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I'm glad it isn't a harem like most stories, since it's very prevalent. Overall, it's a great short story for fun reading
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i love to the no harem and no lolicon so five star all of it and the story is good to i enjoying excited too I'm a Filipino and not good and English 🥰🥰🥲😓❤️💛💛🧡❤️
Ain't no way you like those things BUSTING in your mouth little bro"@RoyalProto"
Loved the story and the characters. One of the only good story’s with a jinx love interest that was good and didn’t get dropped.
The writing is pretty good though the MC is pretty useless from the start *according to the author it is intended so that Powder can turn into Jinx.* I just don't know if the MC would turn from Psycho to a better person or From Psycho to a mass murderer deranged demon lord cliche or something
based soley on the sinopsis i loved you sir author and i am sure your work will be great
Me gusta mucho, aunque este es el primer fanfic de Arcane que leo veo que tiene mucho potencial y espero mucho de el
there are a few chapters that characters have no expression when talking, Sometimes, I get bored when authors write like this: exampleme: "Is this kid really that scary?"friend: : "Yea, this little kid!" me: "Really!?"no expression, don't overdo that but overall, it's a good story.
The overall plot comes of as great especially since he doesn't eat people in front of Vi and the gang since ya know, he's supposed to be a child so 10/10.
just because jinx is the female lead you get 5 stars adult jinx best waifu :$ SpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoiler
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I'm glad it isn't a harem like most stories, since it's very prevalent. Overall, it's a great short story for fun reading
Revelar Spoiler i love to the no harem and no lolicon so five star all of it and the story is good to i enjoying excited too I'm a Filipino and not good and English 🥰🥰🥲😓❤️💛💛🧡❤️
Ain't no way you like those things BUSTING in your mouth little bro"@RoyalProto"
Loved the story and the characters. One of the only good story’s with a jinx love interest that was good and didn’t get dropped.
The writing is pretty good though the MC is pretty useless from the start *according to the author it is intended so that Powder can turn into Jinx.* I just don't know if the MC would turn from Psycho to a better person or From Psycho to a mass murderer deranged demon lord cliche or something
based soley on the sinopsis i loved you sir author and i am sure your work will be great
Me gusta mucho, aunque este es el primer fanfic de Arcane que leo veo que tiene mucho potencial y espero mucho de el
there are a few chapters that characters have no expression when talking, Sometimes, I get bored when authors write like this: exampleme: "Is this kid really that scary?"friend: : "Yea, this little kid!" me: "Really!?"no expression, don't overdo that but overall, it's a good story.
The overall plot comes of as great especially since he doesn't eat people in front of Vi and the gang since ya know, he's supposed to be a child so 10/10.
just because jinx is the female lead you get 5 stars adult jinx best waifu :$ SpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoilerSpoiler
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loved this book wish it was longer but man the ending will surprise you