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Love it please continue this book and I want to see more of despair in the novel
You need to keep this novel bro , and of you need to end it you can reincarnate him in another manhwa world . (I recommend :The beginning after the end, magic emperor , or highly recommended one : ranker who lives a second time) keep going brother. ❤️🔥🐉
the reviews are manipulated lol author at least so a good job at that. like leave some bad reviews so people will think it's genuine. sigh so much work for autyhor deleting so many bad reviews. 🤣🤣🤣
Perfect... this story have given me an inspiration to write something similar yet different fic of my own
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So far I am enjoying reading the novel. I really like the nano machine series and this is a good change of pace. I’m looking forward to the consistent updates too.
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The novel is +18... Does the mc use women as a tool? or do you really fall in love? Or does he just sell his body to get something from the girls?
Hello authour your story is good. I like how mc don’t care I want Thais kind of mc in many other novel and I like how he does what ever he want. Other author mostly focuses on women were as you have mc which knows what to do I can’t like. If you can create story with similar mc I bet many with that. Thank you for offering such story. And don’t care about what other say. They will always comment something negative.
I only read this because it is the only nani machine fan fiction, the start is great but after the mc kills his father he started secluded himself for 3 years and ge dont even get that much stronger ☠️ there are too many faking unnecessary dramas too
Crazy, this is too great, just waiting for the big show........................................... .....Crazy, this is too great, just waiting for the big show
Except for remembering Nano Machine or a few characters I forgot everything. Is it taken from a novel or Manhwa? Jeez, I don't even remember if there are any differences. I guess I just have to read it then... Take this 5-star review for free, as the novel is a unique one.
as the story goes, it becomes boring.. what is the purpose of MC existence if he can't even kill the protagonist and always needs to look at his back.. he can just cripple the protagonist since it didn't break the deal between MC and the god..
can't say no more this is a masterpiece. even though i don't know anything about nano machine I still enjoy it and the MC's decision is kind of close to what iwant him to do.
There are a lot of things that I love about this novel. But there are 2 main ones. The first is the lack of a rowing system, there is no system at all that spoils the plot. And the second is the cruelty of the protagonist. If I go to win over Cheon Yevon as much as possible, and then betray and trample on him is very good, I can't wait for it to happen.
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You have good going there. Just need some experience in writing and you will be as good as any. Give the story a little bit more plot. Good luck. I hope you will succeed!
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Short Review: I loved this fanfic. Not gonna lie, for the first time in last few months have I read such a good fanfic that made me give a review. Overall I love the pacing, though I sometimes have problem, remembering the names of the characters lol; would be great to have some images. Anyway definitely worth reading. Waiting for the next chapters lol. My detailed review: Writing Quality: (4 stars) Feel a bit fast paced. Would have been really great if author would have taken a short while in going deeper into the plot, and explaining what had happened in more details. Updating Stability: (5 stars I guess?) I guess 5 chaps/week is great updating schedule. Story Development: (4 stars) Like I said before would have loved it more if there was a bit more details. On another note, most of the feats of MC is off screen which makes it just Hax with no real feats. Would be great to go a bit more into details. Character Design: (4 stars) Love the character design of MC love the ruthlessness and character. The only thing is that I don’t like how MC once whispered insulting words to his father (The lord of faction) and I think his father would have actually taken it as an offense of it was according to original canon. He was good only to a few of his sons, but from what I saw, MC have rarely interacted with his father so it would have been a bit too different from what happened in this FF. Anyway it was still enjoyable so guess 4.5 stars but since I can’t give half star, so have given 4 stars. If MC is trying to hide his abilities make it so that it is logical and not like that plot. As this would have angered MCs father and would have revealed his abilities if his father would have actually taken action. World Background: (5 star) It’s Nano Machines, son! Overall: 4.4 stars. Worth reading. (PIN?) lol
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amazing story so far, would definitely continue reading. love the mc aswell. .........................................................
I’ll keep it short. It’s really good. Maybe you could go into more details about some scenes *cough* *cough*. Please keep updating and don’t drop. Thanks for the fanfic. ❤️
So far there hasn't been any strong pull, Let me see after the free update in the future, If it makes me interested, then I will subscribe to this novel........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Love it please continue this book and I want to see more of despair in the novel
You need to keep this novel bro , and of you need to end it you can reincarnate him in another manhwa world . (I recommend :The beginning after the end, magic emperor , or highly recommended one : ranker who lives a second time) keep going brother. ❤️🔥🐉
the reviews are manipulated lol author at least so a good job at that. like leave some bad reviews so people will think it's genuine. sigh so much work for autyhor deleting so many bad reviews. 🤣🤣🤣
Perfect... this story have given me an inspiration to write something similar yet different fic of my own
Revelar Spoiler So far I am enjoying reading the novel. I really like the nano machine series and this is a good change of pace. I’m looking forward to the consistent updates too.
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The novel is +18... Does the mc use women as a tool? or do you really fall in love? Or does he just sell his body to get something from the girls?
Hello authour your story is good. I like how mc don’t care I want Thais kind of mc in many other novel and I like how he does what ever he want. Other author mostly focuses on women were as you have mc which knows what to do I can’t like. If you can create story with similar mc I bet many with that. Thank you for offering such story. And don’t care about what other say. They will always comment something negative.
I only read this because it is the only nani machine fan fiction, the start is great but after the mc kills his father he started secluded himself for 3 years and ge dont even get that much stronger ☠️ there are too many faking unnecessary dramas too
Crazy, this is too great, just waiting for the big show........................................... .....Crazy, this is too great, just waiting for the big show
Except for remembering Nano Machine or a few characters I forgot everything. Is it taken from a novel or Manhwa? Jeez, I don't even remember if there are any differences. I guess I just have to read it then... Take this 5-star review for free, as the novel is a unique one.
as the story goes, it becomes boring.. what is the purpose of MC existence if he can't even kill the protagonist and always needs to look at his back.. he can just cripple the protagonist since it didn't break the deal between MC and the god..
can't say no more this is a masterpiece. even though i don't know anything about nano machine I still enjoy it and the MC's decision is kind of close to what iwant him to do.
There are a lot of things that I love about this novel. But there are 2 main ones. The first is the lack of a rowing system, there is no system at all that spoils the plot. And the second is the cruelty of the protagonist. If I go to win over Cheon Yevon as much as possible, and then betray and trample on him is very good, I can't wait for it to happen.
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You have good going there. Just need some experience in writing and you will be as good as any. Give the story a little bit more plot. Good luck. I hope you will succeed!
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Short Review: I loved this fanfic. Not gonna lie, for the first time in last few months have I read such a good fanfic that made me give a review. Overall I love the pacing, though I sometimes have problem, remembering the names of the characters lol; would be great to have some images. Anyway definitely worth reading. Waiting for the next chapters lol. My detailed review: Writing Quality: (4 stars) Feel a bit fast paced. Would have been really great if author would have taken a short while in going deeper into the plot, and explaining what had happened in more details. Updating Stability: (5 stars I guess?) I guess 5 chaps/week is great updating schedule. Story Development: (4 stars) Like I said before would have loved it more if there was a bit more details. On another note, most of the feats of MC is off screen which makes it just Hax with no real feats. Would be great to go a bit more into details. Character Design: (4 stars) Love the character design of MC love the ruthlessness and character. The only thing is that I don’t like how MC once whispered insulting words to his father (The lord of faction) and I think his father would have actually taken it as an offense of it was according to original canon. He was good only to a few of his sons, but from what I saw, MC have rarely interacted with his father so it would have been a bit too different from what happened in this FF. Anyway it was still enjoyable so guess 4.5 stars but since I can’t give half star, so have given 4 stars. If MC is trying to hide his abilities make it so that it is logical and not like that plot. As this would have angered MCs father and would have revealed his abilities if his father would have actually taken action. World Background: (5 star) It’s Nano Machines, son! Overall: 4.4 stars. Worth reading. (PIN?) lol
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amazing story so far, would definitely continue reading. love the mc aswell. .........................................................
I’ll keep it short. It’s really good. Maybe you could go into more details about some scenes *cough* *cough*. Please keep updating and don’t drop. Thanks for the fanfic. ❤️
So far there hasn't been any strong pull, Let me see after the free update in the future, If it makes me interested, then I will subscribe to this novel........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................