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Ok so, i have read only the first few chapters but this MTL is making me kinda angry. The grammar has mistakes, the names of abilities are not correct like I don't even know if the MC have a rinne-sharingan or a Mangekyo sharingan. This is sadly not the one for me. Though i wad hoping alot from it but it's just the translation is really putting me off
Mediocre Uchiha clan? Author I think you have misconception on the clan in any other world no matter which one you choose the Uchiha as long as they don’t become as conceited and arrogant as in the plot have a standing as a strong force
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline, but the translate/english and grammar is quite bad (although I still understand what it mean, it still disturbing).. I love MC/Han attitude.. He's motto is like salted fish, but he didn't afraid to show his power.. I don't mind an op MC or harem story, as long as it still not overboard (like MC is so strong like god, or take all the beautiful women).. I love how he trash root, Danzo, Orochimaru, etc.. I also like how he recruit Kakuzu, Sasori, etc (it's funny).. I also like his interaction with others, especially when he's cooking and the reaction of someone who eat his food (Sanbi interaction is the best).. Love your story author san.. Hope you continue translate this story 😁👍😍😍
The translation is criminally bad. Story was pretty good;however, the Teri me translation was a huge turnoff. If you don’t mind had grammar, then I would recommend.
world background is good ..... it's Naruto ...... but the story is bad ...... translation is worse..... i don't want to waste my time anymore..... plus this is a Chinese translate and i find some non English words in this and it ain't even Chinese, something else..... so it's pretty cr.p and waste of time
Oh, I've read this somewhere before! I think it was on Babelnovel. I don't know why this version is bad when the one on Babel is well-translated. But all in all, it's a pretty good story on Babel. It's just that this translation is ruining it.
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Типичный китайский ФФ, когда гг после пробуждения становится имбой и может убивать людей как будто он это делает каждый день. Развитие персонажа очень простое, но и персонаж склонен к типичному китайцу из фанфика. Дропаю этот ФФ после 20 главы, из-за шаблонности и предсказуемости. Гг склонен к злобе и бессмысленному насилию, весь фанфик как и большинство китайский произведений про культиваторов основано на схеме: ты ухаживает за смертью; ты не видишь гор и рек в своем колодце и прочее, где герой просто непобедимый и всесильный и творит беспредел просто потому что он может и его некто не остановит.
115+ chapters. For me, this is heresy. And for someone who wants to be a salted fish, he never sat down, was not lazy and is always in battles and at the same time he is looking for them himself. And so this is a typical Chinese ff.
Author has serious mtl issues with both the Max level up of the sharingan going from beginner, 1 tomoe all the way past rinnegan combined with sharingan into kaguya level shenanigans(9 tomaoe) along with the translator not understanding how to use male/female, its just not good and difficult to read.
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Ok so, i have read only the first few chapters but this MTL is making me kinda angry. The grammar has mistakes, the names of abilities are not correct like I don't even know if the MC have a rinne-sharingan or a Mangekyo sharingan. This is sadly not the one for me. Though i wad hoping alot from it but it's just the translation is really putting me off
Mediocre Uchiha clan? Author I think you have misconception on the clan in any other world no matter which one you choose the Uchiha as long as they don’t become as conceited and arrogant as in the plot have a standing as a strong force
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline, but the translate/english and grammar is quite bad (although I still understand what it mean, it still disturbing).. I love MC/Han attitude.. He's motto is like salted fish, but he didn't afraid to show his power.. I don't mind an op MC or harem story, as long as it still not overboard (like MC is so strong like god, or take all the beautiful women).. I love how he trash root, Danzo, Orochimaru, etc.. I also like how he recruit Kakuzu, Sasori, etc (it's funny).. I also like his interaction with others, especially when he's cooking and the reaction of someone who eat his food (Sanbi interaction is the best).. Love your story author san.. Hope you continue translate this story 😁👍😍😍
The translation is criminally bad. Story was pretty good;however, the Teri me translation was a huge turnoff. If you don’t mind had grammar, then I would recommend.
world background is good ..... it's Naruto ...... but the story is bad ...... translation is worse..... i don't want to waste my time anymore..... plus this is a Chinese translate and i find some non English words in this and it ain't even Chinese, something else..... so it's pretty cr.p and waste of time
Oh, I've read this somewhere before! I think it was on Babelnovel. I don't know why this version is bad when the one on Babel is well-translated. But all in all, it's a pretty good story on Babel. It's just that this translation is ruining it.
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Типичный китайский ФФ, когда гг после пробуждения становится имбой и может убивать людей как будто он это делает каждый день. Развитие персонажа очень простое, но и персонаж склонен к типичному китайцу из фанфика. Дропаю этот ФФ после 20 главы, из-за шаблонности и предсказуемости. Гг склонен к злобе и бессмысленному насилию, весь фанфик как и большинство китайский произведений про культиваторов основано на схеме: ты ухаживает за смертью; ты не видишь гор и рек в своем колодце и прочее, где герой просто непобедимый и всесильный и творит беспредел просто потому что он может и его некто не остановит.
115+ chapters. For me, this is heresy. And for someone who wants to be a salted fish, he never sat down, was not lazy and is always in battles and at the same time he is looking for them himself. And so this is a typical Chinese ff.
Author has serious mtl issues with both the Max level up of the sharingan going from beginner, 1 tomoe all the way past rinnegan combined with sharingan into kaguya level shenanigans(9 tomaoe) along with the translator not understanding how to use male/female, its just not good and difficult to read.
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