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It’s too cringe for my taste, the writing is very immature even childish, it’s like an anime adapted to a novel. I would recommend it if u r a minor though.
Only on chapter 4 and it’s already bad. I know, I know, people will say “read past chapter 4 and it gets good!” but if I don’t even like it after 4 chapters why would I read any more? The main character is a genuine idiot. Like he instantly tells his servant every single one of his plans and. Actually, I don’t even feel like putting in the effort for such a sub-par novel. It’s trash
He knows he is being cringe the whole time but does not stop being cringe. If anything, it makes him worse. It also feels like he is just jumping to one half-baked plot point to the next and only has an arbitrary goal of making a cult for the sake of making a cult.
mano que bagulho cringe, parece que um adolescente com shuni escreveu isso, namoral pensei que eu iria morrer de tanta vergonha alheia.
Story very similar to a certain anime indeed. Maybe too similar… But the writing quality is difficult. You completely lost me in volume 2. They fight and next chapter we are in an academy, and then suddenly we meet someone and get to know there was a 15 years time jump, ok. And then it jumps again without concluding the meeting, and meeting someone else and then we are back in academy life again without concluding the meeting. Btw you did not even explain the world setting. These jumps make it an unreadable for me.
I felt reading this novel was very boring because the vibe of the story was almost the same as the SHADOW GARDEN story
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Cringe, other then that, pretty good grammar. Also, the author should learn to show, not tell.
10 chapters in and I can say the book has potential. I'll give a much detailed review later on. Keep the updates coming bro...[img=update][img=More pls]
Now that shadow garden has ended, reading something that looks similar but still different makes me happy
Love the novel so far good plot good characters good everything keep it up 👍
Although theirs not enough chapters to make a proper review, I so far it’s pretty good with only a few grammar errors and good plot line.(When there’s more content, I’ll come back and make a full review.)
The Mc remind me of the eminence in shadow and genshin impact over all I like where the story is going.
Hey, Kirito_K5 here,.The first few chapters of this book was heavily inspired by Eminence in the shadow, ever since seeing the anime, the urge to write something similar got stronger, and so i did.Do give this a read, and I hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoy writing it.If you have any questions about this book, I'll be happy to reply to them down below, once again...Thank you for reading.
It’s too cringe for my taste, the writing is very immature even childish, it’s like an anime adapted to a novel. I would recommend it if u r a minor though.
Only on chapter 4 and it’s already bad. I know, I know, people will say “read past chapter 4 and it gets good!” but if I don’t even like it after 4 chapters why would I read any more? The main character is a genuine idiot. Like he instantly tells his servant every single one of his plans and. Actually, I don’t even feel like putting in the effort for such a sub-par novel. It’s trash
He knows he is being cringe the whole time but does not stop being cringe. If anything, it makes him worse. It also feels like he is just jumping to one half-baked plot point to the next and only has an arbitrary goal of making a cult for the sake of making a cult.
mano que bagulho cringe, parece que um adolescente com shuni escreveu isso, namoral pensei que eu iria morrer de tanta vergonha alheia.
Story very similar to a certain anime indeed. Maybe too similar… But the writing quality is difficult. You completely lost me in volume 2. They fight and next chapter we are in an academy, and then suddenly we meet someone and get to know there was a 15 years time jump, ok. And then it jumps again without concluding the meeting, and meeting someone else and then we are back in academy life again without concluding the meeting. Btw you did not even explain the world setting. These jumps make it an unreadable for me.
I felt reading this novel was very boring because the vibe of the story was almost the same as the SHADOW GARDEN story
Revelar Spoiler Cringe, other then that, pretty good grammar. Also, the author should learn to show, not tell.
10 chapters in and I can say the book has potential. I'll give a much detailed review later on. Keep the updates coming bro...[img=update][img=More pls]
Now that shadow garden has ended, reading something that looks similar but still different makes me happy
Love the novel so far good plot good characters good everything keep it up 👍
Although theirs not enough chapters to make a proper review, I so far it’s pretty good with only a few grammar errors and good plot line.(When there’s more content, I’ll come back and make a full review.)
The Mc remind me of the eminence in shadow and genshin impact over all I like where the story is going.
Hey, Kirito_K5 here,.The first few chapters of this book was heavily inspired by Eminence in the shadow, ever since seeing the anime, the urge to write something similar got stronger, and so i did.Do give this a read, and I hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoy writing it.If you have any questions about this book, I'll be happy to reply to them down below, once again...Thank you for reading.