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dont drop it , its one of good Warhammer fanfics ..,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,........
This is an amazing story that I believe show a good scenario where Saiyans grow up in the Warhammer 40k universe. The MC is not even the strongest Saiyan in the story, but that just makes it more believable.
Qué puedo decir sus personajes son Por lo menos interesantes La forma en la que escribe el mundo es digna de ver y lo más importante su protagonismo no me quiero sacar los ojos cuando leo sus interacciones con sus pensamientos en este sitio web es decir mucho lo único malo son sus actualizaciones
I’ve read till chapter 41 and I have to say this book is boring. Characters are OP from the start and there’s nothing that can stop them.
was good, great even though after some point it has AI slop sprinkled in. some chapters might as well be AI written later on, wouldn't recommend. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////dfsdfsdfsd fsd fsd fsdf sdgfdg dfg jkafjkahsdkaj fhalkjsdfh kasjhdf klasdjhf askjdfh askdjfh askjdfh askjsdfh aksjdfh asdfjlaskdjfklas djflkasjd flkasjf laksjdfoieuflakjlekfj
I would like to start by saying that i particularly enjoyed this story. It had it's weak point especially when the war arc happened there was heavy use of chatgpt. but since that 7 chapter part we have returned to a pretty great story with fairly good smut in-between.
I came here for the cover. Read upto 30 chapters. And stayed for the Warhammer.
i think Saiyan will download stuff into babies or something like that master roshi power level when he blew up the moon 139 they can destroy the planet when they are in ozaru
Good novel [img=update][img=recommend] my only problem is that the author changed midway the focus of the novel. But is good nonetheless. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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they forgot about the Admech and the power of imperiums ships and technology the inquisitor can flick his wrist and press a button and destroy the world or condem it in a single vox transmission. also i don't like arrogant mc. also he said that if the other saiyens kill humans and cause problems he will go rogue, and his team mates go and kill humans. and he doesn't go rogue like he said and he basically forgot. Basically Plot holes LOTS
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Nice Very Good something good to read!! Hope you don't drop this, like the other good out there.
A fantastic novel that is both loyal and holds respect for the source materials for both series borrowed from. The characters are realistic and relatable, and the readers get an actual sense of how truly dangerous the warp is. Even the grammar that needs work definitely sits at a four-star level.
I love where you're going with the story, and how the updates are constant to make the story stay on pace. Being not too fast, but not too slow to be an information dump in a chapter. In All honesty, I want to see how Ki attacks do to the daemons, or how Ki and the warp affect each other in your story.
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So far, so good. But I hope you will mark smut/lemon chapters. I am here for a good story.
Yuri in Harem ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I've never seen anything about "War Hammer", but it looks good. So far (chapter 19) it's been really good.I've never seen anything about "War Hammer", but it looks good. So far (chapter 19) it's been really good.
The cover has earned you a 5 🌟 star review lol🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠
good start.you should look into the genetor (bio admech) and the rogue trader, the mc could get himself a warrant of trade by selling some bio tech to the genetor, becoming a rogue trader would give him a certain level of independence without having to fear the imperium.
starts a little slow but picks up in my interest story progression wise well enough. I can't wait to see how interacting with the imperium goes. oh and good luck to the eldar trying to be prideful in front of planet killers.
It's a great story, and I'd love to read more. I hope you don't plan to drop it :) I've found it on Royalroad first actually, but it's one chapter shorter there, so I assume someone just copy-paste your work there. Thanks for writing it!
dont drop it , its one of good Warhammer fanfics ..,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,..........,.,........
This is an amazing story that I believe show a good scenario where Saiyans grow up in the Warhammer 40k universe. The MC is not even the strongest Saiyan in the story, but that just makes it more believable.
Qué puedo decir sus personajes son Por lo menos interesantes La forma en la que escribe el mundo es digna de ver y lo más importante su protagonismo no me quiero sacar los ojos cuando leo sus interacciones con sus pensamientos en este sitio web es decir mucho lo único malo son sus actualizaciones
I’ve read till chapter 41 and I have to say this book is boring. Characters are OP from the start and there’s nothing that can stop them.
was good, great even though after some point it has AI slop sprinkled in. some chapters might as well be AI written later on, wouldn't recommend. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////dfsdfsdfsd fsd fsd fsdf sdgfdg dfg jkafjkahsdkaj fhalkjsdfh kasjhdf klasdjhf askjdfh askdjfh askjdfh askjsdfh aksjdfh asdfjlaskdjfklas djflkasjd flkasjf laksjdfoieuflakjlekfj
I would like to start by saying that i particularly enjoyed this story. It had it's weak point especially when the war arc happened there was heavy use of chatgpt. but since that 7 chapter part we have returned to a pretty great story with fairly good smut in-between.
I came here for the cover. Read upto 30 chapters. And stayed for the Warhammer.
i think Saiyan will download stuff into babies or something like that master roshi power level when he blew up the moon 139 they can destroy the planet when they are in ozaru
Good novel [img=update][img=recommend] my only problem is that the author changed midway the focus of the novel. But is good nonetheless. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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they forgot about the Admech and the power of imperiums ships and technology the inquisitor can flick his wrist and press a button and destroy the world or condem it in a single vox transmission. also i don't like arrogant mc. also he said that if the other saiyens kill humans and cause problems he will go rogue, and his team mates go and kill humans. and he doesn't go rogue like he said and he basically forgot. Basically Plot holes LOTS
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Nice Very Good something good to read!! Hope you don't drop this, like the other good out there.
A fantastic novel that is both loyal and holds respect for the source materials for both series borrowed from. The characters are realistic and relatable, and the readers get an actual sense of how truly dangerous the warp is. Even the grammar that needs work definitely sits at a four-star level.
I love where you're going with the story, and how the updates are constant to make the story stay on pace. Being not too fast, but not too slow to be an information dump in a chapter. In All honesty, I want to see how Ki attacks do to the daemons, or how Ki and the warp affect each other in your story.
Revelar Spoiler So far, so good. But I hope you will mark smut/lemon chapters. I am here for a good story.
Yuri in Harem ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I've never seen anything about "War Hammer", but it looks good. So far (chapter 19) it's been really good.I've never seen anything about "War Hammer", but it looks good. So far (chapter 19) it's been really good.
The cover has earned you a 5 🌟 star review lol🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠 💫 ✡️ 🌟 🤩 ⭐️ 🌠
good start.you should look into the genetor (bio admech) and the rogue trader, the mc could get himself a warrant of trade by selling some bio tech to the genetor, becoming a rogue trader would give him a certain level of independence without having to fear the imperium.
starts a little slow but picks up in my interest story progression wise well enough. I can't wait to see how interacting with the imperium goes. oh and good luck to the eldar trying to be prideful in front of planet killers.
It's a great story, and I'd love to read more. I hope you don't plan to drop it :) I've found it on Royalroad first actually, but it's one chapter shorter there, so I assume someone just copy-paste your work there. Thanks for writing it!