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This has alrady been sad before but MC Midels to much with the saiyens its not even funny.i understand he is big fan but at this point mc only exist to make the cast stronger .30 chapters in and the mc has stil no personality
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I will be brutally honest. This is shit, Krillin meat rides Goku for most of the story and he is more busy creaming his pants for the main cast to actually have personality. His entire personality is that he is just a fix-it mc. Author makes any excuse to tweak the main rules of dragon ball, for example when he introduced Super Saiyan he proceeded to nerf it because of “Later power scaling”. Honestly this shit is just hard to enjoy when it’s mostly about how Krillin likes to help others then given himself much needed power ups.
To be honest, I've always enjoyed reading fanfictions based on non-cannon, such as fanfics of fanfics. And it's not only because such authors usually place in decent effort in their writing while thinking somewhat logically, but that popular abridged works are appealing spin-offs that wouldn't be remembered otherwise. For example, I feel I remember the abridged DBZ better than the plots of some animes that I haven't watched decades ago. Don't get me wrong, some abridged animes were just memeing because the fansub wasn't officially out yet, such as Akikan, iirc, it was just bad, because the creator didn't actually know what was being said and made an abridged sub instead?
I haven't come across to many krillan stories. This story has been great so far. I can't wait to read more......................................................
Meh. It's not that good. I left it at 11. I'll probably come back if I don't have anything to read. But it's not a big deal. A stupid MC and etc. You know what they say, if a story doesn't grab you from the beginning, then it's bad, because if no one reads it because it's boring at that moment... Who could disagree with you? The only reason I'm coming back is because it's a DBZ fanfic. This is more of a fanservis and a biography of the reincarnated Krillin. 'i did this and that, goku did this and that, if he had done this and that, probably this and that' you get the point.
As of chapter 30, I’m loving the fanfic. The first chapter is very stupid, the mc chooses to be reborn as a bald dwarf with no nose, and has terrible reasons for not choosing another character to be reborn as. He also chooses to be reborn at the end of og dragonball, instead of the start of db, which would give him more of a headstart. But after the first chapter, I loved the entire story until i got caught up. The first chapter is the only annoying part, and the rest of the story is fire, and also has a few dbza elements like abridged popo, or them seeing fake namek, or recoome’s WWE lines. Doesnt interfere with the story, but adds comedy. Great fanfic overall, please don’t drop.
Not a great fic, but a good fic to pass time. The wishes just don't make sense tho, and they are overused. Also the story starts after picollo arc, not king picolo. Besides that the bigest minus for me is that mc didn't wish to be taller and look like a normal human at least.
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Wow 😳😳😳😳😳 like it lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllollllllllllllllllllll
A Self Insert FF as a Krillin,? i will give it a chance, as my thanks Android:18.
Smart approach on this chapter. While the of DragonBall has some battles that sometimes shows the difference between strength and experience, it's always the beauty of martial arts and fighting techniques that brings it all together. For this Krillin to do a contest tournament on this story was excellent. Keep up the good work. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
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Excellent start of the story. Finally giving Krillin the greenlit the he deserves. As well helping the Z-Fighters to get the opportunity to prepare for future events and battles that might come their way. Can't wait for the next chapter. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
read up to chapter 11 at time of review. I like it. I feel like it is a fresh spin on the dragon ball story so far. There is proper communication between the characters. The author is doing a good job at not making it feel dry. The grammar is decent, a small mistake here and there but nothing glaring. All in all I like it and can't wait for more chapters to be released. Thank you author, and keep up the good work.
First of all don’t disrespect ma boy krillin since at least he’s the strongest human and second of all great starting and hopefully there will be more
At first it was somewhat fun to read, but it got boring pretty quick. Too much nonsense, more like a slice of life than a shonen. Too much tfs jokes to the point it's annoying. The mc got his training speed x20 but somehow he turned himself into a Saiyan in earthling clothing. He manages to keep up with saiyans power ups, how on earth would that be possible? Earth's Shenron is capable of turning people into saiyans and many more nonsensical things happening. TOTALLY NOT WORTH IT
This has alrady been sad before but MC Midels to much with the saiyens its not even funny.i understand he is big fan but at this point mc only exist to make the cast stronger .30 chapters in and the mc has stil no personality
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I will be brutally honest. This is shit, Krillin meat rides Goku for most of the story and he is more busy creaming his pants for the main cast to actually have personality. His entire personality is that he is just a fix-it mc. Author makes any excuse to tweak the main rules of dragon ball, for example when he introduced Super Saiyan he proceeded to nerf it because of “Later power scaling”. Honestly this shit is just hard to enjoy when it’s mostly about how Krillin likes to help others then given himself much needed power ups.
To be honest, I've always enjoyed reading fanfictions based on non-cannon, such as fanfics of fanfics. And it's not only because such authors usually place in decent effort in their writing while thinking somewhat logically, but that popular abridged works are appealing spin-offs that wouldn't be remembered otherwise. For example, I feel I remember the abridged DBZ better than the plots of some animes that I haven't watched decades ago. Don't get me wrong, some abridged animes were just memeing because the fansub wasn't officially out yet, such as Akikan, iirc, it was just bad, because the creator didn't actually know what was being said and made an abridged sub instead?
I haven't come across to many krillan stories. This story has been great so far. I can't wait to read more......................................................
Meh. It's not that good. I left it at 11. I'll probably come back if I don't have anything to read. But it's not a big deal. A stupid MC and etc. You know what they say, if a story doesn't grab you from the beginning, then it's bad, because if no one reads it because it's boring at that moment... Who could disagree with you? The only reason I'm coming back is because it's a DBZ fanfic. This is more of a fanservis and a biography of the reincarnated Krillin. 'i did this and that, goku did this and that, if he had done this and that, probably this and that' you get the point.
As of chapter 30, I’m loving the fanfic. The first chapter is very stupid, the mc chooses to be reborn as a bald dwarf with no nose, and has terrible reasons for not choosing another character to be reborn as. He also chooses to be reborn at the end of og dragonball, instead of the start of db, which would give him more of a headstart. But after the first chapter, I loved the entire story until i got caught up. The first chapter is the only annoying part, and the rest of the story is fire, and also has a few dbza elements like abridged popo, or them seeing fake namek, or recoome’s WWE lines. Doesnt interfere with the story, but adds comedy. Great fanfic overall, please don’t drop.
Not a great fic, but a good fic to pass time. The wishes just don't make sense tho, and they are overused. Also the story starts after picollo arc, not king picolo. Besides that the bigest minus for me is that mc didn't wish to be taller and look like a normal human at least.
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Wow 😳😳😳😳😳 like it lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllollllllllllllllllllll
A Self Insert FF as a Krillin,? i will give it a chance, as my thanks Android:18.
Smart approach on this chapter. While the of DragonBall has some battles that sometimes shows the difference between strength and experience, it's always the beauty of martial arts and fighting techniques that brings it all together. For this Krillin to do a contest tournament on this story was excellent. Keep up the good work. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
I'm betman xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
Revelar Spoiler You are killing it with the krillin fic right now. I hope that you will keep it up and keep it going. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Excellent start of the story. Finally giving Krillin the greenlit the he deserves. As well helping the Z-Fighters to get the opportunity to prepare for future events and battles that might come their way. Can't wait for the next chapter. 👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿
read up to chapter 11 at time of review. I like it. I feel like it is a fresh spin on the dragon ball story so far. There is proper communication between the characters. The author is doing a good job at not making it feel dry. The grammar is decent, a small mistake here and there but nothing glaring. All in all I like it and can't wait for more chapters to be released. Thank you author, and keep up the good work.
First of all don’t disrespect ma boy krillin since at least he’s the strongest human and second of all great starting and hopefully there will be more
At first it was somewhat fun to read, but it got boring pretty quick. Too much nonsense, more like a slice of life than a shonen. Too much tfs jokes to the point it's annoying. The mc got his training speed x20 but somehow he turned himself into a Saiyan in earthling clothing. He manages to keep up with saiyans power ups, how on earth would that be possible? Earth's Shenron is capable of turning people into saiyans and many more nonsensical things happening. TOTALLY NOT WORTH IT