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- Design de Personagens
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really enjoyed this different take on Naruto. I can't wait to see how the story develops!
Author I love the original version and I think none of the readers of your books want you to write this version but if you still want to write it just write it but this has drawbacks to like in Naruto world if you don't change in some way you're bound to die easily and lose your everything if you do not develop yourself. Even if you make Naruto super powerful until he gains six paths chakra Naruto is not a god like being and can't save Shiori in every possible danger so with what you did with Izumi although unlike at first with start of third volume fitted perfectly to story and made it even greater. I really enjoy your novel till now and wish you good luck on your writing
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Quite like this, She is is loyal to the root, ill give the story so far 5/5 danzo.
Revelar Spoiler really enjoyed this different take on Naruto. I can't wait to see how the story develops!
Author I love the original version and I think none of the readers of your books want you to write this version but if you still want to write it just write it but this has drawbacks to like in Naruto world if you don't change in some way you're bound to die easily and lose your everything if you do not develop yourself. Even if you make Naruto super powerful until he gains six paths chakra Naruto is not a god like being and can't save Shiori in every possible danger so with what you did with Izumi although unlike at first with start of third volume fitted perfectly to story and made it even greater. I really enjoy your novel till now and wish you good luck on your writing
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Quite like this, She is is loyal to the root, ill give the story so far 5/5 danzo.
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