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Honestly, I've never read anything quite like this before, obviously I've read lots of similar works, but this is unique in both concept and style. I really enjoy the authors writing style and character interactions especially, so I hope this continues updating in the future
the only thing that i can say is that seems like the author wanted to write a slice of life fanfic that crossovers with multiple animes. those parts are actually more interesting than the story but filler is still filler. Also i understand not wanting your character to be OP instantly but there are much better ways to do it than just making her even more useless than miwa. I honestly think that she sould have died when she entered the hive the first tieme tbh. If this story wasn’t called what it is and had its main focus on the slice of life this would be a completely different score but, i’m grading it on what the story is.
It's a good story but not much my taste with letting the readers choose some of the settings for this story. You write for yourself, not to please your readers, that is optional. You must love the story before your readers, that is what makes stories special, as doing as you like lets the world and your imagination flow without having to consider the thoughts and opinions of other people than yourself.
J'aime beaucoup le monde les personnage le contexte et tout ce qui va avec mon seul problème c'est le stabilité de mis a jour 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Starting this review I want to talk about the positive. Author does an excelllent job of portraying characters and depicting scenes while occasionally I spot inconsistencies it’s not a completely unbearable read like 97% of the subpar novels on this app. The negative will only affect you if depending on your knowledge of jjk. A scene in particular that threw me off was when Reno even remotely struggled with Flyheads. Flyheads are so weak that even windows can safely handle them with no risk they’re catagorized as under 4th grade. Even fourth grade spirits are immensely weak mind you I’d suggest watching the clip of Gojo explaining how powerful each rank is to Itadori for reference. I understand that you want to properly grow your character and not just have them be extremely broken, but mind that 80% of sorcerer talent is innate although with a system that point is rendered irrelevant but even then… I’m ranting -_- TLDR: Everything is good just ensure you know just how the rankings scale (:
Hum j'aime beaucoup alors alors la vraiment comment vous avez fait dommage que je sois sans argent de poches actue sinon j'allais aller au patreon continuer bon travail
Estoy esperando más capítulos, ¡gran historia hasta ahora! Me gusta que los crossovers con JJK sean Slice of Life .
I was thinking of reading it, but as it doesn't have a rating I went to look at the most recent chapters and saw that she just found out what curses are and met Gojo (which is very much), from what I read it is well written and the system seems interesting (I read the last two chapters released). But having to wait 50 chapters for her to learn about curses is complicated, I still liked the proposal and also as I said it's well written, so I'll wait to put together about 100 chapters before I start reading.-. Note: I wrote this reading only chapter 46 and 47, so I didn't read the whole trajectory, but I managed to have a basic idea of the writing and interaction of the characters, and that it took 50 chapter basically to learn what a curse is, that is, the story seems to be a little slow in this regard, and JJK would be the main theme (seeing by the power of the story and the title of the book)
Revelar Spoiler
Bem como minha revisão vou ser conciso 1 a estabilidade de atualização é boa, basta continuar e não derrubar ou deixar em hiato eterno 2 ignorando personagens secundários que estão de boa qualidade a mc é sinceramente até agora uma mistura totalmente caotica e de certa forma ainda não tem definição base de personalidade consistente sem falar que ela não atua como um soldado que por si só já é um papel subestimado porém complexo e em vez da maturidade que deveria ter pela sua idade e situação passada como combatente eu não vejo ela sobrevivendo no campo de batalha com a psique instável e imatura que ela tem, porem passamos para o final 3 o mundo ainda não teve explicação o suficiente para dizer que tem uma 'construção' o mais próximo que posso dizer é que a construção atual é um caos puro e não destilado de uma mistura ainda não totalmente catalogada de mundos que sinceramente alguns lutam para conseguir harmonizar por conta de seus tipo e power level desproporcional e bem essa seria minha revisão as 4:00 da manhã para a história atual espero muito que minha avaliação ajude a melhorar a escrita e assim melhora a história e tenha uma boa noite.
Nice story, but are you sure you would be able to juggle with the half a dozen anime you have incorporated into one? But seriously, nice story so far.
I love this, but i am sure this story will be dropped around chapter 30 ish, how? let's just say reader's gut
In general I like this fanfic. It's nice to read. I like that the crossovers with JJK are Slice of Life. That gives you the opportunity to throw in the funniest characters from as many worlds as you want without making a mess of the supernatural world or the power systems. The writing is very good in my inexperienced opinion, I have no problems with the flow and the dialogues. I don't have anything good to say about the characters or the world because I don't know where the franchises come from except for JJK. All the good things said now my complaints. The protagonist is nice, but I don't know if it's too early for me to say this, but I think she lacks personality. It's not bad, just a little bland. I think she could use some good/bad habits to give her more spark. Smoking, eating a lot, poor orientation, OCD, any nonsense you can think of would make her more memorable. In writing I think it would be better if you avoided putting your exposition comments in between, it takes it out of the immersion a bit.Speaking of taking out of the immersion... Honestly, everything about the ROB could very well be removed and everything would be better. Honestly it just complicates things and expands the universe more than necessary and it makes everything feel...useless. Finally...the system. I have no problem with there being a system, just with it being so unnecessarily informative. Having said all that...I hope my rant doesn't down you or anything, I'm just writing the things I didn't like and I'll take the opportunity to leave a review. Do what you want and I will continue reading because in general I like this fanfic.
Honestly, I've never read anything quite like this before, obviously I've read lots of similar works, but this is unique in both concept and style. I really enjoy the authors writing style and character interactions especially, so I hope this continues updating in the future
the only thing that i can say is that seems like the author wanted to write a slice of life fanfic that crossovers with multiple animes. those parts are actually more interesting than the story but filler is still filler. Also i understand not wanting your character to be OP instantly but there are much better ways to do it than just making her even more useless than miwa. I honestly think that she sould have died when she entered the hive the first tieme tbh. If this story wasn’t called what it is and had its main focus on the slice of life this would be a completely different score but, i’m grading it on what the story is.
It's a good story but not much my taste with letting the readers choose some of the settings for this story. You write for yourself, not to please your readers, that is optional. You must love the story before your readers, that is what makes stories special, as doing as you like lets the world and your imagination flow without having to consider the thoughts and opinions of other people than yourself.
J'aime beaucoup le monde les personnage le contexte et tout ce qui va avec mon seul problème c'est le stabilité de mis a jour 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
Starting this review I want to talk about the positive. Author does an excelllent job of portraying characters and depicting scenes while occasionally I spot inconsistencies it’s not a completely unbearable read like 97% of the subpar novels on this app. The negative will only affect you if depending on your knowledge of jjk. A scene in particular that threw me off was when Reno even remotely struggled with Flyheads. Flyheads are so weak that even windows can safely handle them with no risk they’re catagorized as under 4th grade. Even fourth grade spirits are immensely weak mind you I’d suggest watching the clip of Gojo explaining how powerful each rank is to Itadori for reference. I understand that you want to properly grow your character and not just have them be extremely broken, but mind that 80% of sorcerer talent is innate although with a system that point is rendered irrelevant but even then… I’m ranting -_- TLDR: Everything is good just ensure you know just how the rankings scale (:
Hum j'aime beaucoup alors alors la vraiment comment vous avez fait dommage que je sois sans argent de poches actue sinon j'allais aller au patreon continuer bon travail
Estoy esperando más capítulos, ¡gran historia hasta ahora! Me gusta que los crossovers con JJK sean Slice of Life .
I was thinking of reading it, but as it doesn't have a rating I went to look at the most recent chapters and saw that she just found out what curses are and met Gojo (which is very much), from what I read it is well written and the system seems interesting (I read the last two chapters released). But having to wait 50 chapters for her to learn about curses is complicated, I still liked the proposal and also as I said it's well written, so I'll wait to put together about 100 chapters before I start reading.-. Note: I wrote this reading only chapter 46 and 47, so I didn't read the whole trajectory, but I managed to have a basic idea of the writing and interaction of the characters, and that it took 50 chapter basically to learn what a curse is, that is, the story seems to be a little slow in this regard, and JJK would be the main theme (seeing by the power of the story and the title of the book)
Revelar Spoiler Bem como minha revisão vou ser conciso 1 a estabilidade de atualização é boa, basta continuar e não derrubar ou deixar em hiato eterno 2 ignorando personagens secundários que estão de boa qualidade a mc é sinceramente até agora uma mistura totalmente caotica e de certa forma ainda não tem definição base de personalidade consistente sem falar que ela não atua como um soldado que por si só já é um papel subestimado porém complexo e em vez da maturidade que deveria ter pela sua idade e situação passada como combatente eu não vejo ela sobrevivendo no campo de batalha com a psique instável e imatura que ela tem, porem passamos para o final 3 o mundo ainda não teve explicação o suficiente para dizer que tem uma 'construção' o mais próximo que posso dizer é que a construção atual é um caos puro e não destilado de uma mistura ainda não totalmente catalogada de mundos que sinceramente alguns lutam para conseguir harmonizar por conta de seus tipo e power level desproporcional e bem essa seria minha revisão as 4:00 da manhã para a história atual espero muito que minha avaliação ajude a melhorar a escrita e assim melhora a história e tenha uma boa noite.
Nice story, but are you sure you would be able to juggle with the half a dozen anime you have incorporated into one? But seriously, nice story so far.
I love this, but i am sure this story will be dropped around chapter 30 ish, how? let's just say reader's gut
In general I like this fanfic. It's nice to read. I like that the crossovers with JJK are Slice of Life. That gives you the opportunity to throw in the funniest characters from as many worlds as you want without making a mess of the supernatural world or the power systems. The writing is very good in my inexperienced opinion, I have no problems with the flow and the dialogues. I don't have anything good to say about the characters or the world because I don't know where the franchises come from except for JJK. All the good things said now my complaints. The protagonist is nice, but I don't know if it's too early for me to say this, but I think she lacks personality. It's not bad, just a little bland. I think she could use some good/bad habits to give her more spark. Smoking, eating a lot, poor orientation, OCD, any nonsense you can think of would make her more memorable. In writing I think it would be better if you avoided putting your exposition comments in between, it takes it out of the immersion a bit.Speaking of taking out of the immersion... Honestly, everything about the ROB could very well be removed and everything would be better. Honestly it just complicates things and expands the universe more than necessary and it makes everything feel...useless. Finally...the system. I have no problem with there being a system, just with it being so unnecessarily informative. Having said all that...I hope my rant doesn't down you or anything, I'm just writing the things I didn't like and I'll take the opportunity to leave a review. Do what you want and I will continue reading because in general I like this fanfic.