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The writing is great with barely any grammar problems, and stability in its uploads is lacking but good enough, the development of the story is going very well so far, I like the MC design, and the different worlds the author put in the story are amazing.
One of the best "superman" type fanfics, my only critique is updates and that i hope that mc puts more effort in getting stronger. 10/10
I love the interaction between the characters, it makes you feel their emotions and thoughts. The pacing of the story is right in the middle, not too fast or too slow. and the world background is good which is hard to make considering the characters from DC and MARVEL. and I love the character design of the MC. You can also feel the research that the Author did to get the character right. In the end, I give this a perfect score.
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I need more of Carol and Daniel moments damn it. it's too cute and vanilla, I need more. 😩 😍
This is a temporary assessment, I just want to know. Will the author in the hero's harem be Yuri? I just don't like Yuri🤮🤮(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
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crossover with dc/marvel is always cause for concern. But when a simple fabric can cause me to question the strength of one of the strongest characters in the universe. i just cant have any hope if consistent power scaling. nerfs hurt a narrative as power becomes a part of a character in these kinds of stories either the have it are getting it or are increasing it. it becomes one of the things that define them.
Хорошая работа и интересное развитие событий. Интересное описание песонажей, а также один из лучших (на мой взгляд) кроссоверов DC и Msrvel. Жду продолжения. И конечно хочу пожелать автору вдохновения и времени на все!
O patreon e bom para você mano Ganha ajuda você queria doa mais não tenho dinheiro pelo menos em 7 meses se der tudo certo eu começo a doar também essa é a melhor história que eu vi com o Marvel e DC então obrigado mano por trazer uma história tão boa [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=
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This is peak. It’s one of the best books on this platform. This account is pretty new, but I’ve been reading on here for a few years now and fics as good as this can be counted on your fingers. I’m sorry the author went through what he did, but I’m happy he found the motivation to write again.
Meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I like it very much. I hope the author increases the release schedule. A truly hidden gem in the marvel/dc fanfic. And also please drop this fic author
Por que você não adiciona uma vitrumite fêmea feminino ou uma versão feminina do Mark do invicible uns personagens originals virarem ficaria legal eu gostei do Superman fêmea hehehe
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I've read hundreds of stories on here. This is quite honestly one of the best fanfictions I've read in forever. I'm only up to chapter 9, as that's the max it currently has. But I'll be looking for more additions later on, of this masterpiece. Sorry to hear about the mugging author.
amazing 👏, this fanfiction is really well written with good character flow. read past chapter 1 and you'll see.
Espero que te encuentres bien 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I won't judge anyone who likes it but I don't like it, I tend to see myself as the main character when I read these stories and if I were the main character in this story I would kill myself, I don't think that living always waiting for something very wrong to happen is not a life that I want. Of course, life has challenges and mistakes, but me having coffee or a meeting out of the blue A guy stronger than me shows up and tries to kill me just for nothing, probably ruining my day, and killing a lot of people who were close to me, and I'll know that it's really my fault. because it is my destiny to face strong people so I will only be a problem for humanity depending on how strong I become.
Waiting for more chapters, don't be fooled by the beginning. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I don't need reasons, just the feeling I get when reading, something that starts at the beginning of each chapter and ends with me spending days without being able to find one, having to live with the loneliness and seriousness of my peaceful life and fragile life with a realistic perspective and materialist unlike those who are the same age as me, seeing the world end slowly and heading towards an early and monotonous end, with beings as boring as humans, being so selfish and influenceable, thinking that they can decide tomorrow alone, when in reality the What they are doing is just wasting time on something so futile and insignificant.
The writing is great with barely any grammar problems, and stability in its uploads is lacking but good enough, the development of the story is going very well so far, I like the MC design, and the different worlds the author put in the story are amazing.
One of the best "superman" type fanfics, my only critique is updates and that i hope that mc puts more effort in getting stronger. 10/10
I love the interaction between the characters, it makes you feel their emotions and thoughts. The pacing of the story is right in the middle, not too fast or too slow. and the world background is good which is hard to make considering the characters from DC and MARVEL. and I love the character design of the MC. You can also feel the research that the Author did to get the character right. In the end, I give this a perfect score.
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I need more of Carol and Daniel moments damn it. it's too cute and vanilla, I need more. 😩 😍
This is a temporary assessment, I just want to know. Will the author in the hero's harem be Yuri? I just don't like Yuri🤮🤮(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
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is this a rewrite ? ________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
crossover with dc/marvel is always cause for concern. But when a simple fabric can cause me to question the strength of one of the strongest characters in the universe. i just cant have any hope if consistent power scaling. nerfs hurt a narrative as power becomes a part of a character in these kinds of stories either the have it are getting it or are increasing it. it becomes one of the things that define them.
Хорошая работа и интересное развитие событий. Интересное описание песонажей, а также один из лучших (на мой взгляд) кроссоверов DC и Msrvel. Жду продолжения. И конечно хочу пожелать автору вдохновения и времени на все!
O patreon e bom para você mano Ganha ajuda você queria doa mais não tenho dinheiro pelo menos em 7 meses se der tudo certo eu começo a doar também essa é a melhor história que eu vi com o Marvel e DC então obrigado mano por trazer uma história tão boa [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=
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This is peak. It’s one of the best books on this platform. This account is pretty new, but I’ve been reading on here for a few years now and fics as good as this can be counted on your fingers. I’m sorry the author went through what he did, but I’m happy he found the motivation to write again.
Meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I like it very much. I hope the author increases the release schedule. A truly hidden gem in the marvel/dc fanfic. And also please drop this fic author
Por que você não adiciona uma vitrumite fêmea feminino ou uma versão feminina do Mark do invicible uns personagens originals virarem ficaria legal eu gostei do Superman fêmea hehehe
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I've read hundreds of stories on here. This is quite honestly one of the best fanfictions I've read in forever. I'm only up to chapter 9, as that's the max it currently has. But I'll be looking for more additions later on, of this masterpiece. Sorry to hear about the mugging author.
amazing 👏, this fanfiction is really well written with good character flow. read past chapter 1 and you'll see.
Espero que te encuentres bien 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I won't judge anyone who likes it but I don't like it, I tend to see myself as the main character when I read these stories and if I were the main character in this story I would kill myself, I don't think that living always waiting for something very wrong to happen is not a life that I want. Of course, life has challenges and mistakes, but me having coffee or a meeting out of the blue A guy stronger than me shows up and tries to kill me just for nothing, probably ruining my day, and killing a lot of people who were close to me, and I'll know that it's really my fault. because it is my destiny to face strong people so I will only be a problem for humanity depending on how strong I become.
Waiting for more chapters, don't be fooled by the beginning. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I don't need reasons, just the feeling I get when reading, something that starts at the beginning of each chapter and ends with me spending days without being able to find one, having to live with the loneliness and seriousness of my peaceful life and fragile life with a realistic perspective and materialist unlike those who are the same age as me, seeing the world end slowly and heading towards an early and monotonous end, with beings as boring as humans, being so selfish and influenceable, thinking that they can decide tomorrow alone, when in reality the What they are doing is just wasting time on something so futile and insignificant.