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Just Felt Like posting some of the cultivation ranks, only putting Immortal Path stages Mortals 1.Qi Refining 2. Foundation Establishment 3.Golden Core 4.Nascent Soul 5.Spirit Transformation 6.Half Immortal Immortals 7.True Immortal 8.Profound Immortal 9.Golden Immortal 9.Taiyi Immortal Monarch 10.Immortal Venerate 11.Dao/Tao Ancestor 12.Heavenly Sovereign 13(?).Great World Master
I'm a sucker for this novel, yes the translation sucks ash, yes a repetitive story formula is used for a very long time for a great part of the novel, and yes there is a lack of very complicated and interesting normal plotlines, and yes a lot of the character design feels bad as a lot of characters are left behind or are not expanded on, despite all these bad things ever since the novel's character turned into an immortal or a little before that has the novel seen some improvements in the writing (not translation), the author has learned how to add variety and subvert his writing structure for the plot, a lot more characters are relevant for much longer periods of time and have their own interesting details and secrets, the MC is still very careful but he is not afraid of showing his strength to get more opportunities and he is responsible, he has been helping his sect with management and with resources, one of my most favorite parts although not an improvement is that the author knows how to leave mysteries as mysteries to interest the reader and excite them with the reveal, some mysteries that have been set up include what the heck the Daqian emperor is doing post Yu Heng World, where is Bai Cliff, why the Wisdom Realm only wants to fight against Daluo, what the heck the Blazing Flame Tao Court Wants, what is the sword inside the Green Reed Sword's treasure space/ spirit realm, who killed the Green Reed Sword's previous owner, what sword did the Age Candle Ancestor fight against and what did it do to receive such spite, what is up with the immortal puppet Yuan Shuan brought back, who messed with the Dao for the ancient god system, what is the systems connection to the Wisdom Realm's master and what does it mean for Han Yi to have the blessings of multiple worlds and having the protection of a powerful being guarding his fate .................. why did I write so much, just feeling lonely I'm the only commenter on the later chapters
Who would pay more then $150 to read a bunch of mtl chapters? The prices on this app are just absurd currently.
I’ve read about 150 chapters so far so I feel I can talk about this book. The first 50 good translation, logic, consistent use of characters and world building is also good. After 75+ it all goes down hill translation gets worse by the chapter, for a good story I would read mtl translations even if I would to make up my own conclusions to understand what is being said but this is not worth it here’s why. There’s nothing special about the main character he’s own of those who keeps a low profile and sometimes shows his power but that’s it. His struggle for power or reason to cultivate almost becomes obsolete because of his panel. Meaning there’s much struggle making him boring. There’s always a need enemy or a new young master who appears out of thin air it’s like the world building is made on the fly to accommodate the current story . Power scaling is all over the place worse than dbz at this point. His strongest move atleast his strongest move for the past 100 chapters has been his floating daggers. Not only do they not use any qi consumption they are only medium grade but because they come as a set they are able to basically contend with weaker top grade weapons, higher than high grade. Which he got as a 5-6 as qi cultivator I forget. But still uses them to kill 9qi peak ??? Also he always seem to be richer and smarter than everybody else even richer than those who are the holy sons of sects with sect masters 3 realms higher than his own. Example: his sect has a gold core as sect master. Another character saintness of a sect has a level 5 major realm the spirit transformation realm but yet she never uses talismans in a secret realm but he does (they could But i don’t care anymore ) anyways it doesn’t make sense in that secret realm he is with other people with similar status and yet he is only doing something everyone else should do it’s stupid.
very bad translation.there is not much difference from MTL.it's not worth reading.
The novel is barely readable. The mc is pretty low-key, but is pretty dull and isn’t the smartest for a transmigrator. Translation is inconsistent. There are some terms switched around. For example, on the mc’s proficiency panel his rank for his skill keeps changing from entry to beginner to novice. There's a lot of that happening with other words. Also, it’s kinda dumb that the mc doesn’t use the pills he concocts to help raise his realm but uses spirit stones instead. There’s no explanation why he doesn’t do that, which seems kind of stupid. Instead, it’s explained that cultivators use spirit stones to cultivate, which makes sense, but what’s the point of pills then? It’s just a plot hole that’s so obvious that it’s annoying.
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Hi, I read more than 800 chapters so far. There was problem with translation at first but later it gets better, and story also gets better with time. I enjoyed this eastern fantasy, but scheme is similar every time. We got here often action with chase and kill (usually oponents are slightly above MC lvl). Sometimes MC is nerfed by author or MC got bad luck. I havent read so many such stories, but i have impression that author write sth and later changes conception and try to explain it to readers. Also broken ability of changing apperance and aura which he got for only 1000 high spirit stones which is CHEAP AS **** . 3,5 from me.
Revelar Spoiler
The book is really good. the story is engaging, fun, and brilliant. Thank you, author, for putting it out there . more chapters, please
total garbage translation..........................................................................................................................................................
the translation constantly messes up the realms and the character is way too stupid to tolerate..
I ve read all chapters so far. And now I want to do a good review.Shortly, this mc has fire root and developing & earning money from alchemy job. But somehow using the money (spirit stones) for cultivation is purer way than using pills and elixirs. Using elixirs gave people less progress than 1 spirit coin. And the elixirs prices go from 5 to 50 spirit coins. Hmm and this guy is probably best alchemist under Elders who got foundation established level cultivation. and he doesnt even use his pills for cultivating. So annoying how author didnt even give an idea about using own pills. Mc lvl ups every 3 to 6 years and there are no friends. close door cultivation. somehow he requires some spirit coins to level up faster, so he goes out for selling pills and getting money. Whatever I wrote here is all the story how goes. If you want to read / follow the process up to you. Byeee
Should change the name of this book to: "I locked the chapters early so people won't read it, so nyah nyah nyah!"
Revelar Spoiler
Amazing story although theres much more to do and to see. I'm really excited to see how future events will occur and what will happen. I love the world building especially Great job author!
Quite good. And the character is quite fun. even though there is no romance until chapter 100
Skill: learning for the first time/first glimpse of the door/entering the hall/understanding/mastery/reach the pinnacle Cultivation technique: introduction/skillful/proficient/attention to detail/perfect
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I changed my mind I had given it 3 stars before but this is hot garbage as i read more raws. Author keeps making new enemies out of thin air, snatches away MC s things to make it look fair including opportunities and sorts and lots of consistency issues. If anyone has read gate of good fortune they will know what i am talking about
Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't like Mc transmigrates☑️ finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️ Struggles but fails ☑️ gets a panel\ golden finger ☑️ ergo the training montage ☑️ gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️ also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kind super polite and amiable I mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
The translation quality ruins the entire novel because the names and ranks are constantly changing to the point I'm not sure what is what
I really like the concept,and the translation also improves quite a bit after the first 10-15 ch.
The story was engaging with all language and description that wasn't too 'filler' or exaggerated. I love that the women character wasn't described weirdly like monsters, compared to other author. The plot also clear and fighting scene was amazing. Like other author, always cut the fighting scene in between with unnecessary description of all detailed explanation which sometimes irks me. Plus, his character was sometimes too naive and sometimes too ruthless. He only learn disguise after twice almost died. Despite all assassination, he keep being careless and all the time was stalked and killed. His ability totally get useless after few fight/usage. And i also get bit annoyed when mc decided to find his prospective dao partner whom been missing for years during critical junction where he gonna upgrade to Golden Core. He already aware of all those many assassins and bad people targeting to kill him but still carelessly going out for plot purpose. Also he noticed that the tribulation definitely happen during these time, the probability was high and definitely not right timing to start dao partner thingy. It's bit stupid. Overall, it's good read but could be more perfect. I like it.
Just Felt Like posting some of the cultivation ranks, only putting Immortal Path stages Mortals 1.Qi Refining 2. Foundation Establishment 3.Golden Core 4.Nascent Soul 5.Spirit Transformation 6.Half Immortal Immortals 7.True Immortal 8.Profound Immortal 9.Golden Immortal 9.Taiyi Immortal Monarch 10.Immortal Venerate 11.Dao/Tao Ancestor 12.Heavenly Sovereign 13(?).Great World Master
I'm a sucker for this novel, yes the translation sucks ash, yes a repetitive story formula is used for a very long time for a great part of the novel, and yes there is a lack of very complicated and interesting normal plotlines, and yes a lot of the character design feels bad as a lot of characters are left behind or are not expanded on, despite all these bad things ever since the novel's character turned into an immortal or a little before that has the novel seen some improvements in the writing (not translation), the author has learned how to add variety and subvert his writing structure for the plot, a lot more characters are relevant for much longer periods of time and have their own interesting details and secrets, the MC is still very careful but he is not afraid of showing his strength to get more opportunities and he is responsible, he has been helping his sect with management and with resources, one of my most favorite parts although not an improvement is that the author knows how to leave mysteries as mysteries to interest the reader and excite them with the reveal, some mysteries that have been set up include what the heck the Daqian emperor is doing post Yu Heng World, where is Bai Cliff, why the Wisdom Realm only wants to fight against Daluo, what the heck the Blazing Flame Tao Court Wants, what is the sword inside the Green Reed Sword's treasure space/ spirit realm, who killed the Green Reed Sword's previous owner, what sword did the Age Candle Ancestor fight against and what did it do to receive such spite, what is up with the immortal puppet Yuan Shuan brought back, who messed with the Dao for the ancient god system, what is the systems connection to the Wisdom Realm's master and what does it mean for Han Yi to have the blessings of multiple worlds and having the protection of a powerful being guarding his fate .................. why did I write so much, just feeling lonely I'm the only commenter on the later chapters
Who would pay more then $150 to read a bunch of mtl chapters? The prices on this app are just absurd currently.
I’ve read about 150 chapters so far so I feel I can talk about this book. The first 50 good translation, logic, consistent use of characters and world building is also good. After 75+ it all goes down hill translation gets worse by the chapter, for a good story I would read mtl translations even if I would to make up my own conclusions to understand what is being said but this is not worth it here’s why. There’s nothing special about the main character he’s own of those who keeps a low profile and sometimes shows his power but that’s it. His struggle for power or reason to cultivate almost becomes obsolete because of his panel. Meaning there’s much struggle making him boring. There’s always a need enemy or a new young master who appears out of thin air it’s like the world building is made on the fly to accommodate the current story . Power scaling is all over the place worse than dbz at this point. His strongest move atleast his strongest move for the past 100 chapters has been his floating daggers. Not only do they not use any qi consumption they are only medium grade but because they come as a set they are able to basically contend with weaker top grade weapons, higher than high grade. Which he got as a 5-6 as qi cultivator I forget. But still uses them to kill 9qi peak ??? Also he always seem to be richer and smarter than everybody else even richer than those who are the holy sons of sects with sect masters 3 realms higher than his own. Example: his sect has a gold core as sect master. Another character saintness of a sect has a level 5 major realm the spirit transformation realm but yet she never uses talismans in a secret realm but he does (they could But i don’t care anymore ) anyways it doesn’t make sense in that secret realm he is with other people with similar status and yet he is only doing something everyone else should do it’s stupid.
very bad translation.there is not much difference from MTL.it's not worth reading.
The novel is barely readable. The mc is pretty low-key, but is pretty dull and isn’t the smartest for a transmigrator. Translation is inconsistent. There are some terms switched around. For example, on the mc’s proficiency panel his rank for his skill keeps changing from entry to beginner to novice. There's a lot of that happening with other words. Also, it’s kinda dumb that the mc doesn’t use the pills he concocts to help raise his realm but uses spirit stones instead. There’s no explanation why he doesn’t do that, which seems kind of stupid. Instead, it’s explained that cultivators use spirit stones to cultivate, which makes sense, but what’s the point of pills then? It’s just a plot hole that’s so obvious that it’s annoying.
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Hi, I read more than 800 chapters so far. There was problem with translation at first but later it gets better, and story also gets better with time. I enjoyed this eastern fantasy, but scheme is similar every time. We got here often action with chase and kill (usually oponents are slightly above MC lvl). Sometimes MC is nerfed by author or MC got bad luck. I havent read so many such stories, but i have impression that author write sth and later changes conception and try to explain it to readers. Also broken ability of changing apperance and aura which he got for only 1000 high spirit stones which is CHEAP AS **** . 3,5 from me.
Revelar Spoiler The book is really good. the story is engaging, fun, and brilliant. Thank you, author, for putting it out there . more chapters, please
total garbage translation..........................................................................................................................................................
the translation constantly messes up the realms and the character is way too stupid to tolerate..
I ve read all chapters so far. And now I want to do a good review.Shortly, this mc has fire root and developing & earning money from alchemy job. But somehow using the money (spirit stones) for cultivation is purer way than using pills and elixirs. Using elixirs gave people less progress than 1 spirit coin. And the elixirs prices go from 5 to 50 spirit coins. Hmm and this guy is probably best alchemist under Elders who got foundation established level cultivation. and he doesnt even use his pills for cultivating. So annoying how author didnt even give an idea about using own pills. Mc lvl ups every 3 to 6 years and there are no friends. close door cultivation. somehow he requires some spirit coins to level up faster, so he goes out for selling pills and getting money. Whatever I wrote here is all the story how goes. If you want to read / follow the process up to you. Byeee
Should change the name of this book to: "I locked the chapters early so people won't read it, so nyah nyah nyah!"
Revelar Spoiler Amazing story although theres much more to do and to see. I'm really excited to see how future events will occur and what will happen. I love the world building especially Great job author!
Quite good. And the character is quite fun. even though there is no romance until chapter 100
Skill: learning for the first time/first glimpse of the door/entering the hall/understanding/mastery/reach the pinnacle Cultivation technique: introduction/skillful/proficient/attention to detail/perfect
Revelar Spoiler I changed my mind I had given it 3 stars before but this is hot garbage as i read more raws. Author keeps making new enemies out of thin air, snatches away MC s things to make it look fair including opportunities and sorts and lots of consistency issues. If anyone has read gate of good fortune they will know what i am talking about
Cliche master, master of all cliches. All the cliches that I don't like Mc transmigrates☑️ finds out he'll be kicked out of the sect if he doesn't ...☑️ Struggles but fails ☑️ gets a panel\ golden finger ☑️ ergo the training montage ☑️ gets super strong and skilled and comes back better than before☑️ also, he just has characteristics that I don't Super naive super kind super polite and amiable I mean you're in a ruthless cultivation world. Sooner or later it will backfire. He's just so easily targeted all the time. And his "friends" Target him too.
The translation quality ruins the entire novel because the names and ranks are constantly changing to the point I'm not sure what is what
I really like the concept,and the translation also improves quite a bit after the first 10-15 ch.
The story was engaging with all language and description that wasn't too 'filler' or exaggerated. I love that the women character wasn't described weirdly like monsters, compared to other author. The plot also clear and fighting scene was amazing. Like other author, always cut the fighting scene in between with unnecessary description of all detailed explanation which sometimes irks me. Plus, his character was sometimes too naive and sometimes too ruthless. He only learn disguise after twice almost died. Despite all assassination, he keep being careless and all the time was stalked and killed. His ability totally get useless after few fight/usage. And i also get bit annoyed when mc decided to find his prospective dao partner whom been missing for years during critical junction where he gonna upgrade to Golden Core. He already aware of all those many assassins and bad people targeting to kill him but still carelessly going out for plot purpose. Also he noticed that the tribulation definitely happen during these time, the probability was high and definitely not right timing to start dao partner thingy. It's bit stupid. Overall, it's good read but could be more perfect. I like it.