3Opiniões
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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Decently good albeit worried that the mc would get op too fast. Also a bit crossover and stuff so more depth to the world. Thats prolly the major reason for me still reading it. System has given him many cheat abilities so that is kinda like a bummer for many. Writing quality is not too bad. MC is also not harry potters sidekick or close friend(many ppl hate that so stating). MC seems kinda dumb at first but that was only too add comedy element.
I only read 3 chapters because there is too much that annyos me. There are either parts missing or some parts that shouldn't be there because they make no sense. You clearly see the asian writing in many places (calling strangers uncle/aunt, Mr. firstname, ...). The idea is very interesting but withhout a competent editor i can't read this. If someone does edit thsi i will certainly come back to continue reading
very good ...............................................................................................................................................................................
Decently good albeit worried that the mc would get op too fast. Also a bit crossover and stuff so more depth to the world. Thats prolly the major reason for me still reading it. System has given him many cheat abilities so that is kinda like a bummer for many. Writing quality is not too bad. MC is also not harry potters sidekick or close friend(many ppl hate that so stating). MC seems kinda dumb at first but that was only too add comedy element.
I only read 3 chapters because there is too much that annyos me. There are either parts missing or some parts that shouldn't be there because they make no sense. You clearly see the asian writing in many places (calling strangers uncle/aunt, Mr. firstname, ...). The idea is very interesting but withhout a competent editor i can't read this. If someone does edit thsi i will certainly come back to continue reading
very good ...............................................................................................................................................................................