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Escreva uma avaliaçãoТы просто изменил имя главного героя, но в остальном это копия чужого фанфика. Если решил заниматься подобным, хотя бы копируй хорошие фанфики. Минимальные изменения.
The story is very good, and I really enjoy the mc as he does things for only his benefit. The only problem I have is that the story is too fast-paced, like my stories. I sometimes forget what Leylins cultivation level.
Ты просто изменил имя главного героя, но в остальном это копия чужого фанфика. Если решил заниматься подобным, хотя бы копируй хорошие фанфики. Минимальные изменения.
The story is very good, and I really enjoy the mc as he does things for only his benefit. The only problem I have is that the story is too fast-paced, like my stories. I sometimes forget what Leylins cultivation level.