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The MC is a mixed bag character. Every now and then the mc has to use the word "nigga" and talk like a stereotypical black as if to convince the audience, or at least remind them, that the mc is indeed a black protagonist and does so to keep his imaginary black card. Apart from these small interludes, he's like Captain America and Punisher combined and with the wisdom of Solomon. The story is ok at best.
Hi i love your fanfiction its well writen and the Charakters Look real. Please keep up with the Updates i dont want to wate another 2 years. Thanks for your work please keep up 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🔥
Well, what can I say? A story full of struggle, a tough and uncompromising character, attractive and tasty for my taste, especially in a world where world order no longer exists. Although there are errors and gaps, it does not mean that it is not a good story to pass the time.
Has that horrible script type of writing. Name: hello, blah, blah, blah. Not gonna even try.
This is a really good story and I recommend reading it!Author does a good job at portraying the mc personality and building his character in Twd world even though mc isn’t a reincarnated mc and the pace is also very good
this one is a work of art for my perspective I hope the author continues this story . yes the mc is kind of super lucky but he got also some up and downs . this story got me hooked up thanks author hope you updated this to lick the other one game of thrones nanites 😁💪
The story has several things I don't like and I made sure to express that in my comments, but it's still one of the few TWD stories that does more than just follow the original group, I appreciate the originality. Although there were things I didn't like, I enjoyed most of the story.
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Gostei bastante até agora. O MC é um bom líder e gosto bastante de não estar tão focado no grupo do Rick, ele tá fazendo sua própria caminhada. Recomendo a leitura
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It's a good story like all the story you have write befor and i wish you write one about game of thrones,vikings etc and goog luck inthe next story.
MC is a petty, resentful, racist piece of shit. I don't know what the author's problems are, but this eternal whining of blacks about how their ancestors had it bad in slavery and what bastards all Europeans are for not begging for their forgiveness is already boring. Maybe that's enough already? The original characters have sharply lost their critical thinking due to the author's arbitrariness. For example, Hershel will never, under any circumstances, leave his farm until a horde of the dead visits him. And here he unexpectedly easily agreed to leave his home. This does not happen, here everyone is clearly either stupid or perpetually high.
Revelar Spoiler The MC is a mixed bag character. Every now and then the mc has to use the word "nigga" and talk like a stereotypical black as if to convince the audience, or at least remind them, that the mc is indeed a black protagonist and does so to keep his imaginary black card. Apart from these small interludes, he's like Captain America and Punisher combined and with the wisdom of Solomon. The story is ok at best.
Hi i love your fanfiction its well writen and the Charakters Look real. Please keep up with the Updates i dont want to wate another 2 years. Thanks for your work please keep up 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🔥
Well, what can I say? A story full of struggle, a tough and uncompromising character, attractive and tasty for my taste, especially in a world where world order no longer exists. Although there are errors and gaps, it does not mean that it is not a good story to pass the time.
Has that horrible script type of writing. Name: hello, blah, blah, blah. Not gonna even try.
This is a really good story and I recommend reading it!Author does a good job at portraying the mc personality and building his character in Twd world even though mc isn’t a reincarnated mc and the pace is also very good
this one is a work of art for my perspective I hope the author continues this story . yes the mc is kind of super lucky but he got also some up and downs . this story got me hooked up thanks author hope you updated this to lick the other one game of thrones nanites 😁💪
The story has several things I don't like and I made sure to express that in my comments, but it's still one of the few TWD stories that does more than just follow the original group, I appreciate the originality. Although there were things I didn't like, I enjoyed most of the story.
Harem?🤔 Jajsjjxjsjdvbdjajdbdnjdbbdnndn nzndbzbbzbzbjxjsbznzjjznzbxbjzxbbxbxnxbbxbxndnndbxbxbxbbdbjdjxjejbxjdudbxje widjdjxbusubxbdjbx jwjzbxbjxc nccdbxbndnsnnsndnnddndndnd
Gostei bastante até agora. O MC é um bom líder e gosto bastante de não estar tão focado no grupo do Rick, ele tá fazendo sua própria caminhada. Recomendo a leitura
Revelar Spoiler It's a good story like all the story you have write befor and i wish you write one about game of thrones,vikings etc and goog luck inthe next story.
MC is a petty, resentful, racist piece of shit. I don't know what the author's problems are, but this eternal whining of blacks about how their ancestors had it bad in slavery and what bastards all Europeans are for not begging for their forgiveness is already boring. Maybe that's enough already? The original characters have sharply lost their critical thinking due to the author's arbitrariness. For example, Hershel will never, under any circumstances, leave his farm until a horde of the dead visits him. And here he unexpectedly easily agreed to leave his home. This does not happen, here everyone is clearly either stupid or perpetually high.
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