, he seems like a loser, clinging to the chance to come back or be noticed and recognized.
Lo intente lo juro, pero este MC es realmente estúpido de nacimiento y eso se ve claramente cuando amenaza a All for One como si nada, sale todo perfecto no hay enojo ni ataques..... El mayor villano fue insultado tratado como un niño y solo se rió....... El autor cree que el MC es inteligente pero es el mayor estúpido del que leí en mí vida
Hey man Love this story I'm scared it'll get removed or taken down could u send me a downloaded file of it? I just want to read it all offline incase my wifi dies or incase it gets taken down I've got trauma from previous webnovels being removed I'll never be able to get over the fact that this Masterpiece is removed so I really hope u can send it to me I use discord add me Username Is Breck388
read 20 chaps and now I'm gonna read this till the end 10/1000. author-San please send me a Pdf file or tell me of a way I can download this Masterpiece because I'm scared it'll get taken down and I wanna have this permanently saved in my device incase it gets removed please I'm begging you.
Numix Great fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Mha fanfic idea immediately after MHA:-Glitch In Reality Mha : Oozaru A 19 year old boy dies in our world and is reborn into Mha as Izuku Midoriya with the blood of a Saiyan King in his veins. Harem Mitsuki Bakugo Inko Midoriya Yu Takeyama Nemuri Kayama Rei Todoroki Bulma Briefs Tights Briefs Panchy Chi-Chi Momo Yaoyorozu Videl Erasa Mina Ashido Fuyumi Todoroki Himiko Toga Shino Sōsaki Ryūko Tsuchikawa Caulifa Kale Vados Android 21 Supreme Kai of Time/Chronoa Towa Zangya Android 18
hello, i write this for those who trash talk this story, writer San, many times pointed out this is his first time writing FF, and instead to help him and tell him what he should improve you just decided to be as*"'"*" and put him down with your hate, so i request you to just stop reading and move on.
Yes Finaly OP Izuku finaly meet Yororozu Momo!!! I can not wait when he and Shoto will have they showdown!!! It was during Sport Festival whare Izuku could in og series help Momo the most, because it was thare she started to question her place in UA and if she truly deserved being recommend student.
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I will soon come back to reading this great Evil Izuku AU story, i just wanted to wait for more chapters to be updated, and do not listen to HATERS AND trash talking.
the execution is just poor & everything feels flat. worst is probably the beginning being a near carbon copy of MHA: Undying but 1000x times worse
Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.
this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award
only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario
Okay, I read about 10 chapters, and that's really bad and I'll tell you why. The writing lacks emotion, Izuku is constantly defeated in this story and my reaction is: ok, when will the cool part come? Everything is a bit robotic, the monologues and internal dialogues are boring and superficial. The writing is bad, with a lack of punctuation and no "" in the dialogue, I can only guess what a line is or isn't and who it belongs to. There are a lot of flashabcaks that don't interest me. The characters are evil for no apparent reason, like, All Might didn't have a quirk so he would never neglect someone without a quirk, I would even accept him being an absent father, you know? Inko too, in the beginning it was clear that she loved and cared for Izuku and then she just neglected him for no apparent reason? I know that a villain needs a tragic past but you need to know how to do that. Unless someone says that some kind of invisibility quirk was cast on Izuku, I wouldn't believe any kind of explanation. Anyway, I don't want to be an idiot, I'm just doing an honest review of what I found and raising points that can be improved in the future, I didn't get very far in this fanfic so I don't know if the writing has improved or anything, but if it has, the author should review the beginning of the story.
Revelar SpoilerOkay so I have read many mha fanfics . This has the potential to be really good . Author has chosen a very good timeline , the world building is immaculate . The only issue i have is that you keep repeating words, ideas or concepts ... like saying the same thing in three different ways in the same sentence . I don't know if that's to increase the word count but it really makes me uncomfortable to keep reading the same thing . The pacing could be increased , it's not important to describe each and everyones thoughts and actions . Other than that keep up the good work 👍
Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.
I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍
This is a very great novel, I beg you 🙏🙏to continue until the end😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................,............
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Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.
Its stupid, ridiculous and frankly, most people reading this review could probably write something better after 2-3 tries. Though, probably only the Pathetic Ass author will read this before deleting it and crying about the 1 star review to a 0 star story. Jesus, where to begin. whether its the terrible grade-school level writing or the "guhuhuh, I am more eviler than you" ahh character. its pathetic. I am all for Evil or Villain MCs but the character is clearly a self insert for the author, a woman-hating wannabe psycho who likely makes Joker Smiles to himself in the mirror and talks about how he is an Anarchist to his fellow Woman-Hating friends on Discord while thinking about how to R*pe women he met one time. The world itself is more poorly made than a school project held together by gum and toothpicks. The author is constantly pulling random bullshit out of thin air, acting like this is a Dystopian Future where smog fills the sky and a single hacker can turn a city into a hellhole.
This has been one of the most interesting villain deku story’s I’ve ever read. I can’t wait to see what chaos Izuku causes next. The difference between villain Izuku and regular Izuku is like night and day and I find that a very amazing character trait.
Revelar Spoilerпостоянное повторение предыдущих строк, откровенно говоря, раздражает. в главах они затягивают разговор и постоянно повторяют его, как будто для умственно отсталых. Иногда темы перескакивают друг в друга. The plot seems to be there, the idea is not bad, but why the hell did he want to go to UA school as a spy. Frankly, he seems like a loser, clinging to the chance to come back or be noticed and recognized.
Lo intente lo juro, pero este MC es realmente estúpido de nacimiento y eso se ve claramente cuando amenaza a All for One como si nada, sale todo perfecto no hay enojo ni ataques..... El mayor villano fue insultado tratado como un niño y solo se rió....... El autor cree que el MC es inteligente pero es el mayor estúpido del que leí en mí vida
Hey man Love this story I'm scared it'll get removed or taken down could u send me a downloaded file of it? I just want to read it all offline incase my wifi dies or incase it gets taken down I've got trauma from previous webnovels being removed I'll never be able to get over the fact that this Masterpiece is removed so I really hope u can send it to me I use discord add me Username Is Breck388
read 20 chaps and now I'm gonna read this till the end 10/1000. author-San please send me a Pdf file or tell me of a way I can download this Masterpiece because I'm scared it'll get taken down and I wanna have this permanently saved in my device incase it gets removed please I'm begging you.
Numix Great fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Mha fanfic idea immediately after MHA:-Glitch In Reality Mha : Oozaru A 19 year old boy dies in our world and is reborn into Mha as Izuku Midoriya with the blood of a Saiyan King in his veins. Harem Mitsuki Bakugo Inko Midoriya Yu Takeyama Nemuri Kayama Rei Todoroki Bulma Briefs Tights Briefs Panchy Chi-Chi Momo Yaoyorozu Videl Erasa Mina Ashido Fuyumi Todoroki Himiko Toga Shino Sōsaki Ryūko Tsuchikawa Caulifa Kale Vados Android 21 Supreme Kai of Time/Chronoa Towa Zangya Android 18
hello, i write this for those who trash talk this story, writer San, many times pointed out this is his first time writing FF, and instead to help him and tell him what he should improve you just decided to be as*"'"*" and put him down with your hate, so i request you to just stop reading and move on.
Yes Finaly OP Izuku finaly meet Yororozu Momo!!! I can not wait when he and Shoto will have they showdown!!! It was during Sport Festival whare Izuku could in og series help Momo the most, because it was thare she started to question her place in UA and if she truly deserved being recommend student.
more chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I will soon come back to reading this great Evil Izuku AU story, i just wanted to wait for more chapters to be updated, and do not listen to HATERS AND trash talking.
the execution is just poor & everything feels flat. worst is probably the beginning being a near carbon copy of MHA: Undying but 1000x times worse
Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.
this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award
only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario
Okay, I read about 10 chapters, and that's really bad and I'll tell you why. The writing lacks emotion, Izuku is constantly defeated in this story and my reaction is: ok, when will the cool part come? Everything is a bit robotic, the monologues and internal dialogues are boring and superficial. The writing is bad, with a lack of punctuation and no "" in the dialogue, I can only guess what a line is or isn't and who it belongs to. There are a lot of flashabcaks that don't interest me. The characters are evil for no apparent reason, like, All Might didn't have a quirk so he would never neglect someone without a quirk, I would even accept him being an absent father, you know? Inko too, in the beginning it was clear that she loved and cared for Izuku and then she just neglected him for no apparent reason? I know that a villain needs a tragic past but you need to know how to do that. Unless someone says that some kind of invisibility quirk was cast on Izuku, I wouldn't believe any kind of explanation. Anyway, I don't want to be an idiot, I'm just doing an honest review of what I found and raising points that can be improved in the future, I didn't get very far in this fanfic so I don't know if the writing has improved or anything, but if it has, the author should review the beginning of the story.
Revelar SpoilerOkay so I have read many mha fanfics . This has the potential to be really good . Author has chosen a very good timeline , the world building is immaculate . The only issue i have is that you keep repeating words, ideas or concepts ... like saying the same thing in three different ways in the same sentence . I don't know if that's to increase the word count but it really makes me uncomfortable to keep reading the same thing . The pacing could be increased , it's not important to describe each and everyones thoughts and actions . Other than that keep up the good work 👍
Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.
I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍
This is a very great novel, I beg you 🙏🙏to continue until the end😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................,............
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Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.
don't read it it's full of forced and Cringy plot!.
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