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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Wish you would continue this story but it was fantastic news would like to read more story’s with lewd systems
This fic is very cool! I like it very much! When a continue? Please update it! You very good writer! Continue like that. Your stories are best what i was found.
This is one of my favorite stories u have and I wiuod love to see more of it it is fantastic
Dropped this book quicker than I have any other. Author fails to inform readers that the MC is a gender bent Naruto that, apparently by reading the other reviews, turns out to be a futanari. Would have been a good story if it was a guy, but the author had to hide all this to get people to even click on the title. A shame and a scam of a book if you ask me.
La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------
Love the story, ignore the losers giving 1 star just for the gender bender, they're little kids lol, other than the grammar i don't really have a problem, and it can easily be solved if you found an editor or maybe started to use grammarly, overrall great read!
No gender bender tag and futa such thing tag ruined my whole day nightmare for naruto fans
The author has problem, no offense, but you need Jesus man. ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠
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That was incredibly unsettling to read. If I had the option, I would leave a negative review.
No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.
everything is fine, the main thing is to download updates more often. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
The spelling mistakes are aggressively in your face. Like they're impossible to miss, they're so distracting. There's also this huge system panel each chapter that the author uses to fill word count. You're lucky if even one part of it changes. Obviously, the story is incredibly degenerate, but that's the least of its problems.
Slow update, but excelent history. Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.
yeah and the thing the guy never told you is that it's a gender Bender the reincarnator becomes a girl and for what it seems to be a female version of Naruto
update more often or at least tell us when you will update otherwise a perfect story
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Wish you would continue this story but it was fantastic news would like to read more story’s with lewd systems
This fic is very cool! I like it very much! When a continue? Please update it! You very good writer! Continue like that. Your stories are best what i was found.
This is one of my favorite stories u have and I wiuod love to see more of it it is fantastic
Dropped this book quicker than I have any other. Author fails to inform readers that the MC is a gender bent Naruto that, apparently by reading the other reviews, turns out to be a futanari. Would have been a good story if it was a guy, but the author had to hide all this to get people to even click on the title. A shame and a scam of a book if you ask me.
La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------
Love the story, ignore the losers giving 1 star just for the gender bender, they're little kids lol, other than the grammar i don't really have a problem, and it can easily be solved if you found an editor or maybe started to use grammarly, overrall great read!
No gender bender tag and futa such thing tag ruined my whole day nightmare for naruto fans
The author has problem, no offense, but you need Jesus man. ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠ ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠
That was incredibly unsettling to read. If I had the option, I would leave a negative review.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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That was incredibly unsettling to read. If I had the option, I would leave a negative review.
No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.
everything is fine, the main thing is to download updates more often. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
The spelling mistakes are aggressively in your face. Like they're impossible to miss, they're so distracting. There's also this huge system panel each chapter that the author uses to fill word count. You're lucky if even one part of it changes. Obviously, the story is incredibly degenerate, but that's the least of its problems.
Slow update, but excelent history. Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.Slow update, but excelent history.
yeah and the thing the guy never told you is that it's a gender Bender the reincarnator becomes a girl and for what it seems to be a female version of Naruto
update more often or at least tell us when you will update otherwise a perfect story
I'm confused, why there has to be a gender change when the Naruto anime has so many female heroes.......................................pppppppp pppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp pppppppppppppp