Multiple Talents in Naruto World

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AlexCyberHeart

2/3/2/2/3 English could use some work, bad writing decisions like coherent drunk ramblings such that MC says he has future knowledge but Tsunade acts as if she believes him yet chooses not to confront him as if the lives of those she cares about are not worth his knowing that she tried to pull information from him

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KILLER_Pineapple

This has a lot of potential but seems like the creativity wasn’t explored the mc can do so many things with his chakra and talent yet mainly makes support jutsu and the romance is super forced and rushed I dropped when he made a robot but the story isn’t bad for the right person I guess just not to my liking

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Gratiz_

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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DukeZero

one of the best ff i have read 💯🔥🔥🔥The romance part is my favorite.Please don't abandoned it and update more.It is now in one of my favorite list.

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YuyukoSaigyouji

btw, is this an original work or a TL result from Raw? . The story is good, the characters are not forced, and the MC is a romantic idiot. Lol #Tsunade#Waifu#1 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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RealJoke_Pota

It's reaaaallllly gooooooooooooooooooood!

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1Volk_Winc_est4

One of the first naruto fanfic authors with the balls to save the Uzumaki clan If you're fed up with the endless repetition of canon, and want to see a story where the MC's actions have a real impact on the evolution of the ninja world, this is the story for you. Long live the Uzumaki, Senju, Uchiha, Kaguya Clan Death to Hiruzen, Death to Danzo

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thesacredmenace

I have searched far and wide for a well-written Naruto fanfic with Tsunade as the female lead, and now I have found it. Please author-Sama, don't drop!

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ReaderCat

this is the first time I'm reading a naruto fan-fic that I really like. i think you're really good at this and i wish you don't stop writing this novel. i'd like to offer constructive criticism, but to me there's no bad points, and if there are, they're small enough to be forgotten. In my humble opinion, I would add that offering a deeper perspective on the events and writing from different people's perspectives can improve the quality of the novel.

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Only_Ryan

one of my favorite so please don't drop👍👍

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ParPule

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Srinidhi_r_shetty

Writing needs some work. And mc is honestly kinda confusing like at the start he was who arc of self depreciation and suddenly changed into giga chad who won tusande heart with forced romance. Many of the plots are not explained in detail they are left hanging(like what did the MC clones did which suprised him during attack on root arc).yeah I think author needs to put some time before writing because it feels you wrote this fic without much taught put into it

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Humbuub

That's not how those talents supposed to work. Also the writing structure is just terrible, hard to read through, I saw some MTL with better English than this.

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Itachi_Uchiha_8012

it's just bad if the author really wanna know why, just ask

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DaviToledo

obrigada por escrever essa obra de arte, estarei asiosamente esperando por mais capítulos!

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Swikong

A Masterpiece Book! Which do not makes you bore while reading the story. An MC who uses his talents and the character+story development where MC learns & develop as the story develops. Just hope that the Author won't drop midway & we all to see this Story/Book a Grand Completion. I also expect this story goes on for a very very long-term.

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transcribed_master

I have currently read up to chapter 13. (at time of post it's the latest chapter) I honestly like the way that the characters are developing at the moment. It doesn't feel forced. The grammar is decent, no glaring issues so far. This is going into my reading list and I can't wait for new updates. Good job so far author and keep up the good work.

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ReaderCat

this is the first time I'm reading a naruto fan-fic that I really like. i think you're really good at this and i wish you don't stop writing this novel. i'd like to offer constructive criticism, but to me there's no bad points, and if there are, they're small enough to be forgotten.